The Bloodshedverse :: Spuffy with Bite


Becoming Undone by spikeslovebite
Chapter: Chapters One ~ Four

Verda	05/26/2006 08:54 pm
OMG!!! this story is awesome!!! and a claiming story too. Angel with his original soul... priceless. Can't wait to finish it. Thanks for this story.
kind of at a bad place with this one right now, but it will come t me...they always do LOL
Robyn	04/12/2006 05:03 pm
I am really enjoying this story. I love that Willow restored Angel's original soul, which has him acting like a complete jerk, out of her being an over-achiever. I am looking forward to what will happen with this new less-improved Angel. And that Spike came back, saved Buffy, then claimed her all at the complete control of his demon. I don’t think any other proof would ever be needed at how completely he cares for her.
redwulf50	02/13/2006 03:21 pm
oh yeah, you know I love this one
spikette55	01/01/2006 10:29 am
This is really good!!! Please update soon. I love how you have Angel with his real soul, and how Buffy can see the real him. thanx luv.
slaymesoftly	11/23/2005 04:11 am
You are going to continue this, right??????
txjmfan	09/23/2005 11:38 pm
07/13/2005 @ 02:49 am Email Wow! Just wow! Wonderful chapter!
jennifer	09/23/2005 11:37 pm
07/13/2005 @ 02:25 am Email Great update! I love growly possesive/protective Spike. So very yummy
Superstes Diligo	09/23/2005 11:37 pm
07/13/2005 @ 01:59 am More! want some more updates! Love your look on things! please update soon?
mary	09/23/2005 11:36 pm
07/13/2005 @ 12:25 am WOW!!! HOT!!!! MORE!!!!! Thanks for the great story.
Esther	09/23/2005 11:35 pm
07/13/2005 @ 12:23 am Email OMG!! I think it's safe to say that that was HOT!! So glad that Spike appears in this chapter, and boy howdy, does he appear!!! And then the end...my goodness!!! I'm panting from the heat of those two, and hoping that there will be more soon....please?
redwulf50	09/23/2005 11:34 pm
07/12/2005 @ 06:17 pm Email freakin awesome chappie more please
Spike_spetslayer	09/23/2005 11:34 pm
07/11/2005 @ 07:32 pm MORE!!! that's another way of saying, very good, and would you please write a sequel?
Mariana	09/23/2005 11:33 pm
07/11/2005 @ 12:06 am Email i love this story!! all of them actually. you're such a talented writer...please please update soon...i want to know when spike is going to make his appearance...thanx!
Richard	09/23/2005 11:33 pm
07/10/2005 @ 04:46 pm Email Very nice. Very good characterization.
txjmfan	09/23/2005 11:32 pm
07/10/2005 @ 05:47 am Email Great chapter. Love Whistler and glad to see him again. Can honestly say that I don't know WTH the PTB have planned and what Spike has to do with it. You've got my curiosity peake. I'm already anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Always_jbj	09/23/2005 11:32 pm
07/10/2005 @ 02:25 am Email URL This is soo good Tam! I can't wait to see what happens with Spike... and I am dreading Willow's delusting spell... Willow's spells always seem to have a way of going so terribly wrong! Arghh...Liam! What a joy! Can't wait for the next update!
Adriana	09/23/2005 11:31 pm
07/09/2005 @ 03:29 pm Interesting turn of events. Skanky Angel (bleah!) I like the part of the overachieving best friend...heh heh heh..leave it to Willow! So...what's next???
ElizabethAnneSummers	09/23/2005 11:30 pm
07/08/2005 @ 10:06 pm Email URL LoL! Loved this update! More soon!
desertrose	09/23/2005 11:30 pm
07/08/2005 @ 05:02 pm Oh that just cracks me up! Liam in the modern world. He must be having a ball. How funny! Too bad Buffy has to put up with him. But oh boy that poor ramdom soul that was shoved in with Angelus for 100 years.
