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| Paradox by Jackofspikes |
| Chapter: Chapter 11 |
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| Verda | 07/15/2006 02:38 am |
| You are marvelous Jacks! Stalker, pedophile Angel wants to remove her from an unstable home? That's rich. Yay Dawnie! just love her dialogue! Awesome! |
Thank you so much, you have just about made my day  |
| DarkBloodyMistress | 07/15/2006 12:02 am |
| lol, go joyce |
| I do love her character |
| Fred | 05/11/2006 03:21 am |
| Loved this |
| Thank you |
| Delicia | 05/08/2006 03:21 pm |
| Loved this chapter! Painful angst makes for a great plot. I laughed so hard when Joyce hit Angel; that was priceless! |
| Thank you, you just made my day |
| Cassie | 04/14/2006 02:45 am |
| great read |
| Thank you |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 04/11/2006 03:03 am |
| Yes! At least this time she did whack the right vamp! |
| YUP heehee |
| Nikkole | 04/02/2006 11:38 am |
| LOL! Angel got hit with an axe! Making with the happy dance here! And he thinks Buffy needs to be removed form an unstable environment? Again I say...what an idiot!!! |
| And again I agree! |
| sirc | 04/02/2006 10:08 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
| MarzBar | 03/29/2006 08:24 pm |
I think I had a blonde moment because I can't find any review from me for this chapter and I feel sure I've read it before. Anyway, great enraged Joyce scene. She's awesome when she's provoked.
Also, thanks to Karyn for the fabulous banner. |
| I will pass on your thanks to Karyn, I try to thank her daily! |
| Oracleholly | 03/29/2006 07:17 pm |
| Okay... that was just simply great! Marvelous! I love that Dawn reminded Angel of Spike... and then at the end with Joyce & the axe!!! lmao |
| lol...I just couldn't let that scene go to waste. |
| lilmamaday | 03/29/2006 06:59 pm |
| I just love this story! Having Dawn pop in now is really good and I hope that Angel gets what he deserves! |
| so do I...but I have to trust the bunnies, they haven't led my wrong so far! |
| time of change | 03/29/2006 06:32 pm |
| Love your rewrite of Joyce's big moment with the axe! |
| thank you...I couldn't resist |
| Athenewolfe | 03/29/2006 05:11 am |
| great update sweetie - I loved the lines about the bat and the whacking the right vamp - you did an excellant job with Joyce and Dawn - such wonderful disciptions of them, their characters and priceless actions. *squeezes you* loved this chapter |
| Thank you...I'm gonna get all shy and squiggy now. I love Joyce and I really enjoy writing her. Reviews do make the writing easier so I have give you a great big thank you for your support. |
| MarzBar | 03/29/2006 03:12 am |
| Chuckle, giggle! I would like to hear Angelus' serious talk with Giles about Buffy's unhealthy environment. More story please. |
next chap i think...coming soon!
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| fallen_angel | 03/29/2006 01:49 am |
| *Go mom! At least this time you whacked the right vamp.* I totally love this Dawn and yah go Joyce! Seriously Angel's a git what does he mean by unhealthy? he is the one unhealthy for Buffy! |
| you're preachin' to the choir here! |
| Harry 4Eyes | 03/29/2006 01:15 am |
You know the last paragraph confused me I originally thought it might have been Buffy looking from the window and called that out and I had a whole bunch of questions and theories but it was Dawn so not so much a biggie.
Oooh Angel just gave Buffy a whole perfect excuse to dump him, All Giles has to do is make a big commotion about when Angel tells him he needs to remove daughter from her mother and hope one of the Scoobies of Buffy are close by, or just tell Angel he should tell her himself because he isn't going to do it...better still, act all concerned and sit Buffy down and explain to her that he's worried about her family life after what Angel told him ;) Should do the trick nobody likes a control freak boyfriend..lol
Oooh Jenny confrontation. could be interesting, and very good point on the whole life change if she told everyone and stated alive, no tortured Buffy who runs away, no rift between the threeseome, no blatent predjudice against Spike because no Angelous to compare with, no super witchy, dark magic Willow because they'd have a professional witch on board and she could be trained properly...ofcourse might also mean no Tara because Willow would not need to go to wicka group to learn but i'm sure there is a workaround for that, because if anything Spike would go out of his way to befriends her I think.
You know this is what I like about time travel fics the possabilities are endless and trying to figure out the whole chain of events that could take place for changing one thing is quite fun.
Well still loving it, can't wait to see how Giles handles the Jenny and Angel situation, should be interesting.
