The Bloodshedverse :: Spuffy with Bite


Becoming Undone by spikeslovebite
Chapter: Chapters Five ~ Eight

Araedhel	07/05/2006 11:07 am
Please, Please write more.
hotlipedjen	06/28/2006 05:30 am
Would really like to read more! Very good story.
Gillypod	06/25/2006 09:30 am
Oh God! Wonderful - please update soon
VWalk	06/14/2006 02:23 pm
This is an incredible story. I'm so excited that someone is exploring Angel's original soul. I love your characterization of Buffy and Spike... and even the Cordy. Here are more wishes for a speedy smoothing out. Great job, can't wait to read more.
Roby	06/05/2006 11:15 pm
Not to put any pressure on you or anything, you know... but this story is AWESOME!!! Hope that rough spot will get smoother soon.
pfft i do the pressure thing all on my own, so no worries lol thanks for the vote of confidence. hope i can get back to it soon also
Verda	05/26/2006 10:32 pm
Good Lord!! what a chapter! Love Spuffy, but Angel. You were not kidding about it being graphic. My gut's still in a knot. Can't wait for Angel to get his. Update soon, it's a great story.
hit a rough spot with this one, hope to get back to it soon
Bite_Me	05/22/2006 10:41 pm
I really hope you continue with this story!
kinda stalled right now but i'll get back to it (soon i hope!)
sandyrah	04/28/2006 07:07 pm
more more more
redwulf50	04/24/2006 04:38 am
could really use more of this fic
Bookchick of the Novel Clan	04/16/2006 11:09 pm
Good Lord, edge of the seat kinda writing, can't wait till we get an update!
Robyn	04/12/2006 05:30 pm
Staking is to good for Angel. I hope he really gets what he deserves and that Cordy gets to be a part of it. I really love the Buffy and Spike interaction and communication.
Roby	04/01/2006 06:41 pm
Me too! I love this fic and I've been waiting for an update pretty much religiously since last September... Should we keep poking you every so often, or beg... maybe light candles & stuff? :eg:
redwulf50	02/13/2006 03:51 pm
OH my gawd I love this fic, when do we get more??
Rebelbaby	02/08/2006 11:04 am
I love the story so far can't wate to see the next update you put out. and hope to see more of it soon or as fast as you can please update i love love the story.
JustaGirl	02/06/2006 02:17 pm
Cant wait for the update
Henrietta	12/30/2005 08:32 pm
more please
Confused Muse	09/24/2005 03:43 pm
09/14/2005 @ 05:55 pm Emotional, detailed and very realistic. Well done on having the courage with the last chapter- incredibly well written and completely on the edge. Of course, this means I'm going to nag a lot now for updates.
Steph	09/24/2005 03:43 pm
09/06/2005 @ 02:36 pm Scary
Richard	09/24/2005 03:42 pm
09/06/2005 @ 02:15 pm Email I literally couldn't read that chapter. I'm amazed you could write it. It's a very good fic though and I'll continue to enjoy it.
Elizabeth	09/24/2005 03:41 pm
09/05/2005 @ 11:51 pm Email Poor Cordy, Angel is soooooo dead....make him hurt. GRR...no one deserves to be raped...shakes head and murmers poor Cordy Amazing story, really really powerful. VERY intense. Keep up the good writing. Liz
MarzBar	09/24/2005 03:41 pm
09/05/2005 @ 09:27 pm Email So, poor Spike had to go to hell instead of Angel. Now we have the real Angel and the PTB had to send Spike back. After the Cordy rape, Angel needs to be seriously hurt before he gets dusted.
Opal	09/24/2005 03:40 pm
09/05/2005 @ 05:36 pm Must have been a hard to write chappie, yet it was very well done. I hope Angelus gets whats coming to him
Nikkole	09/24/2005 03:40 pm
09/05/2005 @ 04:52 pm Email Wow. And not a good wow. That was powerful and disturbing. It was a very good way to show that there is not to much of a line between Angel and Angelus. I hope the next chapter is not so sad. Good work.
ComedyofErrors	09/24/2005 03:39 pm
09/05/2005 @ 04:24 pm I feel so bad for Cordy. Angelus needs to die, and to that end I'm glad that Spike was with Buffy when they found her. He'll know the scent
BloodyTearsOfLife	09/24/2005 03:38 pm
09/05/2005 @ 01:27 pm Email You know, I've never felt for Cordy because she's such a brat but I really did feel for her in this scene. And I can't imagine what Buffy's reaction is going to be. Update soon!
