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| Future Imperfect by Lilachigh |
| Chapter: Chp 3 The Biggest Bad |
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| Verda | 07/23/2006 07:40 pm |
| Poor Joyce, thinking that she's bad, feeling isolated, if it wasn't for her brother, she'd have no one. At least she has her grandparent's. This is really good, I like the possiblities. Thanks for the read. |
| DeanSamWinchesterfan | 04/10/2006 05:08 pm |
Good chapter.I think I hate Shanny.Billy is a teensy creepy.
Update soon. |
| redwulf50 | 04/01/2006 05:45 am |
Oh my god I like Billy  |
| wulfie, everyone else thinks he’s creepy! Ah, yes, it’s you! |
| spikes slayer2 | 04/01/2006 04:15 am |
| omg?! he is so creepy.. i fhe know all about it then why isnt he a 'powerful man-witch' (lol) himself? |
| spikes slayer2 | 04/01/2006 04:15 am |
| omg?! he is so creepy.. i fhe know all about it then why isnt he a 'powerful man-witch' (lol) himself? |
| thanks for review. Just been able to get back on this page to answer people! Hope to post next chp in LJ soon and then on sites. All might be revealed, but then again, might take a couple more chpts! |
| MarzBar | 03/31/2006 08:09 pm |
| These twins are too clever by half. BTW, will we find out who Shanshu married? Is she married to someone "normal" who hates all the demons and witches and vampires? More story please. |
| slaymesoftly | 03/31/2006 04:20 pm |
| Woo hoo! This off to a rousing start. Is it new? Or just new to us? |
| Yes, brand new story. Meant to be a one off - the first chp can be read alone - but like most of mine, I gave in to pressure and decided to make it a long one! |
| Joyce | 03/31/2006 04:19 pm |
Hmm, getting interesting.
Wonder what's Billy's mettle? Don't you think Buffy's a tad young to have grandchildren that age? Was Shanny a teen when she had the twins? I'm jealous...56 3/4 and not a grandchild in the near future although my older son is finally engaged. |
| I worked out Buffy’s age very carefully. She’s about 47/48 during this story and yes, Shanny had the twins when she was very young, as you will see as the story progresses. |
| Robyn | 03/31/2006 04:08 pm |
Thanks for the fabulous update. It is so interesting learning about Buffy's and Spike's past, and the things that have brought them to where they are at. I am looking forward to learning more about Billy, particularly with that ending.  |
| Thank you for reviewing and for following the story so closely. Perhaps their relationship with Shanny isn’t everything people would want, but I feel it is realistic. |
| vladt | 03/31/2006 03:21 pm |
| shivers instead of concealed smiles from spike, not good. very informative update. thanks for the read. |
| Yes, I get worried too about Spike and Billy. |
