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| A Grain of Sand by Always_jbj |
| Chapter: Chapter 9 |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 03/23/2006 02:41 am |
| Buffy blustering with the rooms comment ... too cute. You know those two are probably going to end up in the same room ... at least I hope they do ... even if it is only for the comfort of being near each other. Loved the update, and I look forward to more. |
Thank you!
LOL... you may very well be right about those sleeping arrangements *wink*
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| Richard | 03/21/2006 04:55 pm |
| This is a wonderful story with a great premise. I hope you continue it. |
| Thank you. i am glad you like it. I will be continuing all my wips once I have finished my reading for judging... unfortunately at the moment the considerable volume of reading I am having to do doesn't allow time for writing as well. |
| Robyn | 02/27/2006 02:05 am |
| Thanks for the update, it was interesting to see how things could have been different in Chosen. I like the details that make each dimension different. |
| Thank you. Yes, little changes in what happened in each dimension can make a BIG difference to what WILL happen. I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
| MarzBar | 02/27/2006 12:19 am |
| Hmmmm. It seems to me that it would be really stupid to sleep apart from Spike. They need to be together when the amulet lights up again. More story please. |
| Well, they only need to be near each other... it's not an instantaneous thing... and it doesn't actually transport them until they activate it... the only reason for the rush when it starts to glow is to follow Dawn as quickly as possible. Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
| vladt | 02/26/2006 10:14 pm |
| good update. glad we appear to be stopping in one spot for a pause to refresh. love the story. thanks |
| Thank you! They certainly could do with a breather, couldn't they?! |
| lilmamaday | 02/26/2006 08:40 pm |
| Cute! I am surprised that Spike didn't pipe up and say A room! I like how you used the events from Chosen but switched them around in this dimension, could it be that they will be spending some time here? Please update soon! |
LOL... he didn't need to say anything... I'd say his snorts alone were quite sufficient to make Buffy turn bright red! I'm glad you enjoyed it.. and it is amazing what a difference Spike's absence from the battle and the days preceding it made to the outcome... not only to the battle itself but to Buffy... In 'Touched' he gave her the confidence in herself that she carried with her into that battle, and that was what she needed in order to pull herself up after the sword to the gut and keep fighting.
Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying this story. |
| Karyn | 02/26/2006 04:44 pm |
| great update! wow, great job fleshing out the details of some of the dimensions! |
| Thank you! Yes, some dimensions will be flying visits.. others will be longer and more detailed. |
| gaillee | 02/26/2006 04:37 pm |
| Fine update. Looking forward to seeing what they will learn from being in this dimension. Thanks. |
| Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the update. |
| redwulf50 | 02/26/2006 04:26 pm |
LOL, rooms *smirk* give it up Buffy  |
| LOL... grow up, pup! Thanks for reviewing, sweetness! |
| jl1980 | 02/26/2006 02:42 pm |
are they gonna be in this world for a while? that could be cool...i am very much enjoying this story, so many different possibilities!!  great job |
| Thank you... they will definitely be in some of the dimensions for longer... but it would take all the fun out of it if I was to tell you which ones! lol. I am glad you are enjoying the fic. *sigh* It WAS supposed to be a short over in 10 chaps fic... *kicks muse* |
| kim | 02/26/2006 01:42 pm |
| Ooooh, alternate glimpse into the future! This will be handy when they get back to their own time, and all. |
| Thank you! It MIGHT come in handy... but then that future may not happen... afterall they are changing events just by going on this journey. *the mind boggles* |
