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| The Time of the Guardians by Jackofspikes |
| Chapter: Chapter 20. |
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| Rebelbaby | 08/08/2006 01:00 pm |
| OMG I loved that fic please please please write a sequel to this fic and you are a great writer. P.S. I know that I siad please before but I am saying please again write a sequel. :-) |
| Verda | 08/05/2006 02:56 am |
| With an end like that of course we'd love a sequal but honestly with evil under control other than domestic tales, don't know what you could have to wirte about. If you do think of something, you know I will be reading it too. This has been an amazing journey and feel very fortunate to have been able to go along for the ride. I still can't believe this was your first fic. I'm so very thankful for to the people who had been reading fiction, reviewing and encouraging you. I only started reading my self late last year. Didn't even know this was out there. I'm so thankful for finishing what Joss started and sometimes doing an even better job! Love ya Jacks, looking forward to your updates with "Paradox and Penny" again from the bottom of my heart thanks! |
| Rose | 08/05/2006 12:19 am |
I loved this story! And does this review help to persuade you to write a sequel for this someday? 'Cause I would love to see what'll happen next with everything from this story.  |
| LisFayte | 07/20/2006 03:38 am |
| I absolutely adored this fic! It had the perfect balance of Fluffy Spuffy without the Sappy Spuffy. I loved all of the Angel bashing, but just one regret with this fic... not enough Riley bashing or were you saving that for the sequel I am hopeing you will write. You have written a wonderfull fic that you can be wholeheartedly proud of. |
| Thank you so much. There will definately be a sequel, in fact it has been started...I'm sorry I can't give you more info at this point |
| Cassie | 07/13/2006 07:02 am |
| great story |
| Thank you |
| Athenewolfe | 06/29/2006 08:54 am |
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhh so sweet!
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| I hope the diabetics are okay |
| redwulf50 | 06/13/2006 05:34 am |
*snorts* damn good ficcie ya evil wench  |
evil is good |
| Cordykitten | 05/28/2006 05:24 pm |
| Every hellmouth closed, that one in Sunnydale with a barrier now. Not much to too for Spike. And Joyce didn't help much, Spike panicked with or without her *gg* Now Spike will be busy again Loved this one, it was fun to read too. :-D |
| I m so glad that you enjoyed it |
| WillowofDarkness | 05/27/2006 07:09 am |
| I really enoyed this story it was interesting to see how it would play out, Buffy of the future and all. I look forward to reading more of your stories |
| Thank you...I will think about writing more then |
| Mr. Chaos | 04/19/2006 09:58 am |
I loved this story. It was a good sotry filled with twists, addressed certain things (The stupidity of the "Happy=no soul" curse the gypsies made, Dawn and the Keyness, and all the prophecies.) in a perfect, syched way.
