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| In The Midnight Light by Holly |
| Chapter: Part XI |
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| VWalk | 06/13/2006 10:23 am |
This is great. I love the fact that Buffy is the certain one in this relationship.
The natural progression of their relationship is very exciting reading.
I am enjoying your characterization of the taciturn Oz and the babbling Willow. I really enjoy Oz's character. |
| jl1980 | 05/18/2006 06:58 am |
poor darling spike, so insecure....but that was a beautiful claim, and now its for good, and so sexy and sweet...very well done  |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 04/24/2006 11:13 pm |
ROFL! Love how you ended this chapter with the humor and slightly freaked out Willow. I love how you've written Oz in the chapters so far. So right.
Beautiful claim, and I am ecstatic that it was reciprocated. Way awesome! I look forward to when you have time to write for this one again. |
| Lorre | 04/19/2006 02:19 am |
| Beautiful story; it's a genuine romance of the traditional kind. Your writing shows a ton of promise and I hope you will continue. |
| Lynda | 04/17/2006 06:17 pm |
| Yes. Yes. Yes. What a great happy story. Noboby writes Spuffy like you do. You are my heroine. |
| lilmamaday | 04/02/2006 08:33 am |
I just love the way that you have written Willow and Oz! they actually had me laughing out loud!
The interaction between Spike and Buffy was absolutely beautiful! I can't wait to see what happens when everyone finds out that Spike has claimed Buffy! |
| Nikkole | 03/31/2006 11:01 pm |
| OMG! Willow is so priceless! Very good chapter! |
| akarinacj | 03/31/2006 06:35 pm |
| Wow. I have just read all the chapters in a row, and boy is this story good!!! Sorry if I didnīt review every chapter, but I did want to. I just love this version of Spike very likable, very Spike. Please update soon. |
| bloodshedbaby | 03/31/2006 05:49 pm |
| Porny whimpers *snickers* Love it. But dammit, I'm out of chapters. *sighs* Guess I'll have to wait patiently for the next one. Love this fic! |
| Robyn | 03/31/2006 04:28 pm |
| Thanks for the sweet, tender, and oh so hot update. I really enjoyed it, and love that Buffy was the first to say 'I love you' out loud. And I totally love Oz in this. |
| rayan | 03/31/2006 11:43 am |
| i frikin love this story..the last chapter was mind blowing....keep it up |
| UncagedMuse | 03/31/2006 09:48 am |
| Great chap! |
| SpaceLord | 03/31/2006 03:59 am |
| An hour will do.....where is Anya when you need someone to appreciate orgasms |
| Lou | 03/31/2006 02:19 am |
| The cheek of it!! Ought to call Giles? Ought to keep her nose out! |
| vladt | 03/31/2006 12:45 am |
| beautiful update, even with red's giving them a half hour, ok an hour. fun end to wonderful chapter. thanks for the fine read. |
| Jackofspikes | 03/31/2006 12:22 am |
Oh wow...ciggie break! Brilliant, the characters break and mend your heart at the same time. This Buffy is insightful and this Spike is so openly vulnerable that the desire to protect him is overwhelming. Thank you for sharing them with us.
More Please. |
| Esther | 03/30/2006 11:08 pm |
| You've knocked me over, sweetie, cause this chapter was absolutely gorgeous! From Buffy's acceptance of Spike's love, the talk about the claim/the actual claim, and Willow/Oz....couldn't stop for a second. Had me pulled in and now I'm dying for more. I just loved it!! Spectacular job! |
| Karyn | 03/30/2006 06:41 pm |
| omg!!! i loved willow in this chapter (and felt sorry for her at the same time)!!! yay claimage! hot smutty smut!! LOVED IT! great update!!!! |
| kim | 03/30/2006 06:19 pm |
| Oh, Giles definitely doesn't want to see that!! |
| MarzBar | 03/30/2006 06:11 pm |
| Oh dear, her virgin ears were assaulted by porny whispers! Where does that silly stuff come from. On thing Joss always had wrong was the innocence of the Valley Girls. Even if they are innocent in the Biblical sense, they learn to talk dirty at an early age. More story please. |
| redwulf50 | 03/30/2006 06:11 pm |
LOL, as usual true to your extremely high standards tha the rest of us seek but never match  |
| pretty_in_fangs | 03/30/2006 04:35 pm |
| ::LAUGH:: Oh, what a good chapter. And you write such a fun Oz. |
