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| The Time of the Guardians by Jackofspikes |
| Chapter: Chapter 3 |
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| Verda | 07/31/2006 10:29 pm |
| That was awesome. You're so good would not have seen that coming, even if the Sun struck the Earth. Wow. not even going to try and guess what's next. Incredible story. |
Thank you...I do love surprising people  |
| Cassie | 07/13/2006 06:46 am |
| Great chapter. |
| thank you |
| Athenewolfe | 06/29/2006 08:08 am |
Oh I love love love the actions and consequences that took place in this story! I really do
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| Thank you...I don't think enough attention was paid to these things in the actual show. |
| Cordykitten | 05/27/2006 05:21 pm |
| Ah, three years older Buffy ... so she knows a lot what happened, to Angel too. ~ So Willow caused Tara's death when resurrecting Buffy? I'm sure she didn't like to hear that. Even worse: Willow did a compulsion spell? She'll never learn.. well hopefully now. I see, it was Buffy's task to do that. No more magic for Willow, and both will leave. |
lol...enjoy  |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 03/20/2006 09:11 pm |
Holy crap and wow! Wonderful chapter!!! This was just ... LOVED IT! Probably going to hear a lot of loved it in my reviews. LOL. I'm hooked. I'm so glad that I'm reading this finished though. I would have been chomping at the bit big time for each update. LOL.
A couple things from a beta point of view ... a couple tense mix ups, but nothing huge. Heck I wouldn't have even noticed if I hadn't been working on beta'ing other things right before I started reading this. I'm the first one to step up and say my fics have typos, etc even after all the times I go through them. I still go back through them now and change (and reupload to my site) them. Heck, I hate getting all the commas in their right places. It drives me nuts. Just thought I'd let you know for later, if you wanted to go back at all. |
| Oh I will...and thanks I love constructive critisim...it really does help! |
| Athenewolfe | 03/11/2006 10:15 am |
| oMG What a freaking amazing twist! I love the true motives of the pair. Xander still wants to date Buffy, Willow not wanting the responisbility - the two of them putting compulsion spells on Anya and Tara - OMG This is freaking amazing! |
| Thank you...I never believed Tara would be a part of the resurrection spell any other way! |
| Delicia | 03/02/2006 01:40 pm |
| Ha! I so didn't see that coming. Well done!! |
| thank you |
| jl1980 | 02/25/2006 07:50 am |
| wow...go buffy...i am floored...buffy in the show was never so intelligent as this buffy...lol...i have kind of mixed feelings about willow and xander being dumped, but you know, they sooo deserve it!! on to the next chapter, this one was incredible!! |
| wow...you really are catching up on your reading! lol |
| Oracleholly | 02/21/2006 09:40 am |
| So, I'm browsing through the recently updated stories & since I've not been online hardly at all recently I missed the first chaps. I am so glad that I clicked on this one to read in the limited time I have today. Have enjoyed the chaps leading up to this one.... and phenom! dismissal of Willow and Xander from Buffy's home - I'm thinking from her life will be not so complete. Love how you pulled in Wes, Cordy and Lorne. Okay, so now off to read the rest of what you've posted. |
Glad you're enjoying it...I could say I'm just returning the favour as I've enjoyed so many of yours.
ok ok I'm stingy...I only have the one! |
| Bigbird | 02/18/2006 05:15 am |
| Yeh got rid of Xander!!! I cant wait to see what you do with this story... never could understand why Buffy didnt just smack the little prig for his self rightousness in the first place! *happy dance* |
| I am surprised at the amount of people who are happy to see the Xander-slapdown! LOL |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 02/17/2006 09:03 pm |
| Always hated those twerps.... |
| lol |
| Irene | 02/17/2006 08:34 pm |
| I can't believe how self surving Willow and Xander are. Of course that totoally fits intot their characters. I so can not wait for the next chapter. More Please |
| lol...its coming |
| katakata | 02/17/2006 07:19 pm |
| Darn...a new broom sweeps clean they say and WOW is Buffy making some sweeping changes! Imagine a season 6 without Willow or Xander ~eyes glaze over with the thought~. Well actually I guess we don't have to imagine it cause it's the premise here and I am SOOO looking forward to where you might be able to take it. More soon please 8-) |
| Thanks, but to coin a phrase ...you ain't seen nothing yet! |
| katakata | 02/17/2006 07:16 pm |
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| again, thanks |
| letitia | 02/17/2006 07:03 pm |
| WOW is all I can say about the dismissal... Great Buffy.... Love the update. If only she could have done this during the show. |
| Me too...hence the story! lol |
| vladt | 02/17/2006 06:53 pm |
| absolutely wonderful update. thanks |
| Thankx heaps |
| spikes slayer2 | 02/17/2006 06:26 pm |
| oh my.. i love this story!!! please update soon!!! its excellent!!!! |
| Thank you, and tomorrow I promise. |
| pfeifferpack | 02/17/2006 04:48 pm |
Whoa! Kick ass Buffy comes out punching! Didn't see her cutting off WIllow and Xander that's for sure. Great start.
Interested in seeing where this goes. Buffy post NFA in the S6 world....hum she lost Spike twice, maybe she's not too interested in losing him a third time.
Kathleen |
| You'd be right...Shh don't tell anyone, but that's what I'm working on as we speak! |
| daisy | 02/17/2006 02:57 pm |
| wow. awsome writting. can't wait to see what happens next. more soon please |
| Thank you sooo much. I try to update daily. |
| Kim | 02/17/2006 01:29 pm |
| OMG. I just read this and I love it. I can't wait to read more. Update soon please! |
| Glad you're enjoying it, and I'll try. |
| Jace Nox | 02/17/2006 01:24 pm |
*shocked into silence* ah.ah.wow.