The only sad thing is there really can't be a sequel, as you wrapped it up so well! |
| Oh they haven't covered everything, I think I can still find enough to write a sequel |
| Bookchick of the Novel Clan | 04/17/2006 12:42 am |
| I really don't know what to say, I read the whole thing in one sitting, and you are amazing. This is a true piece of genius. I laughed, cringed, sighed, and then laughed some more. I can not believe it was your first fic. In all my years of reading fic I have not come across a first time writer with so much talent. You are to be commended for a story that captivates the reader till the end! Simply supurb. |
| Thank you so much...you just made my day |
| Emilee | 04/13/2006 11:40 pm |
| Please, oh please, oh please write a sequel!!! |
| It us under discussion, but we'll have to see...time permits and all that |
| Emilee | 04/13/2006 11:39 pm |
| Awesome! Better then a wet dream. You fixed every problem Joss ever created. Thank you sooo much |
| It was my first attempt at a fanfic...I may have been a little generous with the plot bunnies! |
| Claddagh | 04/02/2006 03:46 pm |
| I really like this story, I just hope you do a sequel someday. |
| LOL...let me finish it first! |
| Pramen | 03/30/2006 04:50 am |
| This story was really nice! I can´t believe it's your first fic! |
| Thank you, I'm very proud of it. Yes it is true, this is the first story I've ever written. |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 03/20/2006 10:34 pm |
| Excellent story from start to finish. There are other similar starting point stories, but you made yours very unique and entertaining. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Very well done. |
| I'm so glad you liked it...I can't tell you what that means to me. |
| Mary | 03/13/2006 05:44 pm |
| Fun!Fic! Thanks. This made me laugh out loud more than once. You got to fix everything, give a few people a bit of a put down (there was no Riley bashing, though -- what was up with THAT?), create a future for Buffy & Spike and made us laugh while you did it all. This is your first fic? Entertaining and nicely done - Congratulations! |
thank you...Riley bashing will come in future fics! lol
Thank you for your kind words and yep my very first fic. |
| Kelly | 03/13/2006 05:27 pm |
| I loved it - Read it straight through - as it was complete! It held my interest, made me laugh and ...*sigh*. Your Spike was right on the mark! Sounding and acting just as I would imagine he would! Really Awesome Job!! Thanks for sharing your talent with us!! Take Care ~ Kelly |
| Thanks Kelly, it's reviews like this that take me a happy place! lol |
| CutieSaiyajin | 03/13/2006 06:32 am |
| This fic was so awesome. You should really do a sequel! |
| I'm thinking about it! lol |
| Athenewolfe | 03/11/2006 01:36 pm |
| Oh my delicious story - please do a sequal - I am worried about Dawn never having love - an immortal with a mate? How tragic! And I have to know what happens with Angel as dust and life changing for the group. Fantastic story and so happy that you wrote it! |
| Thank you...maybe a sequel |
| sirc | 03/09/2006 12:19 pm |
| This was a great story. I loved it |
| thank you, I'm glad |
| gotkona | 03/08/2006 11:49 am |
| Excellent story. I didn't realize it was your first. Great job and looking forward to your next venture. |
| Thank you so much |
| Spikes Slayer2 | 03/08/2006 05:35 am |
| is that it?!? OMG THAT WAS SOO UNBELIEVABLEY AMAZING!!!! totally great!!! i would love a sequel!! |
| thank you...and we'll see! |
| Delicia | 03/08/2006 12:07 am |
| Oh, this is definitely one of my favorites. You did an amazing job with the challenge. I hope you would consider a sequel. |
| i'm am considering! |
| Esther | 03/07/2006 11:04 pm |
| Awww, great ending!! I absolutely loved it, especially with that comment about a bigger house. Please, let there be a sequel!!! |
| thanks...and we'll see |
| Cewcew | 03/07/2006 10:47 pm |
| Loved it! Loved the ending too! grate story, cant wait to read another writen by you. |
| thank you, hopefully you won't have to wait long! |
| Darkezza | 03/07/2006 10:45 pm |
| Oh, I soooo loved this story! Please, please, please write a sequel. I really enjoyed this Buffy, the Buffy/Spike dynamic, and the take charge plot. Bravo! |
| thank you...I'm getting a few requests for a sequel! |
| Irene | 03/07/2006 10:23 pm |
| I really loved this story. I only wished that the ending had not been so abrupt, so bering that in mind please, please write a sequel. |
| lol...any more and it might have become angsy...that wasn't allowed in the challenge. I'm sorry you felt it was an abrupt ending. |
