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| Paradox by Jackofspikes |
| Chapter: Chapter 15. |
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| Verda | 07/15/2006 03:17 am |
| Joyce won't have the brain tumor now, that's great, Buffy won't have to die, this is great and Angel thinks it's all about him. Great chapter. |
I just couldn't let Joyce die  |
| DarkBloodyMistress | 07/15/2006 12:26 am |
| stupid angel should eat the stupid monk and then choke and die... |
Rolf...don't hold back there!  |
| Vwalk | 05/30/2006 11:01 pm |
| Way to make Angel a fool. I love it. Great twist with the key. |
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| Vwalk | 05/30/2006 11:01 pm |
| Way to make Angel a fool. I love it. Great twist with the key. |
| I do like to write Angel as a fool |
| Fred | 05/11/2006 03:45 am |
| I love the little bits of Angel you keep throwing in. |
| Blame the bunny |
| Delicia | 05/08/2006 03:44 pm |
Nice chapter! Though sad to hear the monk blame the Keyness of Dawn for Joyce's death  Stupid Angel! He needs to get over himself. |
| but um, he's stupid |
| Joyce | 04/27/2006 06:08 pm |
| Loved how you got around the convolution of Keyness being behind a lot of trouble. You are rubbing out grief from Buffy's life bit by bit. |
| the bunny made me do it |
| Cassie | 04/14/2006 02:48 am |
| great read |
| Thank you |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 04/11/2006 04:18 am |
| .... and eventually they find the dried out husk that was Angel..... lol |
| no...need to bash some more! |
| Athenewolfe | 04/08/2006 10:03 pm |
| LMAO - the last line was the funniest; angel is so obsessed with Giles and Buffy. He has to know what is best! *giggles* intersting Dawn scenes. Glad Joyce is going to live |
| Thank you...it's getting a bit complicated LOL |
| sirc | 04/08/2006 02:24 pm |
| Great chapter. |
| Thank you |
| Onyx | 04/07/2006 06:44 pm |
| Great chapter. ::gives candies:: |
| Thank you soooo much |
| fallen_angel | 04/07/2006 01:28 pm |
| Angel's still stuck waiting*laughs like a maniac* You're too good! more Angel suffering soo please! |
| lol...I'll try! |
| slinkypsychokit | 04/06/2006 11:53 pm |
**rolls eyes at Idiot!Angel**
Very nice, Jack! Loved Spike's protectiveness of Dawn and the interaction between them all! Though, it's only a matter of time before Buffy the Younger catches on that there's something going on right under her nose. Oh, man, I can only imagine the confrontation! |
| well if you wait a little longer you'll be able to read it! LOL |
| Robyn | 04/06/2006 11:23 pm |
| Angel is a fool who truly believes that the world revolves around him. And I am really looking forward to finding out about the ritual in the book that had Spike enthralled and Angel derisive. That last paragraph was the perfect complement to the seriousness and upset of the rest of the chapter, it had me laughing. I love how you do that. The protectiveness that Spike has for Dawn is truly beautiful and I loved how he reminded her that he was already dead then grabbed her and held her close. He always seems to know what the Summers’ girls need when they are upset. But then he is practically perfect. It is so great all the good that came by Buffy claiming Spike as belonging to the Summers' girls. It gave him somewhere he truly belonged, it saved Joyce’s like, and it saved them all from the horror of Glory and all the pain that came from that. Thanks for another wonderful update. |
| only parctically??? |
| MarzBar | 04/06/2006 09:49 pm |
| The Key is depleted and invisible and Glory and Ben are locked out. Angel is going to get seriously broody, isn't he? More story please. |
| Probably! LOL |
| vladt | 04/06/2006 09:35 pm |
| enjoyable read and angel being no fool, hilarious. thanks for the fun read. |
| You are most welcome |
| Jessica | 04/06/2006 09:29 pm |
| Angel is so full of himself. I love how you set this story up. It is the perfect situation for Spike to get closer to everyone and for Buffy to see how much of a bastard Angel really is. Can't wait for more. This is a wonderful story. |
| Thank you, you are too kind |
| TammyDevil666 | 04/06/2006 09:27 pm |
| Yes, Angel, you are a fool. God, I didn't realize the world revolved around his royal arse. That royal pain in the arse needs a good kick to it. I seriously hope someone puts the pedophile in his place. Again, don't care which Buffy does it. Anyone else can also feel free to jump at the chance...lol! Okay, just had to say that. I really should not be reading any of your stories when I already have a headache, because again, they make me think way too much. That's never good for my head. It's very sensitive, but I still want more=) |