Well update soon
Harry |
| I can only hope that my imagination measures up to yours! LOL...the joys of paradoxes! |
| jamie | 03/29/2006 01:11 am |
| YAH, hopefully Angel will have more coming for him than a whack on the head. Another great chapter. |
| lol...we'll see! |
| UncagedMuse | 03/29/2006 12:37 am |
| So loving this more and more with each chap! Will be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update. |
| Thank you...I'm really starting to get into it myself! LOL |
| Jace Nox | 03/29/2006 12:25 am |
| GO JOYCE!! YES!! I knew there was a reason that I loved Joyce. Angel Bat...yes |
| lol...you people are so easy to please...all it takes is a little violence on Angel and it's happy dance time! I love it! |
| Shadow | 03/28/2006 11:36 pm |
GO JOYCE! Whack him again... only a little lower... and apply the sharp edge... *EVIL GRIN*
Hopefully they can stop "young buffy" from making the mistake "older buffy" did with angel... I mean yuck...
Great chapter hun... keep up the good work! |
| Thanks sweetie. I thwacked him just for you! |
| deedo | 03/28/2006 11:01 pm |
yay, Joyce and her axe 
and Angel, just waiting for Buffy, hovering outside her window, hidden in a tree while she is taking a shower, a real gentleman  thank god for the Dawn/Joyce-tag-team
great chapter, I'm glad I got up a little bit earlier to read it before work |
| happy to make you happy! |
| Firebird234 | 03/28/2006 10:55 pm |
| Ah yes Angel gets wacked in the head by Joyce with an Ax I love it. Go Joyce, Can't wait to read more Angel bashing, please tell me there will be more Angel bashing plllleeeeeeaaaaasssseee *gives the puppy dog eyes*. |
| I'll think about it...HA...who am I kidding! |
| Karyn | 03/28/2006 10:33 pm |
| rofl...i just love the ending ...no matter how many times i read it! giggles! |
| lol...you are sooo easily pleased! |
| Tamara | 03/28/2006 09:56 pm |
GO Joyce, indeeed. Dawn had it right.
At least when Spike was hanging around Buffy's window , he stayed on the ground intead of peeping .
That should be one interesting convo between Spike and Giles. Though it might not be as hard as they think after young Buffy's dreams about Spike. |
| We'll just have to wait and see! |
| Cewcew | 03/28/2006 09:55 pm |
Right vamp for sure!
More Please, I promise to be good. |
| ok...but just cause you asked so nicely! |
| neo_trinityknot | 03/28/2006 09:35 pm |
| haha! Angel bashing, literally |
| lol...always a good thing! |
| pretty_in_fangs | 03/28/2006 09:13 pm |
| ::laugh:: It does my heart good to see Angel the one hit with the axe. I agree with Dawn. |
| Me too heehee |
| kim | 03/28/2006 09:12 pm |
| Oh, that's awesome!! And Dawn's reaction, congratulating Joyce - just hysterical. |
| LOL...thank you, I do love Joyce |
| lizard | 03/28/2006 09:01 pm |
| i am so not liking angel i never have and his overbearing ego is getting on my nerves he needs to be put in his place |
| It might just happen...might! |
| Max | 03/28/2006 08:49 pm |
| Man, I love how you ended this chapter |
| Thank you...I appreciate it! |
| vladt | 03/28/2006 08:48 pm |
| good read. joyce bashing angel bonus points. thanks for the fun. |
| You are most welcome! |
| Irina | 03/28/2006 08:47 pm |
| Gotta love Valkyrie warrior Joyce in this chapter! Great talk between Buffy and Giles. I'm really looking forward to Giles' upcomimg conversation with Spike. Excellent update! |
| It's gonna be an attention getter! LOL |
| Yzba | 03/28/2006 08:35 pm |
| Finally someone is bashing Angel's head;) And Dawn is so right, this time it IS the right vamp! |
| LOL...glad you approve |
| Kat | 03/28/2006 08:33 pm |
| Yay joyce still got to use the ax. hehehe that is brilliant. I think that the world is going to be a changed place. now whether it will work or not is anyones guess. well except yours i do assume you have some idea. lol |
| Not a clue! LOL |
| redwulf50 | 03/28/2006 08:28 pm |
LMAO, poooor widdle Angel  He is so abused |
| Sad but true...and funny! |
| Robyn | 03/28/2006 08:23 pm |
| Dawn and Joyce what a team and what a perfect use of an axe. I loved Dawn's comment to Angel about hair gel, she certainly learned a lot of good things from Spike. I'm glad that Buffy came clean about what happened with Angelus and that they are going to bring Jenny in earlier to help with things. Can't wait for when Angel talks to Giles about removing Buffy from the 'unhealthy environment'. Thanks for the fabulous update. |
| Thank so much, I really am getting a kicjk out of writing this! |
| jl1980 | 03/28/2006 08:21 pm |
| oh and that incredibly beautiful banner deserves an extra review!! lol...awesome!! |
| Thank you...all thanks for the banner go to Karyn |
| jl1980 | 03/28/2006 08:20 pm |
| lol....awesome!! love joyce hitting angel with the bat!!! this is really hooking me now!!! intriguing to think how much better they could make things!! love this story, jack, you rock!! |
| Coming from you I'll take that as a major compliment! LOL |
