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| Cycle of Rebirths by weyrwolfen |
| Chapter: Mortal Enemies |
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| Niamh | 07/08/2006 10:12 pm |
| And the juxtaposition of their unfolding stories is wonderfully crafted. There's no hesitation, no misstep, notthing out of place. This is how to write stories. |
| I can't begin to tell you how flattered I am by this post. I love your fics, so this means a lot to me. Thank you! |
| wall_flower | 03/04/2006 11:52 am |
| Oh I LOVE it- that's so perfect! And I also think the way you have the past running backwards and the present running forwards is a really inspired idea that gives the fic something really interesting and different. This story truly is amazing. I love it :]:] |
| When I was outlining this story, I was so worried that the seperate timelines, with one running backwards, would really throw people. I'm always happy to hear otherwise. Thanks! |
| vladt | 03/03/2006 05:16 pm |
| very good read. thanks. giles can be so dense. |
| For such a smart guy, yeah, Giles can be pretty clueless. Thanks for the feedback! |
| MarzBar | 03/03/2006 02:19 pm |
| I see attento-girl is still living in Egypt along with her watcher and "friends." I want Spike to go, pick up that sword and show them all who it really belongs to at this time. More story please. |
| But DeNile is such a pretty, scenic place. You won't have too long to wait for the wake-up call you're wanting. Never fear. Thanks for the review! |
| apollo | 03/03/2006 10:27 am |
one word....awesome!!!
i love japanese culture and i study the samurai. hell i even want to live in japan so this story is right up my alley. can't wait for more. |
| You'll have to catch me if I write about something blatently wrong. ;-) I'm glad you're liking it. Thanks for the review! |