| jl1980 | 03/07/2006 09:04 pm |
| "could you write a fic?"...well this answers that question superbly...this story was incredible, and what's even more incredible is that it was your first effort???? I find that hard to believe! I loved this story and can't wait for your next one!! |
| Thank you so much, coming from someone I admire as much as i do you, that is true praise. |
| Robyn | 03/07/2006 08:03 pm |
| I really really loved this fic, the ending was great, and it’s nice to know that Mary is still fainting at the sight of Spike. That being said, I am sorry it’s done as I will miss the fun, so here’s hoping that you do decide to do a sequel. :cheer: |
| I'd like to see Mary again too! lol |
| MarzBar | 03/07/2006 06:33 pm |
| That was a wonderful, fluffy Spuffy tale. It's always good to dust Angelus and having Spike playing daddy is just too sweet. I look forward to any new story you write. |
| thank you, I hope I don't let you down! |
| lilmamaday | 03/07/2006 05:53 pm |
| You met the challenge requirements completely and in the process wrote a very entertaining and beautiful story! A sequel would be wonderful, I don't think too many of us would fight you on writing one!lol. Can't wait to see what work of art you come up with next~ |
| work of art??? lol...Thanks |
| ct114 | 03/07/2006 05:21 pm |
| Great story. Would love to see a sequel but overall, it was great. |
| still thinking about it and thanks |
| Morrigan | 03/07/2006 04:52 pm |
| So enjoyed reading this story... And, Although I agree that there was yummy angstyf potential, I thought you did a bang up job! Yay, Jack! |
| thanking you with the muchness! |
| Tamara | 03/07/2006 04:28 pm |
You can definitely write fic, damn good fic. And I'm not the only one who would love a sequel.I like Darla's actions in this. She proved herself a good parent by figuring out what was needed for her child and doing it no matter the cost to herself. Angel , on the other hand, was clueless about the danger he presented to Connor and given his total disinterest in looking for a way to anchor his soul in canon , it is unlikerly he would have figured out a solution had he realized the danger.
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| Too true |
| rayan | 03/07/2006 03:46 pm |
| loved the story...you can sooo write...*giggles*....a sequel would be awesome...but its goodj ust the way it is...good job. |
| thank you |
| AthenaHahn | 03/07/2006 03:37 pm |
| Woot!! Excellent first fic! I loved the whole thing from beginning to end. Glad you were able to fix your computer problems to post this chapter. I'm looking forward to the next story you write! |
| Thanks heaps...and you may find the next one a little more work! lol |
| vladt | 03/07/2006 03:17 pm |
| you met the challenge well. fun read. thanks |
| glad you had fun, thanks |
| UncagedMuse | 03/07/2006 03:04 pm |
Enjoyed the entire fic! Thanks for writing it.
Rae |
| Thank you |
| gaillee | 03/07/2006 02:15 pm |
| Thank you so much for a fun, fluffy Spuffy. And, yeah, I do believe you proved you can write. I, for one, would really appreciate a sequel. Thanks again for the good time I had sharing your work. I'll watch for more... |
| Thank you, you are very kind |
| letitia | 03/07/2006 02:11 pm |
| well you so don't have to worry about if you can write a fic or not. I just loved this story from beginning to end. GREAT. |
| Thank you |
| Lou | 03/07/2006 01:47 pm |
You passed your test - nicely done. My only reservation is perhaps to much happened in the last few paragraphs.
Keep up the good work. |
| Thank you |
| SpaceLord | 03/07/2006 01:32 pm |
| Well it was a nice happy story, the humour made up for the lack of angst though, at least for me. I hope for a sequel, maybe something with them doing dimension hopping. That would be fun to read I think. With alternate dimension there is a lot to play with and make use of but it would probably be darker too, seeing as they would more than likely be dispatched to worlds that have fallen into darkness. |
| or fixing those on the cusp! |
| Yzba | 03/07/2006 01:26 pm |
| You did manage to write a fic, and a good one too! I looked to see if you had updated several times a day because I am just impressed! Once again, Good job, and I can't wait to read your next fic. |
| Thank you sooo much, that is really sweet. |
| Harry 4Eyes | 03/07/2006 01:06 pm |
um...huh is this fic over? I was hoping for atleast a bit more Angel bashing or Xander making a prat out of himself trying to get back at Spike and Willow either redeeming herself or going postel or something...But most importantly seeing Andrew doing some Spike hero worshipping.