~~Tasha~~	09/24/2005 03:38 pm
09/05/2005 @ 12:55 pm Email URL Glad to see the warnings on the chapter. You wrote this chapter very well though too. Those types of scenes are very hard to write, and they can play havoc with the writer's emotions as well as the reader's. Hope you are okay. Look forward to the next update. Buffy is so going to dust his ass when she finds out from Cordy that Angel did this.
mary	09/24/2005 03:37 pm
09/05/2005 @ 09:26 am Email Poor Cordy. Great update.
ElizabethAnneSummers	09/24/2005 03:36 pm
09/05/2005 @ 05:32 am Email URL Gawd! I hate Angel soooo much! Much with the slayage on his pasty flabby ass!!
Esther	09/24/2005 03:36 pm
09/05/2005 @ 04:14 am Email Oh wow, never have I hated Angel more in my life. Poor Cordy...I'm so glad that Buffy and Spike found her in the end. I hope Buffy wreaks the worst kind of torture/bloodshed/pain on Angel's worthless ass. You did a great job capturing the malicious nature of Angel, Cordy's pain and defilement, and her final peace at being found. Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter and for them to find out it was Angel that did it. Great job!
Stephanie	09/24/2005 03:35 pm
09/05/2005 @ 02:41 am Email Blinks in shock. You do know that Angel must die? That was a really good chapter, poor Cordy. We have to kill Angel now. Tortue? Please? Perhaps Cordy could strike the final blow. AHHH... Okay that was really good writing but I must have some dusty Angel. Good job Tam!
Rae	09/24/2005 03:35 pm
09/05/2005 @ 01:43 am Email URL You already know how great I think this chp is. Just wanted to tell you again.
Oracleholly	09/24/2005 03:34 pm
09/01/2005 @ 05:55 pm Email Somehow I'm hearing that creepy organ music from old horror movies complete with the 'dun..dun..dun' at the end. Creeping Angel overlooking Spuffy sex just like what he did with Cordy and Connor. EWWWWW. Can't wait to see what you have cooking in that brain of yours dearie.
vladt	09/24/2005 03:33 pm
08/31/2005 @ 07:15 pm Email great update to a wonderul fic. thanks
Tasha	09/24/2005 03:33 pm
~~~~ 08/31/2005 @ 07:54 am Email URL Wonderful claiming chapter. Excellent writing, Tam. Definitely in top form. Evil Angel. Not Angelus, but still Angel. Man ... I felt a chill go through me at his little tirade in his thoughts. Look forward to more.
BloodyTearsOfLife	09/24/2005 03:32 pm
08/31/2005 @ 12:29 am Email Awesome chapter Tam. I can't wait to find out why Spike is back. And Angel seems up to no good. Update soon!
ElizabethAnneSummers	09/24/2005 03:32 pm
08/30/2005 @ 09:56 pm Email URL icky Peeping Angel...
Rhonda	09/24/2005 03:31 pm
08/30/2005 @ 09:04 pm Email Wonder what Angel is up to. Glad that Buffy and Spike had some type of conversation... Can't wait for more.
slaymesoftly	09/24/2005 03:30 pm
08/30/2005 @ 07:22 pm Email Great new chapter,Tam! Hope the new words mean you are feeling better and getting back to normal. Scary- Angel/Angelus? Guess it doesn't matter as pissed off as he obviously is. Poor Buffy and Spike!
Oracleholly	09/24/2005 03:30 pm
08/22/2005 @ 11:20 pm Email Oh yay finally got a chance to read chap 6! Spike's coherent & knows what he's doing.. not that I didn't appreciate the fine attributes of feral Spike. Yum. Now, that you're back baby, may we have more of this tasty dish soon?
Dee	09/24/2005 03:29 pm
08/20/2005 @ 10:22 pm I love this story and I am anxiously waiting for updates. Great plot and I don't think I have seen this done before.
Roby	09/24/2005 03:29 pm
08/18/2005 @ 05:25 pm ... I love this fic... Update, please? ... Preeetty pleease... cherry on top?
Steph	09/24/2005 03:28 pm
07/31/2005 @ 02:13 am Man this is a great fic! you are doing a bang up job...very hot.
BloodyTearsOfLife	09/24/2005 03:27 pm
07/30/2005 @ 11:41 pm Email Well, you finally got Spike in chains. I so know you were envisioning yourself in that scene. Great chapters, glad that Spike is coming around, though savage Spike is very very hot. Update soon!