ComedyofErrors	09/23/2005 11:29 pm
07/08/2005 @ 01:39 pm Another great chapter. I like your explanantion of Angel's behavior, and it pretty much eliminates any further interest in him from Buffy. Now the question is: are the Powers still looking for a vampire to complete their plans, a different one, now that Angel is out?
Rhonda	09/23/2005 11:29 pm
07/08/2005 @ 09:53 am Email Willow just had to out do herself and give him back his original?? Wonder what Buffy is going to do with this information. And asking Buffy to not give Angel a "happy" or even Smoochies should not be a problem. I don't think she is too fond of him at the moment. But what all does that have to do with her realistic dreams of Spike??? Can't wait to find out more.
Stephanie	09/23/2005 11:28 pm
07/08/2005 @ 07:17 am Email Great update Tam! I loved the whole gypsies cursed angel with a random sould but willow justhad to be specefic and cursed him with him. I always thought the difference between him as a human and him as a souled vamp was a bit much. I love where you are taking this. So fab. I hope Spike comes back soon and saves the day.
Diabola	09/23/2005 11:27 pm
07/08/2005 @ 06:31 am Email URL Yay! That's exactly what I thought had happened to Angel. And the theory about the human personality deciding the kind of vampire one becomes is what I always suspected too. You only have to think of Harmony to realize it makes a lot of sense. Great chapter, I'm really loving this. Can't wait to see where it goes next.
BloodyTearsOfLife	09/23/2005 11:27 pm
07/08/2005 @ 01:53 am Email Haha! So Buffy finally got a true taste of who exactly Angel was. And Willow and Xander are already making with the smoochies? At least Willow wasn't dumb and tring to cover it up. Great chapter Tam, can't wait for the next one.
BAKAMAN	09/23/2005 11:25 pm
07/08/2005 @ 12:06 am So the soul that Angel was cursed with wasn't his own? Okay, that would make some sense of his radical changes in his persona when he's switching from good to evil. And if your going for a good plot twist, your probably going to have the soul that Angel was cursed with was Spike's! Also, if you've revitide Angel back to his Liam persona are you going to hook him up with Faith!?
Esther	09/23/2005 11:24 pm
07/08/2005 @ 12:02 am Email Great chapter!!! I love the "fuzzy end of the lollipop" reference...reminds me of the movie 'Some Like it Hot' with Marilyn Monroe and Tony Curtis. Thanks for explaining Angel's behavior as well...knew something had to go wrong and Willow's spell was it. I was just talking with Tasha about Willow's need to fix everything with magic, and I'm glad that you showed it here with the de-lusting spell...I had forgotten about that. More soon? Please?
FlexSis	09/23/2005 11:24 pm
07/07/2005 @ 11:01 pm I KNEW IT!! After reading Chap. 2, I just KNEW he had to be Liam again! WAY cool - can't wait for more!
Dee	09/23/2005 11:23 pm
07/07/2005 @ 06:46 pm I like the beginning of this story. Can't wait to see how Spike reached Buffy from hell. Looking forward to updates.
PyroChilde	09/23/2005 11:23 pm
07/07/2005 @ 03:16 pm Email Awesome fic, great chapter, more soon please!!
txjmfan	09/23/2005 11:22 pm
07/07/2005 @ 12:56 am Email Love it so far! The hickey definitely has me intrigued. Eagerly awaiting more.
K.T.	09/23/2005 11:22 pm
07/07/2005 @ 12:27 am You have left me drooling for more! Yummy! Please continue soon!
Esther	09/23/2005 11:21 pm
07/06/2005 @ 11:42 pm Email I have absolutely no prob. with S2 ending in this way...especially if it's the exact thing that happens in Ch. 2...GREAT JOB!!! I love the exploration of Angel's 'other' side and the crudeness that he displayed at times, Buffy's guilt and her sense of right/wrong, and the instant chemistry between Buffy and Spike. You've captured those two sooo well, and their attraction is HOT!!! I can't wait for more...especially with an ender like that...more...please?
jodi	09/23/2005 11:20 pm
07/06/2005 @ 11:22 pm awesome. more please.
