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| Something to Sing About by Lilachigh |
| Chapter: Chp 5 Taking Over |
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| sirc | 03/02/2006 05:33 am |
| I have some ideas on the baby, but I'll wait for you to give more hints. Great chapter |
| First hint in next chpt! |
| Robyn | 03/02/2006 05:08 am |
| I really like that Buffy is recognizing how she feels, but that the way you have her doing it doesn’t feel forced or out of character. I loved her actions in Willie’s, intimidate then ask the questions, and Spike watching her back and complaining about the wasted beer. You do a great job of using little things that make the characterization feel right for the time frame of the story. |
| Thanks a million for such a kind review. Nice to know you think I’m getting close to the right characterizations. |
| Lou | 03/02/2006 03:54 am |
| Let's hope they can keep the feelings this time! |
| MarzBar | 03/01/2006 09:22 pm |
| This universe has gotten pretty yucky. Finding a baby and getting said baby away from a hell god seems to be the thing to do now. More story please. |
| vladt | 03/01/2006 07:49 pm |
| very good read. thanks |
| Thank you for reading. |