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| The Time of the Guardians by Jackofspikes |
| Chapter: Chapter 4 |
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| Verda | 07/31/2006 10:45 pm |
| Those last three lines were perfect! You worded each so perfectly that we know who said each and every one of them. Wes, Giles and Spike. Glad that the girls are staying with Buffy, they definately deserve better than what they got. Another amazing chapter, thanks ever so. |
Yes the brits are easy to seperate  |
| Cassie | 07/13/2006 06:55 am |
| Great chapter |
| thank you |
| Athenewolfe | 06/29/2006 08:14 am |
| Oh yeah - angel is delusional - great chapter! I loved the simplicity of her statements - to funny! |
| Thank you so much |
| Cordykitten | 05/27/2006 05:35 pm |
| I wonder what Lorne saw when he read Buffy... *gg* I thought that Dawn would love to hear that Buffy will be with Spike, even if it is only for the night. And he has a really comfy bed. ;-) Good that Buffy thought of it (letting Spike bring it). And Dawn had to tease Spike ~ oh yeah, now I have an inkling what Lorne may have seen. |
Keep going...cave spike will make an appearance  |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 03/20/2006 09:15 pm |
| ROFL ... those last lines of Oh My, Good Lord, and Bloody Wanker were priceless. I can just see it all. So perfect! |
| thank you sooo much |
| Athenewolfe | 03/11/2006 10:21 am |
| Wonderful chapter and update - chapter four and I am already hooked... I so hope i can finish this before dinner or I will be antsy all night. LOL I love the dismasall of Willow and Xander. That completly rocked! The welcoming of Anya and Tara were absolutly brilliant! Loveley - the whole quick list of problems was brilliant as well. Loveley lovely story! |
| Thank you so much |
| Delicia | 03/02/2006 01:52 pm |
| Wonder what Lorne saw? And Cordelia is so funny!! Great chapter! |
| Lorne saw the same things that anyone who watched the show did...thus the need to change it |
| Jessica | 02/25/2006 11:34 pm |
| "...and Angel’s egocentric belief that he can take on the armies of the senior partners of Wolfram and Hart with three warriors and a dying human.” Buffy has seen the light! lol I already love this story. Can't wait to read what you already have. |
| glad you are enjoying it! |
| jl1980 | 02/25/2006 07:55 am |
| lol...i love her explanation of the problems they'll have to face...i love the reactions of the three british guys...lol...(all of whom i always loved anyway)... ... and i love your dawn...you know, i pretty much just love this story!! |
| I'm blushing here...thank you |
| Jace Nox | 02/19/2006 12:19 am |
*grins like a kindergarter* I LOVED it. I can't wait to read more. yay yay yay...*bounces excitedly and waits*
Jace |
| Thank you...gotta say I love the reactions I'm getting! |
| spikes slayer2 | 02/18/2006 10:22 pm |
| oooh.. i like this.. but what did buffy want from spike? has she asked him yet? |
| Hold your horses woman! lol...we'll get there (evil grin) |
| romero | 02/18/2006 08:22 pm |
| I love this story and am looking forward to the nest update. |
| Thank you....I'll try to make it soon. |
| vladt | 02/18/2006 04:50 pm |
| great update, especially love the anding. thanks for the fine read. |
| I'm glad you're enjoying it. and thank you |
| jamie | 02/18/2006 01:57 pm |
| great chapter, its getting better and better |
| Thank you sooooo much. |
| Nova | 02/18/2006 01:46 pm |
| Cool, I hope you keep it up. Very interestin and original. |
| Thank you |
| UncagedMuse | 02/18/2006 01:23 pm |
| Great chap! Like it a lot. |
| Thankx of the muchness |
| lilmamaday | 02/18/2006 01:02 pm |
I love how she makes it all sound so simple when she explains what the 2 groups are up against! If only she had come back w/this knowledge in the series........(stares dreamily out into space)......that would have been great!
I always did think that Xander had to have said something to Anya about the gang putting up w/her just b/c she was w/him! She was always so dependent on him and I think it will be great to see her grow as her own person w/her friends behind her. Same w/Tara. I wonder how the 2 banished Scoobies are going to deal w/their respective others decisions! Please update soon! |
| I still trying to decide if i'll address the issue of hoe Willow and Xander cope with the changes. We'll just have to see how it goes. |
| MarzBar | 02/18/2006 12:46 pm |
| Yay for dumping Xander and Willow. They really were a hindrance more than a help toward the end. Maybe their lives will be better as normal people. More story please. |
| LOL, I'll do my best! |
| Pulchra Nex | 02/18/2006 12:13 pm |
| oooh Loved that last line! ;-) And I love the 'new and improved' Buffy! she's great! |
Thanks, I'm going for a cool last line to end every chapter from now on! Let me know what you think.