Mariana	09/23/2005 11:20 pm
07/06/2005 @ 10:29 pm Email love it!! absolutely love it!! great story!! wonder what soul is inside angel this time...bet the one before could be william's...can you imagine that?? anyhow..fantastic work!! keep it up..thanx!!
Adriana	09/23/2005 11:19 pm
07/06/2005 @ 08:48 pm Just found this and loved the chappie's end! Must have more and soon!
ElizabethAnneSummers	09/23/2005 11:18 pm
07/06/2005 @ 08:33 pm Email URL Heehee, Spike hickey! Loved it, update soon!
BAKAMAN	09/23/2005 11:18 pm
07/06/2005 @ 08:21 pm Great Story! Please keep writing.
Slaymesoftly	09/23/2005 11:17 pm
07/06/2005 @ 06:08 pm Email Gah! More! More! More!
Steph	09/23/2005 11:17 pm
07/06/2005 @ 05:32 pm Damn. Your Good. S write more please?
BloodyTearsOfLife	09/23/2005 11:16 pm
07/06/2005 @ 05:07 pm Email Tam, you so rock. That dream was just wickedly yummy. Makes me wonder if Spike dreamed it too. Would love to see how Spike is doing in hell and what his thoughts are. So I'm guessing the way the spell went, they actually gave Angel back his soul so now he's Liam? Hope Buffy dumps him. Would be great to see her tell him that he needs to go this time. This chapter was good. But I need more now. So please update soon.
Anne	09/23/2005 11:16 pm
07/06/2005 @ 03:18 pm It was good chapther, more spuffy.
Milva	09/23/2005 11:15 pm
07/06/2005 @ 01:51 pm Email Y E S S S !!!!!God,Tam,now I need more,much much more!Be a good girl-I know you can be that-and give me my "daily-fix" of Spuffy. You're great as ever.
Skybound	09/23/2005 11:14 pm
07/06/2005 @ 11:18 am Email URL bounces Can I just tell you how excited I am! Makes me so happy to see people willing to write this challenge. Really evocative start you have here, looking forward to more :-D
Honey	09/23/2005 11:13 pm
07/06/2005 @ 10:29 am Email Tam!!!!! This story is awesome so far! I like the premise of having Angel come back wrong. And the dream sequence...WOW! Can't wait to see what's in store.
ComedyofErrors	09/23/2005 11:11 pm
07/06/2005 @ 08:36 am Great dream sequence. Nice idea, Angel coming back wrong. It's a tricky spell, afterall. I'm glad Buffy is realizing that there is a nicer side to Spike, even if it is through dreams. I like the imps too, by the way.
Rhonda	09/23/2005 11:10 pm
07/06/2005 @ 07:57 am Email Cool, dream sex. GREAT..
Peyton	09/23/2005 11:01 pm
07/06/2005 @ 07:29 am COOL! Love your Hell!
Spikeschilde	09/23/2005 11:00 pm
07/06/2005 @ 06:08 am Email URL Great update! I can't wait for more! Love what you've done so far
Superstes diligo	09/23/2005 10:59 pm
07/06/2005 @ 05:03 am Love it! keep it up! hope you update soon!
GoldenBuffy	09/23/2005 10:54 pm
07/06/2005 @ 02:05 am Email WOW, wow, wow, is all I can say. Can't wait for more.
Peyton	09/23/2005 10:53 pm
07/04/2005 @ 11:13 pm It's nice to see that someone else decided to write this old challenge. I look forward to seeing where your interpretations will differ from mine.
Jordy	09/23/2005 10:52 pm
07/02/2005 @ 02:09 pm wow. almost stunned speechless. It's great so far. very interesting idea. I am quite curious as to how you'll proceed from here.