*back to shocked silence with nefty wide eyes added to the effect.*
Jace. |
| Uh...thanks???...I think? |
| gotkona | 02/17/2006 01:17 pm |
| Wow just found this and I am hooked. Can't wait for you to update. |
| I try to update daily, and I'm glad you like it. |
| jamie | 02/17/2006 12:28 pm |
| oh this is getting good, i cant wait for the next one, go buffy! |
| Only getting???? sob sob sob |
| MARGARET | 02/17/2006 10:08 am |
| YEA ZANDER GETS HIS JUST DESSERTS AND WILLOW CAN'T HURT ANYONE EVEN THOUGH I KIND OF LIKE THEM BOTH, I LOVE YOUR NEW IMPROVED BUFFY! KEEP UP T EGOOD WORK CAN'T WAIT TO SEE MORE |
| Thank you and I'll try. |
| MarzBar | 02/17/2006 09:57 am |
| Yikes! Impressive beginning! I wonder what the price is for Willow's interference in the balance. More story please. |
| Um...her magic! |
| kim | 02/17/2006 09:45 am |
| I'm going to guess that maybe Spike left Buffy some info on his money when he died in the Hellmouth? That could have easily been in his bag of stuff on the bus. He'd want her and Dawn taken care of, so it's likely that he put her name as his beneficiary in case he didn't make it out. |
Sorry, nothing so noble. Remember the Powers showed her everything? That means they showed her every little effulgent thing!
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| k | 02/17/2006 09:14 am |
| Wow..Go Buffy! |
| You ain't seen nuthin' yet! lol |
| ello | 02/17/2006 09:11 am |
| I take it that there are some differences in how things happened in the future since Spike's money never came up in the series. |
| I'll try to remember to explain about that, but it will be later in the story. |
| Pulchra Nex | 02/17/2006 08:42 am |
| oooh! a whole new look at things! love it! please update soon? pretty please? |
| I trying to update daily, I hope thats fast enough! lol |
| Bernardette | 02/17/2006 08:23 am |
| Wow the ending has a twist. I can't believe she told willow and Xander to leave. I just love General Buffy. I can't wait to see what she asks of Spike. I wonder if she will ask him to go get his soul or will she give it to him. Can't wait for the next chapter. Love this story. |
| Who said anything about a soul? |
| Pin | 02/17/2006 08:17 am |
| Neat - you have explained why Tara & Anya went along with the resurrection spell and managed to get rid of the two characters I loathed - Willow and Xander. Thank you!! Looking forward to seeing how your re-set the universe with the new and improved Buffy. |
| I'm glad you're enjoying it, thanks for your kind words |
| lilmamaday | 02/17/2006 07:28 am |
| Wow! I so wasn't expecting that! Wow! I can't wait to see what else Buffy is going to reveal and how it affects the remaining people! Please update soon! |
| Tomorrow, if I can |
| ilpopi | 02/17/2006 06:55 am |
Well. I'm not a big Xander fan and Willow can be pretty nasty in a "dark Willow" mode but that was a pretty harsh punishment.
Willow did change for the better in Season 7 and even Xander has his moments. We do not know how it went with them later but they were on the right path at the time BtVS ended. Apparently something happened during Angel season 5 that we don't know yet.
PS. Please try to avoid everything concerning the Immortal. |
You're right, Willow did change for the better in season 7, but this is the start of season 6 where she had a pretty bad year coming. It took the shock of killing a human and almost dreoying the world before she did something about her control issues. Maybe the shock she's been given in my story will help her sooner?
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| maryperk | 02/17/2006 06:10 am |
| Woah, Buffy kicked out Xander and Willow, that was unexpected. LOL Great update. |
| I do like to please! lol. Mind you, I'm thinking of putting you on the same rations as wolfie, Mary! I have addictions that need to be fed...if I tell you you inspire me to write faster, will you? |
| redwulf50 | 02/17/2006 05:38 am |
Oh yes kick the a holes out, I loves it  |
| You are on rations! No more for wolfie til my addiction gets fed! Please, please, please. |
| Irina | 02/17/2006 04:53 am |
| I just read all three chapters, and i'm really loving this story so far. Can't wait to read more! |
| Chapter 4 is with my beta, 5 is written and I'm just finishing off 6! I'll get them to you as soon as possible, but be warned this is shaping up to be longer than I anticipated. |
| SpaceLord | 02/17/2006 04:48 am |
| Ohh harsh with the Willow and Xander happening there....but I like it, it will be fun to read the rest I think. What about Angels motives? I'm assuming that they are bad since he's not invited to the party |
| We will definitely hear from and see the broody one in the future! |
| spikeslovebite | 02/17/2006 04:33 am |
| LOVE IT!! Scoobie comeuppance!! Oh that is SOO delicious! |
| I'm hoping for a Spike smackdown for Xander...but I'll have to see where the story takes me. Side bar note: Scoobie comeuppance is very much a stress reliever! |
| Always_jbj | 02/17/2006 04:24 am |
| Oh I LIKE this Buffy!!! I'm really enjoying this, I love the plot and look forward to future updates! Thank you. |
| She's feisty, isn't she! |
| kim | 02/17/2006 04:04 am |
| Oh my gosh!!! Wow, that's....wow. Way to go with holding everybody accountable. I'm guessing there won't be the Slayer power sharing spell now, since they want to take on the First before it has a chance to gain power. Hmmm, this is the beginning of Season 3 of AtS, so Connor will be born in a couple months. They have a lot to be prepared for to keep Angel from screwing up, and Cordy from being possessed. |
| Thanks...you may have a couple of surprises waiting for you! lol |
| Weaver | 02/17/2006 03:53 am |
| Harsh, but I like it. |
| Thank's...next chapter's a bit lighter! |