Jessica	09/24/2005 03:27 pm
07/30/2005 @ 03:06 am Wow! This is an excellent story. I just found it and its wonderful. Btw, I loved Feral Spike. Very hot. I can't wait for more. Please update soon.
chanel 5	09/24/2005 03:26 pm
07/28/2005 @ 08:18 pm Yay for spike - and this is so hot, I can feel the heat all the way to South Australia
txjmfan	09/24/2005 03:25 pm
07/27/2005 @ 12:11 am Oh man! This is gonna be good. Can't wait to Spike is able to communicate on a less ferral level...although, kind of enjoying his "ferral" communications with Buffy. Update soon please!
Esther	09/24/2005 03:25 pm
07/26/2005 @ 11:52 pm Email Oh my God...have I mentioned how much I absolutely LOVE this fic? The more I read, the more I fall in love with it!!! Ch. 6 just made me want to be Buffy more...because that claiming scene...yeah for sexy, claimy Spuffy smut!!! Hot damn!!! I almost fell off my chair! Feral Spike just...gah...can't write anymore cause I'm still awash with images of naked Spike...feral, naked Spike...more...please? I beg you....
ElizabethAnneSummers	09/24/2005 03:24 pm
07/26/2005 @ 09:19 pm Email URL Muahahaha, I can't wait to see Angel's face either! Heehee!
ComedyofErrors	09/24/2005 03:23 pm
07/26/2005 @ 06:37 pm Continuing strong! Great idea to bring in the dream like that. Please keep writing!
Nikkole	09/24/2005 03:23 pm
07/26/2005 @ 02:58 pm Email Very nice! Getting more interesting by the chapter! Keep up the great work! ~~~Nikkole~~~
Misha	09/24/2005 03:22 pm
07/26/2005 @ 09:39 am Email nope, still not liking this fic, LOVING it is closest to the mark!! Gimme more!! Hope there is lots more of the pouncing still happening even though Spike is now more coherent....thats too good to give up!
Superstes Diligo	09/24/2005 03:21 pm
07/26/2005 @ 04:29 am Aww come on! that's so evil! it's like sying you'll give us a whole cake and then just giving us a crumb!... we want more! ... please? Loved the update!
spikes_niblet	09/24/2005 03:21 pm
07/26/2005 @ 04:01 am Email Wonder what'll happen with Spike and how Joyce will react to Buffy
s.p. hudson	09/24/2005 03:20 pm
07/26/2005 @ 01:56 am Email *pant,pant,pant* Bad Spike! Naughty Spike! I think he deserves a spanking. I'll do it!!!
Oracleholly	09/24/2005 03:19 pm
07/24/2005 @ 04:51 pm Email Love all grrry Spike! So hot! Much goodness, sighing with happiness
Mariana	09/24/2005 03:19 pm
07/23/2005 @ 08:08 pm Email lol!! so love this spike!! his motto being: want take...which it's perfect for buffy cos he doesn't give her enough time to run!! lol!! anyhow...love this story!! you're a very talented writer thanx so much! hope you update soon ;)
Superstes Diligo	09/24/2005 03:18 pm
07/22/2005 @ 11:26 am OOhh! More! that was soo much fun to read! (fine... i had a bit too much caffiene... so what?) You're gonna update soon... right? Love Spike al Feral!
samson28	09/24/2005 03:17 pm
07/22/2005 @ 09:39 am Email Lovely chapter, adoring Spike in his feral state.
Adriana	09/24/2005 03:17 pm
07/22/2005 @ 02:01 am More please...now!
Esther	09/24/2005 03:16 pm
07/21/2005 @ 11:40 pm Email Have I mentioned that I'm panting just thinking of being bitten and claimed by a feral Spike? HOT DAMN!!! He's sexy as hell when he's himself, but once he turns growly...GROWL!! I want to be Buffy...damn!!! What can I say except that I want some more...please?
Always_jbj	09/24/2005 03:15 pm
07/21/2005 @ 08:51 pm Email URL Loved the update Tam! YUMMY!!! Oh boy is Buffy gonna be in trouble for handcuffing Joyce! lol. I love petulant Spike...sooo cute! Can't wait for more.
