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| Paradox by Jackofspikes |
| Chapter: Chapter 8. |
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| Verda | 07/15/2006 02:03 am |
| Still confued about the Dawn time line, but with Back to the future stuff just glad that she's there. Lovi' the Summers family reunion with Spike and where does Angel get off, ego much. Great chapter. |
explanations will come...they just may take some time  |
| DarkBloodyMistress | 07/14/2006 08:17 pm |
| ew. pedophile much. |
| I always thought so |
| Fred | 05/11/2006 03:01 am |
| The ramblings of an insane man er vampire! |
| he is rather! |
| Delicia | 05/08/2006 02:53 pm |
| Joyce welcoming Spike was so sweet as well as the reunion of the girls and their mom! Angel is so self-centered to think it's all about him. It really isn't. |
Angel is Angel  |
| Cassie | 04/14/2006 02:42 am |
| Great read |
| Thank you |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 04/11/2006 02:01 am |
| Ewwwwwww, freaking pedophile! |
| Rofl...and you're surprised??? |
| Nikkole | 04/02/2006 10:42 am |
| Typical Angel, always the big brooding idiot who thinks the world should bow down and thank him for being said idiot. I get so sick of him, and you write him so well! Great chapter! |
| thank you...Angel is easy to write! lol |
| Oracleholly | 03/29/2006 07:15 pm |
| Touching "family" reunion with Joyce, Spike & Dawnie. GRRRR Angel... oh how I hate him, let me count the ways... |
| I'm thinking of taking a poll for suggestions on how to kill or maim him! LOL |
| sirc | 03/25/2006 02:42 pm |
| Angel was ONLY 29, 14 years is such a tiny age difference. What could *possibly* be there for Joyce to be worried about? *snerk* Great chapter |
| lol...I know...and when you add on his vampiric age??? |
| lilmamaday | 03/25/2006 07:58 am |
God Angel is such a putz! He really thinks that it would be ok for a 29 yr old man to mess with a 15/16 yr old? He is insane! I hope that he gets what is coming to him!
Loved the reunion between the Summers women and Spike! How much longer can they keep the younger slayer out of the mix? |
um...for as long as I want! heehee
People keep complaining about the age difference of 29 to 15, but nobody has mentioned 241 to 15...just an observation! LOL
Thanks for the review |
| Penmommy | 03/24/2006 06:15 pm |
| More please! |
| soon...I promise! |
| Athenewolfe | 03/23/2006 01:41 pm |
AHHHHHHHH ewww pedophile... icky angel ... icky angel !
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| rofl! |
| vampkiss | 03/23/2006 12:54 pm |
| Great story so far. Looking forward to reading more. |
| thak you so much |
| pfeifferpack | 03/23/2006 10:46 am |
....:::::snort:::::.....only twenty-nine!!! LOL too funny!
Good update. Nice to have Dawn along for the ride this way. Hum now how to deal with the TWO Buffy's? I trust you have a fine plan for dealing with this part of the paradox.
Kathleen |
| Glad someone trust me! lol |
| Bridget | 03/23/2006 07:49 am |
Good chapter. It is amazing how delusional Angel is in this story.
It is almost funny. |
| Angel is Angel! |
| PyroChilde | 03/23/2006 05:55 am |
| Angel's arrogance always astounds me. Oh, and ONLY 29 huh? lol What a dope he is. Great chapter! |
| rofl...I liked it! thanks heaps |
| Harry 4eyes | 03/23/2006 02:20 am |
Not that much older when turned only 29? LMAO if he were human he'd be on Jerry Springer or the slightly more acceptable shows, 'Mr 16 year old daughter dating an older man' 13 years is allot when only 16, apparently not as much when 18...And as for why Joyce doesn't like Angel? it's called mother intuition, they can smell the bad one's I tell you. Plus he acts his bloody age, so like a 240+ year old, with his brooding an all. Where Spike on the other hand talks to Joyce like a human being, acts like a kid at times so she feels the urge to mother him even if he is old enough to be her Great great grandad.
The Summers unite!!! Brilliant, now i'm still confused about the Dawn time paradox situation. Also how did she end up back to the future? she didn't exist in the time line so if the ray hit her she would go back to being the green glob of keyness unless her DNA got transported with her and merged with the Key and she became human...or something like that it's all very confusing yet very interesting, like Time travel stories often are.
Can't wait for Young Buffy meets Spike and Big Buffy, wonder if Buffy will be jeolous of herself? big Buffy at Young Buffy for flirting and drooling all over him and young Buffy when Big Buffy is all posessive around him. Could be interesting, specially as both could claim as it being their Spike because his mind is of the older Spike but the body belongs to the season 2 Spike....lol
well Still loving it
Update soon
Harry |
| many many questions to answer...I wonder how I'll go? Wish me luck! Thanks Harry, it's always a pleasure to see a review from you! |
| akarinacj | 03/23/2006 01:47 am |
| Love this story. More please.!!! |
| LOL it's coming |
| Robyn | 03/23/2006 01:39 am |
| You did a fantastic job on your characterization of Angel, he did always think that he was always right, he knew best, and that everyone should approve of his relationship with Buffy because they were soulmates. And Joyce recognizing Spike as one of her own, Joyce, Dawn, Buffy, and Spike that moment was so sweet. Thanks for the great update. |
| You are so welcome, I'm glad you are enjoying it. |
| Richard | 03/23/2006 12:08 am |
| And a womanizing drunkard at 29. Wow, he's so damned narcissistic it's no wonder he sends out bad vibes to all and sundry. |
| but...he's angel! |
| gaillee | 03/23/2006 12:01 am |
| You're story is still going strong. Gads...does Angel ever get it? Thanks for fine updates. |
| you are welcome |
| Tamara | 03/22/2006 10:51 pm |
Joyce meets Spike. She always had ggod taste in vampires.
