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| Your Heart Will Lead You Home by The Space Between |
| Chapter: When a Stranger Calls |
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| Nikkole | 07/26/2006 05:02 pm |
| Ft Lauderdale huh? Cool! |
Eh, why not? Go from one sunny place to another. That and FL is filled to bursting with toursits and immigrants in addition to all of the 'locals'.
Easy pickings for hungry demons and vampires. ^^ |
| jl1980 | 05/08/2006 06:23 pm |
hmmm...very intriguing start...read more later  |
| fallen_angel | 03/02/2006 05:46 am |
| it's getting intresting so i'll rush to the next chapter. found a beta yet cos i'd luv to do it. never done it before but if you're interested, contact: crazy-insane-girl@hotmail.com |
If youre still wanting to beta, by all means
My email is DesiHannagan@msn.com |
| vladt | 02/28/2006 07:35 pm |
| definitely a grabber of a beginning. thanks for the read. |
| happy to oblige |
| PyroChilde | 02/28/2006 05:38 am |
Wow, this is a twist I haven't seen anywhere else yet, Hank Summers suddenly showing an interest. Interesting start, you've got me hooked. Update soon, I'd definitly like to see where this one is going.
*Oh, one quick thing, the epilogue thing threw me a bit. Is that supposed to be prologue? |
lol jbj said the same thing.
I used an epilogue because it was the end of Chosen. Since that story was over, I used the ending to lead into a brand new story. Sorry if it's confusing everyone 
And yeah...Hank's been a busy, busy boy. |
| Always_jbj | 02/27/2006 10:44 pm |
Really interesting start! I look forward to reading more.
Just one thing... do you mean prologue? An epilogue comes at the end of a story... not the begining. |
I figured that was going to throw everyone off a tad.^^
I put the very beginning of this story as an epilogue. It was the end of Chosen so I used it to lead into a whole new story.
Hmm...maybe I should just go ahead and make it a prologue...
...aaaaaanyhooo...more to come^^ |
| spikeslovebite | 02/27/2006 07:47 am |
| hmmm don't like this dreyfuss fellow. buffy's father paying attention so suddenly is a little hinky too. i like what you've started with and hope to see more soon |
Thanks! ^^ This story is going to hopefully take you all on a mad mad rollercoaster ride. So sit back and hang onto your socks! More soon.
~Desi |