Rae	09/23/2005 10:51 pm
07/02/2005 @ 12:41 am Email URL Soooooo glad you decided to start posting this. Look I told you everyone would love this. It is soooo amazing and really really can't wait until you write more. Notice I didn't say update. giggles
Shady	09/23/2005 10:50 pm
07/01/2005 @ 08:17 pm Wow Tam, you really are the "challenge whore" arent you? Awesome start, made me cry though, which was not cool! Can't wait to see some more of this, but you knew that already
Anne	09/23/2005 10:49 pm
07/01/2005 @ 06:58 pm Really good, more updating.
romero	09/23/2005 10:48 pm
07/01/2005 @ 03:36 pm I really like your story and can't wait to read more.
Kat	09/23/2005 10:46 pm
07/01/2005 @ 01:31 pm Email Oh wow. What a wonderful begining to what promises to be a sensational story. I will be on the look out for more chapters.
Cas	09/23/2005 10:43 pm
07/01/2005 @ 12:33 pm Just wanted to say that I usually HATE reading replays of scenes that have been filmed and aired, but you did a really excellent job of it -telling what happened but adding just enough POV to make it seem fresh. Great job!
ComedyofErrors	09/23/2005 10:42 pm
07/01/2005 @ 09:40 am A wonderful beginning. I'm glad you had the reconciliation with Joyce so quickly. Good for Spike, cocky to the end.
Slaymesoftly	09/23/2005 10:40 pm
07/01/2005 @ 08:59 am Email OOOh great beginning, Tam. Can't wait to see where you go with it -
Esther	09/23/2005 10:39 pm
07/01/2005 @ 01:23 am Email Ok, it's official...I LOVE THIS!!! I'm totally hooked and panting for the next chapter as I write this...oh man, I love the plot...everything!!! More soon? Please?
ElizabethAnneSummers	09/23/2005 10:39 pm
07/01/2005 @ 01:20 am Email URL Oooo sounds good so far! Can't wait to see more!
BloodyTearsOfLife	09/23/2005 10:38 pm
07/01/2005 @ 01:04 am Email I loved Spike in this chapter, especially the whole winking at her thing. So you're doing another challenge? This so doesn't mean you get to slack off on mine. so get cracking on that one too! Anywho, I really loved this first chapter. Can't wait to see more.
vladt	09/23/2005 10:37 pm
07/01/2005 @ 12:34 am Email hooked. reel me in. great start. thanks
Dee	09/23/2005 10:37 pm
06/30/2005 @ 11:51 pm Love this. Can't wait for more. I hope you are able to update regularly.
~~Tasha~~	09/23/2005 10:36 pm
06/30/2005 @ 09:48 pm Email URL This is a pretty awesome start to the challenge. Nice job, Tam. The emotions you captured here were excellent. I like Joyce's outlook on things. Angel is as self-centered as always of course. The touch with Whistler was nice as well. I look forward to the update of this and OPN. You are challenge gal now, eh?
redwulf50	09/23/2005 10:35 pm
06/30/2005 @ 08:14 pm Email Freakin awesome fic start Tam, you have Angel spot on
Willia	09/23/2005 10:34 pm
06/30/2005 @ 07:55 pm sniffle when are you updating?..
Dark Dreamluver	09/23/2005 10:34 pm
06/30/2005 @ 07:45 pm Email URL I love this! that line "It was foolish to assume that she could simply forget the heartbreak that his presence had brought to her life. Certainly Giles and her friends wouldn’t be able to." was simply priceless! Why Joss couldn't see it that way is beyond me! Can't wait for updates on this and your other newbie! Making me feel lazy!
mary	09/23/2005 10:33 pm
06/30/2005 @ 07:34 pm Email Great start!! Cant wait to see how this unfolds.
~~Tasha~~	09/22/2005 04:19 am
It says that you posted Ch 1-4 in the one post, but I only see chapter 1. Did something go wrong? Just don't want to miss any of this story. I loved it at the old BSV, and you can be sure that I'll follow it wherever it gets posted again.
Chapters One ~ FOur are posted together now . Just had a small issue with four that needed to be dealt with. Thanks! ~Tam~