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| Future Imperfect by Lilachigh |
| Chapter: Chp 1 |
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| Verda | 07/22/2006 07:20 pm |
| Very, very interesting. Going to try and get caught up tonight. Thanks for the read. |
| wall_flower | 04/01/2006 09:32 am |
| Cute and subtly awesome :]:] loved it |
| romero | 03/14/2006 09:09 pm |
| This is a great one shot. It gave a nice glimpse into Buffy and Spike's future and what could be. |
| Delicia | 03/13/2006 01:45 pm |
| I'm intrigued! What's going on? reading on...(dashes off) |
| lilmamaday | 02/24/2006 09:18 am |
| Cute story! It would be interesting to see what would happen next! Could Granny and Grandad control the lil hellions? |
| Well, Granny and Grandad won’t be as old as people keep thinking they will be, so I’m expecting all sorts of trouble! |
| Thianna | 02/24/2006 07:36 am |
| That was really good. |
| Suzanne | 02/23/2006 05:09 pm |
| I totally agree with you! this must be a really long fic!!! |
| Glad you liked it. Am thinking about continuing. |
| letitia | 02/23/2006 08:05 am |
| Now that was just a great story. And leave it to Spike and Buffy to have a family that just continued to grow in "their" old world. Loved the story. |
| Glad you enjoyed it. Will be writing continuation soon. |
| Lou | 02/23/2006 07:07 am |
| Aaaah - sweet. |
| Isabel | 02/23/2006 05:28 am |
| This is great. I'm already loving Joyce. I like that she's more like Buffy and Billy is more like Spike. And they named their daughter Shanshu? How cool is that? lol Love it. |
| Thanks for review. Yes, I reckon I will write the rest of this very soon. Shanshu had a very difficult childhood! |
| Weaver | 02/23/2006 04:11 am |
| This is lovely, and I didn't have and trouble understanding it. Subtle and charming. |
| Thanks for review. So pleased you understood it. I keep rereading first chp and can’t see what people find hard, except for lack of first names, perhaps. Next chp will be easier. Promise. |
| Morrigan | 02/23/2006 03:14 am |
Hmm... So, Spike got the Shansu, and now they have grandkids. Interesting. I wonder if they stay old? Or maybe this is going to be like a story, they tell their grandkids about. This is different, and now, I'm curious.  |
| Well, I’ll hopefully get to next chp soon and asuage your curiosity. |
| Spikes Slayer2 | 02/22/2006 11:16 pm |
| huh? great story.. i think it would make a good longer story so that we can see how all this happened.. little bt confusing at the end but otherwise quite good.. |
| pfeifferpack | 02/22/2006 09:55 pm |
Tee hee...well no wonder their daughter's pissed with a name like that! LOL! Oh yes, this deserves continuation and then some. Nicely done.
Kathleen |
| vladt | 02/22/2006 09:14 pm |
| excellent standalone or excellent first chapter.thanks for the fine read. |
| Thanks for reviewing. Think I will write on. The plot suddenly exploded in my head. Messy! |
| ct114 | 02/22/2006 08:33 pm |
| OK???? intersting. i would like to see this go further yet it could say like this. |
| Thanks for review. This started as a one off, but now the plot is begging to be written. |
| Time of Change | 02/22/2006 08:12 pm |
| Very interesting. I'm thinking Shashu broke her parents' hearts with her dream of being normal. |
| Glad you liked it. You’re quite right. There is a lot of explaining to do but in Buffy’s case, I think it’s a case of deja vu! |
| MarzBar | 02/22/2006 07:09 pm |
| Huh? The narrative from the little witch was interesting but there certainly could be more. How would you get Spike and Buffy into this fic? |
| Don’t worry. It will be very Spuffy but with a certain amount of angst as well. |
| Robyn | 02/22/2006 06:46 pm |
| I like. More please. |
| Glad you liked it. Will write new chp soon. |
| maryperk | 02/22/2006 06:38 pm |
| Cool |
| Thanks for review |
