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| Longer, Then Forever by Demonica Mills |
| Chapter: Chapter 14 |
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| Athenewolfe | 05/15/2006 03:14 pm |
| Oh no! Dying ... Dawn can;t be dying... runs to next chapter! |
| Spikez_tart | 04/02/2006 05:07 pm |
| she shall banish the unworthy - Brianna better be careful, under this theory, she might be the first to go. |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 03/25/2006 08:25 am |
| Oh my gosh ... The key is dying? Monks showing up ... so not of the good. Only one chapter left of the current update ... {Whimpers} |
| Spikes Slayer2 | 03/07/2006 12:48 am |
EEEEEEEKKKKKKKK!!!! OMG!?!?! dawnie? that cant be real..?! oh my god please update!!!!
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| BloodyTearsOfLife | 03/06/2006 10:35 pm |
| Oh wow! So didn't see that coming either. Damn I love this story! Great work hun, hope to see more soon! |
| rayan | 03/06/2006 06:38 pm |
WTF.....jesus... way to go with the suspence....lovin the story.
keep up the good work )) |
| Robyn | 03/06/2006 05:28 pm |
| Oh wow, this chapter was really good, I love that Spike was keeping an ‘ear’ out for everyone. I hope Dawn is going to be okay. Thank you for the update, they are always so looked forward to. |
| vladt | 03/06/2006 03:36 pm |
| awesome update. good story, terrible place to end the chapter. more, please more. thanks for the read. |
| Nikkole | 03/06/2006 03:34 pm |
| Very nice chapter, but Dawn is dying? Or the key in Dawn is dying? Either would be very bad, and I have a feeling this "friend" of Dawn's may be that goddess that she was reading about. Maybe that iswhy she wants the key? |
| Esther | 03/06/2006 02:16 pm |
| Fracking hell!! That was great! Man, I knew Brianna was bad news, but I soo didn't know the bitca was killing Dawn. Damn!! Can't wait for more!!! |
| Brittany | 03/06/2006 02:02 pm |
| WHAT!?!?!?!?! O come ON, you cant leave me hanging like this!!!! it cruel and unusual punishment!!!!! |
| Pulchra Nex | 03/06/2006 01:53 pm |
| *Aargh!* where's the rest! this isn't fair! *pout* I was completely into the story and then it was like poof! no more story! (okay so I've been listening to my sister's babbling for far too long...) hope you update soon! ;-P |
| Irina | 03/06/2006 01:15 pm |
| Whoa! Interesting revelations in this chapter. Poor Dawn, can't wait to find out if they find her in time. Great chapter! |
| PyroChilde | 03/06/2006 12:36 pm |
| Wow, Dawn's dying? I didn't see that coming. Sounds like she has some nifty powers though, if she manages to live through whatever's going on now. Love what you're doing with this story so far. I didn't expect Dawn to have such a big part, but I'm glad she does. The Key is something I always found interesting. |
| UncagedMuse | 03/06/2006 10:17 am |
| More as soon as you can. *gets on knees, begging* This was an awesome chap! I love it! |
| Nemo | 03/06/2006 09:58 am |
| Omg! Now I *really* hate Brianna! Great chap! |
| just sue | 03/06/2006 09:37 am |
Wow! This doesn't look good for Dawn...or the rest of them. Will juts have to keep my fingers crossed that they find Dawn before her 'mate' does any more damned spells.
Looking forward to more. Thanks ever so. |
| Karyn | 03/06/2006 09:23 am |
| oh wow! *insert dramatic music* great update! |
| lilmamaday | 03/06/2006 08:51 am |
| OMG! What is Brianna doing to Dawn? Do you think that she knows that Dawn is the Key? I am dying to find out if the Scoobs find her in time! Please update soon! |
| Athenewolfe | 03/06/2006 08:50 am |
| Oh my the key is dying... I must know more... this is really good! Loved it! |
| maryperk | 03/06/2006 08:11 am |
| And here we thought all the monks were dead. Awesome chappy. |