ComedyofErrors	09/24/2005 03:15 pm
07/21/2005 @ 08:43 pm I check every day to see if this has been updated. I love Buffy's precaution of bringing handcuffs; since Spike has his priorities, it was a darn good idea. Too bad Buffy isn't ready to repeat the claim yet, but obviously feral Spike knows what he wants.
chanel 5	09/24/2005 03:14 pm
07/21/2005 @ 08:33 pm I love this.I wish it had happened on the show- though it probably wouldn't have made it past the censors ;)
jodi	09/24/2005 03:13 pm
07/21/2005 @ 06:31 pm more more more
ElizabethAnneSummers	09/24/2005 03:13 pm
07/21/2005 @ 05:15 pm Email URL Mmmmmm, very good! Waiting for more!
Nikkole	09/24/2005 03:12 pm
07/21/2005 @ 04:54 pm Email Interesting. I like where the story is going, and am looking forward to updates. There are a few different ways you can go with this, and I am anxious to see where you take it!
Steph	09/24/2005 03:11 pm
07/21/2005 @ 02:14 pm Fantastic!!! WOW...it just doesn't get any better!...I love it!
spike_spetslayer	09/24/2005 03:11 pm
07/21/2005 @ 02:04 pm This just keeps getting better and better...keep 'em coming ;)
Always_jbj	09/24/2005 03:10 pm
07/18/2005 @ 08:19 pm Email URL Mmmm... purrs That was bloody brilliant Tam!!! Hot and steamy and oh-so intriguing... can't wait for the next chap!!!
Stacy	09/24/2005 03:09 pm
07/16/2005 @ 05:55 pm Email Wow! So intense and really good! I sure hope you're still writing this story. It's very well done and the plot is fascinating. Thanks for writing.
romero	09/24/2005 03:09 pm
07/16/2005 @ 03:17 am Oh, don't stop there! Can't wait to read more.
Mariana	09/24/2005 03:08 pm
07/15/2005 @ 04:02 pm Email wow!! that was HOT!! can't wait for more...i love the way you write...love your stories...and this one is not an exception...it's just awesome!! thanx!! hope you update soon..
GoldenBuffy	09/24/2005 03:07 pm
07/14/2005 @ 01:43 am Email Ok, so I think I was in a cave for the first apparance of this story. But now I'm free and I have found it, and I'm in love. OMG, this is great. Love that Liem is back. Cause this was one thing that always bothered me, why did he ever come back instead on Angel, after Angelus, ehh. Loved the Spuffy, very good! Can't wait for more.
Steph	09/24/2005 03:07 pm
07/13/2005 @ 11:12 pm WOW. THAT'S HOT!
Opal	09/24/2005 03:06 pm
07/13/2005 @ 09:45 pm Beautiful update! Love feral spike claiming buffy!
demonica mills	09/24/2005 03:05 pm
07/13/2005 @ 09:16 pm Email URL Tam! This was awesome!!! I can't wait for more.
Anne	09/24/2005 03:05 pm
07/13/2005 @ 06:24 pm Wow it was really great, updating more
Slaymesoftly	09/24/2005 03:04 pm
07/13/2005 @ 03:33 pm Email Whew, Tam! Awesome update/chapter. fans self Even feral Spike is good in bed. Who knew? LOL Can't wait for more.
jodi	09/24/2005 03:03 pm
07/13/2005 @ 03:17 pm oh i love primal spike.
Rhonda	09/24/2005 03:03 pm
07/13/2005 @ 09:43 am Email Now that was just SO!!!!!!!!!.... I can't wait to read more. I hope that when he comes back to himself he doesn't take out his thoughts on how things happend on himself. Great update.
Misha	09/24/2005 03:02 pm
07/13/2005 @ 09:40 am Email Wow feral Spike, another fantasy to add to the list! What's that you said? You're going to update very very soon? I should hope so, after that blistering chapter I need more soon...
ComedyofErrors	09/24/2005 03:01 pm
07/13/2005 @ 09:39 am Fine update, even Feral Spike is interested in Buffy. So he came back at the factory, which was originally his lair? Love the Spuffy lovin'.
ElizabethAnneSummers	09/24/2005 03:01 pm
07/13/2005 @ 04:21 am Email URL Oooo yes, loved it. Great update!
BloodyTearsOfLife	09/24/2005 03:00 pm
07/13/2005 @ 03:28 am Email Oh WOW, that was, hmm... dopey smile. I got to the end and I was like, where's the rest? Want more now. And can I just tell you I'm so liking Savage Spike. But please more, soon.