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| letitia | 02/18/2006 11:50 am |
| I am just glad that now that Tara and Anya know the WHOLE truth with whom they were with, they are part of the real gang. And wonder what Spike is going to do when he finds Buffy in his bed??? Love the update. |
They should always have been treated as part of the gang rather than the fringe dwellers!
Finds her? What makes you think his not gonna put her there! lol |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 02/18/2006 11:16 am |
lol, last line was awesome... and gawd, can i hate xander any more? i think not
now get to the splainy about spike and buffy!! i have been waiting for like 3 chappies!! |
| ROFL...sorry 'bout that. I suppose you don't to heare that Buffy plans to explain about her and Spike at the end of the meeting????lol |
| Pin | 02/18/2006 10:55 am |
Continue to love this story. It's like Buffy is on hyperdrive and taking eveyone with her! Great fun for all.
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| Yep...and she's takeing no prisoners! |
| daisy | 02/18/2006 10:16 am |
| can't wait to see how this turns out. more soon please |
I try for daily update, so I hope thats soon enough.
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| pfeifferpack | 02/18/2006 10:04 am |
Great description of season 4 and 5 of Angel ...:::snort:::...
I've been thinking of this story (yup....it's been in the back of my mind, so see the power of the written word!) and wondering if the post Chosen Willow and Xander knew about Spike's return to LA and kept it from her and that might be why she is so unforgiving of them, having lost Spike that second time. I'll wait and enjoy however you write it mind you...just thinking out loud.
So glad you've been bitten by the fic bug! You have genuine talent and an inventive plot. I am enjoying this one tremendously.
Well done.
Kathleen |
Thank you, I must say that I love everything that you've written too.
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| Karyn | 02/18/2006 09:57 am |
| rofl, i just loved that last part! great update! |
| Thanks. I'm trying to add a little humor to it. |
| spikeslovebite | 02/18/2006 09:21 am |
| fast paced and attention getting! loved it! |
| Thank you. I'm starting to feel like its running away from me though...Damn things taking on a life of its own! |
| Lou | 02/18/2006 08:44 am |
| This is shaping up very nicely. Field Marshall Buffy is a whole new concept. |
| We will get to see, Babbling Buffy, Blond-Moment Buffy, Spoilt-Brat Buffy and Bitchy Buffy in coming chapters! lol |
| dihcar | 02/18/2006 08:14 am |
intresting, i hope that angel gets a smackdown from either buffy or spike. I had no sympathy for angel that his son was kidnapped, the only ones i felt sorry for were conner(innocent baby) and wesley(misguided man trying to do the right thing). Angel did alot worse against holtz then holtz against him.
seeya |
| Trust me when I say that Angel will receive EXACTLY the treatment he deserves! (evil grin) |
| SpaceLord | 02/18/2006 07:57 am |
| Yeah Angel sure did let the hair gel seep into his brain I think |
| Angel had a brain??!!!??? (jack reals back in surprise) |
| kim | 02/18/2006 07:42 am |
"'Bloody wanker'" LOL!!!
Okay, so far going as I expected. More soon, please! |
| Guess I'm gonna have to mix things up then...'cause I soooo hate to do the expected! lol |
| katakata | 02/18/2006 07:21 am |
| Loved the ending to this chapter...brevity is such an underrated gift and I guess our brit boys have it in spades, LOL! I'm so glad Buffy's going to be able to do something about saving Cordy too - she wasn't my favourite character on early BtVS and she pissed me off on AtS early on too but jeez I missed Charisma's bolshie presence after she left, and Angel's apparent ability to reconcile himself to her loss just reiterated to me how much of a tosser he really was. Ok, rant over - looking forward to Buffy putting the smackdown on some more of the characters we knew and loved (or in some cases just barely tolerated)! |
| I find the smakedowns are good for my soul! lol |
| Irina | 02/18/2006 07:15 am |
| Loved the chapter! Especially the great dialogue between the characters. And I never would've guessed Spike was the male version of Martha Stewart. |
| LOL, Seriously, can you think of anything the gorgeous thing couldn't do! lol |
| maryperk | 02/18/2006 06:24 am |
| Great chapter. I hated the way the show made Anya into an idiot. She would have had alot of demonic knowledge and they should have used her character better. My husband is coming home today for a couple of days. I don't seem to get much writing done when he's around, so my chappys might see the light of day until he leaves again. |
I agree, Anya was definately an untapped resource.
O.K. (grumble, bitch, snarl) I'll wait!
lol |
| Shelly | 02/18/2006 06:15 am |
| This fic has such a unique twist on Buffy coming back. I was doing the happy dance when she kicked out Willow and Xander, and now with the LA crew there and all of them knowing how Angel has such a big ego that will destroy them. I can't for more updates!! |
| Thank you. But be prepared for some more of bitchslap Buffy! lol |
