Shades of Something Blue by spikeslovebite
Chapter: Chapters Seven ~ Nine
 
Verda07/21/2006 02:58 am
If only it had been that way in BtVS. Buffy standing up to everyone but in that 'verse, Will the Slayer still loves Buffy, Buffy the Slayer doesn't, so I'm going to enjoy this AU instead. Good for Buffy,Xander deserved alot more then a nip and a kick to his nuts. Great chapter.
angelic_amy03/26/2006 08:48 am
CH 7 - Very nice chapter with fantastically written smut! They’re getting closer with each chapter and I can’t wait to see where this story goes from here.

Ch 8 - I’m so glad that William wants his budding romance with Buffy to be kept out in the open, no hiding. It’s good. And Joyce’s compassion was amazing. As for Willow… I can’t believe she’s gone and approached Riley, this can’t be good!

CH 9 - Well, I can’t really say I feel sorry for Xander, at all. He deserves what he got. This was a fabulous chapter. Buffy realizing she can hit demons was great, and William’s concern when he found out she was in danger was sooo sweet. I’m glad Xander didn’t lie, that’s something at least.
Athenewolfe02/09/2006 04:43 am
“Speak of the devil and in walks his whore.”
- Ouch I acutally forgot how much I disliked Willow in this fic. She was sucj a *itch. Also the part about Walsh being Joyce's stepsiter was a really good touch! Are you sure Xander can't die... I mean I know the story finished - but can we kill him anyway? Trying thtat with Buffy, he deserves a bit of pain. Plus the whole Harm and him bit - ohhh how about a ficcy where Harm gave him some nasty disease ? that could be fun!