Oh well atleast we got some Angel dust, LMAO and boy how!!! pregnent women threaten bodily harm when giving birth, this has to be the first time they actually carried through with the threat...lol
Loved it
Hopefully there will be a sequel
Update soon
Harry |
| There might just be! Thank's for all your kind reviews. |
| spikeslovebite | 03/07/2006 12:30 pm |
| excellent ficcie jack can't wait to see more from you *grin* |
| Thanks, I'm working on a new one as we speak! lol |
| kimbclar | 03/07/2006 12:27 pm |
| It's over. I am so sad. I looked forward to each chapter of this fic. You can definetly write fic. I'll miss my almost daily dose of luaghter from this one you have a real talent for writing comedy. Good luck on your next attempt I'll be looking forward to reading it. |
| Thank you so much, I might try angst next! lol |
| daisy | 03/07/2006 12:20 pm |
| the answer... yes you can deffinatly write. awsome story and i can't wait to see what else you come up with |
| Thank you very much |
| Natalie | 03/07/2006 12:15 pm |
Hi
I loved this story and I hsve been reading it for a while sorry I haven't been reviewing each chap but I don't usually review wip fics. Anyway I liked how you used this challenge and the story you made. I hope you decide to write a sequel as I'd love to see how they would get along with 2 kids. |
| Why stop at two? lol...thank you |
| romero | 03/07/2006 12:15 pm |
| This is such an enjoyable story. I love how you dealt with the CoW and Quentin..so funny how Spike threatened to make flats out of the house and have demons move in. Spike has a protective nature and I can imagine him caring for Connor and wish I could read his reaction to Buffy's news!!I hope you can write a sequel to this story. |
| Thanks...I am thinking about it! |
| Karyn | 03/07/2006 12:13 pm |
| It was a great story Jack! Very different concept and it was awesome! and awwww daddy!Spike |
| lol...thanks...he is sweet |
| Irina | 03/07/2006 12:07 pm |
| Congratulations on a job well done! You told a very entertaining tale, and I enjoyed it very much. I would love to read sequel, if you decide to do one. Loved the ending! |
| thank you, I appreciate it |
| Jace Nox | 03/07/2006 12:02 pm |
squee...I loved it...LOVED it. wonderful I'm so excited, I can't wait for a single please please please. a naked chocolate spike with whipcream and a cherry if you write a sequel.
Jace |
| Jace...that does make it tempting! |
| Oracleholly | 03/07/2006 11:57 am |
| Awww.. what a sweet ending. And Darla dusting Angel, well, that certainly prevents alot of future problems. I would love a sequel (eventually) - just a look at what the Guardians are up to. Did they have a boy or a girl, or twins & how the little family is with Connor. I'm not greedy... (Yes, I am - lol). Really nice job for your first fic... you wouldn't know it was your first; it's well-plotted and well-written. *hugs* |
| thank you kindly...I had fun |
| Pulchra Nex | 03/07/2006 11:54 am |
| oooh yes! a sequel please? I really loved this story! you're a great writer! |
| thank you |
| cheekybint | 03/07/2006 11:33 am |
| what an awesome fic. you just have to write more. i sequel would be lovely but anything would do. you are an great writer. |
| Thank you...you are very kind |
| maryperk | 03/07/2006 11:33 am |
| Excellent! |
| thank you |
| Bigbird | 03/07/2006 11:29 am |
| You so can write fic... well done I enjoyed that. Will look out to see what comes next ;-) |
| Thank you so much |
| Shadow | 03/07/2006 11:29 am |
| Yummy yum yum.. worth the wait hun... *grin* Darla dusting Angel... *cheers* Daddy Spike... *smirk* he can be my daddy anytime |
| oh yeah! (jack drools) |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 03/07/2006 11:27 am |
| Ohhh I love Daddy Spike!! He's always such an overprotective doter. |
| lol...I think so too! |
