Disillusioned by Megan
Chapter: Fourteen
 
angelic_amy03/21/2006 11:02 pm
OMG wow! The fight between Buffy and Darla was awesome, and then the scene between Spike and Xander. I didn't think Spike'd do it, I really didn't.

*runs off to next chapter*
Bridget03/07/2006 10:44 am
This is really interesting. Will they able to save Jesse. I really hope not. I think Xander needs to learn that this is not the solution.
pfeifferpack03/06/2006 01:14 pm
OH oh....got a baaaaaad feeling about this choice skippy! Have a feeling that Jesse's gonna be meeting with some wood pretty quickly and everyone is going to have to see just how unique Spike is. In the meantime it could get ugly for our boy!

Great update, hon.

Kathleen
Lou03/06/2006 12:00 pm
OH NO!! Bad move, Spikey boy!
Oracleholly03/06/2006 08:58 am
WOW!!! What a great character-development chapter for Spike! Spike's perspective on Buffy's battle with Darla, Angel's weakness and cowardice toward his Sire, and then at the end, his conflict over what was the right thing to do. Excellent. The turning of Jesse by Spike... it leads one to wonder about nature vs. nuture argument. Does the fact Spike now sires Jesse mean he will be different from the way he was on the show with Darla being his Sire. Also, since it didn't happen as it did on the show, with Jesse getting his initial impressions of vampire life with Darla and the Master, would it make a difference? Would Xander be correct? *my mind boggles with the possibilities* kudos!
Athenewolfe03/06/2006 03:57 am
OMG that was really really good! I can't wait for the next chapter- I can't believe how much I am on pins and needles over this fic - Spike is turning Jessie. It is such a shock - how will everyone react to this turn of events, will jessie be like Spike or will he be overcome with blood lust? I cant wait to find out!
vladt03/05/2006 10:49 pm
really enjoy what you set up here. don't know where you are going, but i don't think spike loses. however you resolve this, i will enjoy. thanks for the fine work.
Esther03/05/2006 10:24 pm
Awww, how sad!! I hope Xander's decision doesn't kill either him or Spike in the end....a.k.a. Buffy getting pissed enough to do it. Great chapter and spectacular way of killing off Darla! Can't wait for the next one!
jl198003/05/2006 10:18 pm
wow...this is getting intense...xander actually has a bit of a point...spike is doing better at being good without a soul than angel is with...with a "good" spike as a sire, maybe jesse could stand a chance of being okay...hmmm...thought-provoking...can't wait for next update!!
UncagedMuse03/05/2006 10:12 pm
OMG! I didn't see that one coming! MAGNIFICENT CHAP!
MarzBar03/05/2006 08:08 pm
OMG! Noooooo! I wish Spike had made Buffy decide. WTF will he do now when Jesse turns into a monster? More story please.
Robyn03/05/2006 07:38 pm
Really great story, I love that Buffy and now Xander have accepted Spike for who he is. Looking forward to where this goes.
SpaceLord03/05/2006 07:18 pm
Well this is certanly an interesting twist. Should be fun to read how Jesse turns out, I mean he would probably have to do what his Sire tells him so will that make him good? Or is his human side just too weak and he gets all taken over by the demon? A lot of questions there.
lilmamaday03/05/2006 06:13 pm
Uh oh! Spike should learn to listen to those warning bells! Buffy is going to be so pissed if she has to stake Jessie! Yay! Darla is dead! Too bad Angel isn't......Please update soon!
Karyn03/05/2006 06:13 pm
omg, he's actually gonna do it?...wow! great update!
redwulf5003/05/2006 06:11 pm
God, poor Spike, can we dust Angelnow??