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| Blood and Fire by Addie Logan |
| Chapter: Chapter Fifteen |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 04/11/2006 11:11 pm |
| Uh oh ... Buffy ran ... I wonder what is going to happen now. Nice inner monologue with Spike in the shower. It helped to let everyone in on what is going on that Buffy doesn't realize yet about the claim. I liked that. I like how you use things to explain and further along the plot. |
| Oracleholly | 04/06/2006 03:16 pm |
| So Spike wasn't controlling her during the 'forced masterbastion' - interesting. She is living in the land of Egypt with her feelings for him. But I understand her anguish over feeling those kills of his. |
| jeanie | 03/08/2006 05:13 pm |
| at least she did not try to kill herself. |
| Athenewolfe | 03/08/2006 02:08 pm |
| sweet twist... I wonder how long until Spike caves, or until Buffy tried something truly drastic. he will kill her with his demands that she accept himself as it, I can't see her doing it as the cahracter you have written. Excellant exceallant chapter! |
| vladt | 03/08/2006 01:42 pm |
| spike's plan working as usual. good chapter. very good read. thanks |
| galatea | 03/08/2006 09:00 am |
Spike's ability to take away Buffy's free will was a red herring? BRILLIANT!!! He might share Buffy's soul as she shares his demon? SPECTACULAR!!! I love it!
Really enjoyed the Spike POV in this chapter, and how you worked the background information about claims into the story so naturally.
I hope your next update is as quick as this one - it's practically instant gratification. :-D |
| Lou | 03/08/2006 05:03 am |
| Good on ya, Buffy! |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 03/08/2006 03:15 am |
| FINALLY! Now maybe he'll stop being a git and learn his lesson! |
| Irina | 03/08/2006 03:14 am |
| Great follow-up to the previous chapter. It was interesting to get Spike's POV on things. Love the twist at end of the update. Can't wait to find out what happens when Spike gets back to the hotel. |
| SpaceLord | 03/08/2006 03:06 am |
Well this is not going too well for Spike I would say. Seems he'll be getting a soul after all  |
| McChick | 03/07/2006 10:30 pm |
Oh man... leaving the chapter like that... you are evil!! I was sooo thrilled to see another update to this chapter so soon!! I cant wait to see what is going to happen once Spike comes back and sees that Buffy had ran... ohhh yay! ahhaha
-Ashley- |
