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| Future Imperfect by Lilachigh |
| Chapter: Chp 2 Growing Pains |
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| Verda | 07/23/2006 04:22 pm |
| Sorry, couldn't finish yesterday, couldn't get back to the website the rest of the night, stupid fatal error. Thanks for the backstory on their daughter. Where did she get brown eyes from? Is she not Spike's? Too bad her life convinced her that her children where better off away from them, more likely to have a "normal" life. Really liking this story. Thanks for the read. |
Thanks for reading. Lots of people have commented about the brown eyes. I’ve decided to go in and change them because, although my genetic research tells me it is possible - although unlikely - it is worrying readers and has no bearing on the story.
Glad you’re enjoying it. |
| Lou | 03/15/2006 07:15 am |
| Intriguing - such a cool idea. |
| Thanks for review. Trying to update soon. |
| zanthinegirl | 03/14/2006 10:47 am |
| Interesting backstory! Really intrigued by this one. |
| Weaver | 03/14/2006 06:00 am |
| I love this and you write beautifully. Good flashbacks as well - keeps the flow of the story going. More please. |
| Hopefully very soon. Thank’s for your comments. Much appreciated. |
| Spikes Slayer2 | 03/14/2006 04:44 am |
lol i love little joyce.. she's so cute... granny buffy  and um.. Shanny, is her name cause like that cause of the shanshu..? |
| Robyn | 03/13/2006 06:53 pm |
| Great chapter, I loved how the back story was told, and to have little Joyce walk in at that particular moment was very realistic. And having her floating two feet off the ground was very fun. Please update soon. |
| Thanks for review. Will do my best to update soon. I have too many stories on the go at once! |
| vladt | 03/13/2006 03:46 pm |
| this is going to be a fun read. so glad it is continuing. thanks |
| Delicia | 03/13/2006 02:01 pm |
| I really enjoyed this chapter. It's sad how Shanny was scared when she was little. Probably why she didn't want her kids around Spike and Buffy. Poor thing. Hopefully now they will make up for lost time. |
| I’ve always thought being Buffy and Spike’s child would not be that good a thing. |
| Isabel | 03/13/2006 12:57 pm |
| Very, very interesting. Can't wait for more. |
| MarzBar | 03/13/2006 11:20 am |
| So the Joyce brat is floating into other people's conversations. Interesting powers she seems to have. Is she a slayer/witch? |
| Should find out in next episode. |
| letitia | 03/13/2006 09:35 am |
| Well Joyce is going to put them all through some major changes. Love the back story with Shanny. Great update. |
| I reckon they’ll certainly know she’s there - and watch out for Billy, too! |
| maryperk | 03/13/2006 09:18 am |
| I like it, Lilac. great chappy |
| thanks, Mary. Glad you liked it. |
