Something to Sing About by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 5 Taking Over
 
sirc03/02/2006 05:33 am
I have some ideas on the baby, but I'll wait for you to give more hints. Great chapter
First hint in next chpt!
Robyn03/02/2006 05:08 am
I really like that Buffy is recognizing how she feels, but that the way you have her doing it doesn’t feel forced or out of character. I loved her actions in Willie’s, intimidate then ask the questions, and Spike watching her back and complaining about the wasted beer. You do a great job of using little things that make the characterization feel right for the time frame of the story.
Thanks a million for such a kind review. Nice to know you think I’m getting close to the right characterizations.
Lou03/02/2006 03:54 am
Let's hope they can keep the feelings this time!
MarzBar03/01/2006 09:22 pm
This universe has gotten pretty yucky. Finding a baby and getting said baby away from a hell god seems to be the thing to do now. More story please.
vladt03/01/2006 07:49 pm
very good read. thanks
Thank you for reading.