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| The Spotless Mind by wall_flower |
| Chapter: Prologue: Veteris Vestigia Flammae |
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| jl1980 | 06/06/2006 07:39 am |
oh, nuh-uh...very bad vampire...get all friendly with her and then try to bite her...excellent chapter though  |
Thank you so much for reviewing- I needed someone to kick my muse back into action. She's been lazy on the job recently  |
| vladt | 03/31/2006 07:45 pm |
| very good beginning, very evil chapter ending. i happen to enjoy evil. thanks for the fine read |
| I'm glad you enjoy the evil, as more is certainly on it's way... |
| Robyn | 03/31/2006 05:13 pm |
| Very interesting start. I like how they each seem familiar to the other, and your cliff-hanger, I am really looking forward to how that is resolved. And the banner is very nice. |
| Thank you Robyn :] all will be revealed with time. Stick with the story and I'll give you cookies **hehehe** |
| idk5743228 | 03/31/2006 04:44 pm |
| I started out a little confused. For some reason, I'm slow on the uptake today. But by the the end of the first chapter you got me. I'm looking forward to this story. Memories you can't quite reach is a great premise. |
| Thank you; sorry for the confusion, it was necesary :} te he. Hope you stick with the story |
| just sue | 03/31/2006 03:09 pm |
| Wah! Is hooked and off to read next chappie. BFN |
| Hooray! Thanks for reviewing <3 |
| bloodshedbaby | 03/31/2006 03:01 pm |
| Very pretty banner and very pretty challenge response!! *goes to read the next chap* |
| Ooh *loves compliments* thank you BSB, hope you keep reading. I love writing challenge responses; always good fun, having to stick to the guide lines but be original at the same time :]:] |