And the appearance of older Dawn. She should be helpful against Angel.
The power of Spike. One dream about him and Angels forgotten.
Angel's self absorption and delusions-always funny. |
| Thanks, I'm glad you decide to read it! |
| Karyn | 03/22/2006 10:46 pm |
poor delusional Angel...lol
someone needs to give him a clue...hopefully in the form of a nice big stake! |
| Thanks Karyn, a stake it good! |
| kim | 03/22/2006 10:14 pm |
"Only twenty-nine" Yeah, Angel, and she's 16!!! As in so not legal yet! If it's "true love", then wait until she's 18 for the big relationship crap. Sigh...
How cool is that, that little Buffy had a dream about Spike, and she wants to have it again?! LOL...and Willow amazed that it was better than chocolate...so innocent.
Dawn must have been so confused and scared, if she didn't meant to end up here. Once all the hugging and stuff has commenced, I'm sure she's going to get a stern talking to over why she's there. Can't wait for the explanation. |
| who says's Dawns fault! lol |
| vladt | 03/22/2006 09:47 pm |
| wonderful update, moving along, well and including a delusional angel. delusional angel, is that redudant? thanks for the fun read. |
| You're welcome and thanks for your response. |
| MarzBar | 03/22/2006 09:43 pm |
| ARGH! YUCK! Angelus and his "beautiful relationship" with a virgin child. More story please. |
| ROFL...soon! |
| Irina | 03/22/2006 09:38 pm |
| The Summers family reunion was so sweet. You did a great job with the glimpse into Angel's perverted head. The Angel bashing is so much fun... I just love laughing at Angel's expense. Wonderful update! |
| Thank you I appreciate your response. |
| TammyDevil666 | 03/22/2006 09:38 pm |
| Oh my god, is this guy for real? What the hell has he been smoking to believe that crap? Angel always was an idiot. Yeah, only 29-years-old. Hello, that would still be wrong. She's only 16. Can I smack him? Okay, just had to get that out. Spike is so the better choice, but we all know that. I'm still confused by the whole Dawn thing, but I trust that it will all be explained soon enough. I liked the moment between Joyce and Spike. Good chapter=) |
| Thank you...yes you can smack him! |
| Max | 03/22/2006 09:29 pm |
I love Joyce's character - especially when she's knocked Angel down a couple much-needed notches.
I really hate Angel in this - how is a 29 year old and "not much older" than a 16 year old? Ew.  |
| Thank you...if you hate Angel...then I'm doing my job. |
| Kat | 03/22/2006 09:08 pm |
| Oh god Angel is a complete MORON. lol and you hit him right on. Oh goodness dawnie, buffy, and spike. AWWWWWWWWWWW That is sooooooooooooooooooo sweet. This story is addictive |
| Thank you so much...you've made my day! |
| slinkypsychokit | 03/22/2006 08:36 pm |
Gorgeous reunion scene, Jack! Just...gorgeous!
But the true treasure of this chapter was that hair gel-wielding, walking, talking, BROODING pile of superiority and self-righteousness! Freaking hysterical! Oh, my, I do love your Angel bashing!
More, soonish please? |
| I do like to please! |
| deedo | 03/22/2006 08:33 pm |
i stayed up all night for the new chapter, and as always it was so worth it!!
I loved the reunion of the Summers-family *wipes away a few tears*
and omg Angel is such a dumb perv *shudder* with his i-know-whats-best-for-all-of-you-attitude, i hope both buffys will teach him a few things about that
can't wait for you to continue ^__^ |
| Thank you...it is coming! |
| SpaceLord | 03/22/2006 08:31 pm |
| Well love the meting with Joyce but the best part was Angels train of thought......"I always know what's best" is just hilarious. Can't wait for the next chapter |
| thank you so much! |
| Shadow | 03/22/2006 08:24 pm |
hmmm 29 to her 16? obviously the pedophile cant count.
And the meeting of Buffy, Dawn and past-Joyce... spectacular... made me all weepy.
MORE! |
| Thank you...I like to see tears! lol...'cause I'm, you know...evil! |
| jl1980 | 03/22/2006 08:21 pm |
| still sick, angel...still sick, you disgusting perv.... love this story, jack...you are so awesome... you brought me to tears with everyone's reactions to joyce, first spike, then dawn and buffy...beautifully done |
| Thank you...just returning the favour for all the tears you've made me shed! |