| Sorry 'bout that...do I need a warning label? |
| Irina | 04/06/2006 09:15 pm |
| I just love the way the story is playing out. I'm so glad you took care of the key situation. And as usual the Angel parts of the chapter were so funny. Wonderful update! |
Thank you kindly
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| Cewcew | 04/06/2006 08:51 pm |
| OMG!!! Angel IS so much more beound dumb then I can even beleave! Grate chappie, Love the way you just saved Joyce. Hope for the next update soon. |
| every other day! |
| redwulf50 | 04/06/2006 07:58 pm |
excellent fic as always, but is Angel a doof or what??  |
| um...yeah! |
| Time of Change | 04/06/2006 07:19 pm |
| Interesting twist on the story of the Key. Also, I can't help giggling at the thought of huggy Angel waiting for Giles. That said, I can't imagine that huffy Angel is a good thing. |
| guess we'll find out! lol |
| Shadow | 04/06/2006 05:53 pm |
let Angel wait till hell freezes over... or his hair falls out from so much gel... *grin*
Great chapter Jack. |
| Thanks sweetie |
| Kat | 04/06/2006 05:03 pm |
| Angel is a moron. I meen really what an idiot. I love spike in this chapter. I meen totally love him that was a perfect spike-dawn moment |
| Thank you...can't argue with you! |
| kim | 04/06/2006 05:00 pm |
| I had a feeling she'd be safe from Glory now. Yay! |
| LOL...yup yay |
| pretty_in_fangs | 04/06/2006 04:39 pm |
Ah, lovely. I love seeing the new/old Giles' perceptions of Spike and his girls. And I love that this time Giles is looking *hopefully* for signs that Buffy is warmign up to Spike, and not fearfully.
And Angel's such an idiot. Like all Giles' actions are designed for the sole purpose of pissing him off. |
| Giles doesn't even know he's there! |
| Harry 4Eyes | 04/06/2006 03:26 pm |
Whoops X2, posted blank reply...somebody delete that please *hides under desk* wasn't me really was the pixies the did it...really not me at all.
Anyway reason for the second post was I realised I got sidetracked in my last paragraph and forgot to finish the sentence of poor dawnie finding out she was the cause of her mother though really granny's death in the future...*puts on Dunce hat* |
| rofl...you make me laugh Harry, you are a joy to hear from |
| Harry 4Eyes | 04/06/2006 03:22 pm |
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| still ahead of me i see! |
| Harry 4Eyes | 04/06/2006 03:20 pm |
I know the whole key is the important part in this update but the Angel sections were bloody hilarious....bleedin' idiot is playing a waiting game with someone who doesn't even know he is waiting for him? What did he think he did? send send out the bat signel? Not very sharp this bloke, just have to look at his choice of automobile...convertable I mean really, for a vamp?
I can just hear him, 'You have won this round watcher. but i'll be back and the day will be mine' insert pansy evil laugh
OK so because Buffy called her sister from the future from the time period where the time the key could be used had already passed and by absorbing the past date key it changed the sell by date of past key so it cannot be used anymore? OK that made sence in a really it didn't but it did because it's one of them time continium paradox's that don't quite make sense in order to actually make sense. kinda like that sentence ;)
Poor Dawn being told she was the reason her mother who is not really her mother but in essence her grandmother because she was created using Buffy so really is her grand mother, One thing I never understood if you used the dna of one person to create a being wouldn't that person be a clone and look identical to the person created from? How would your clone end up taller, paler and with blue eyes? makes no sense to me.
To the Poof Mobile!!!!!
Update soon
Harry |
rofl...I feel like I have to run to catch up with you Harry! LOL
I love it! |
| Nova | 04/06/2006 03:16 pm |
*snicker*
I love that last part, about Angel. This is getting really interesting, I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| Thank you so much |
| SpaceLord | 04/06/2006 03:11 pm |
| Angel waiting is just too much fun....the way you make Angel is just too funny. |
| thank you...I like making him wait! lol |
| Karyn | 04/06/2006 02:59 pm |
giggles at Angel waiting and waiting and waiting..rofl
great update! poor dawnie!!
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| LOL...but she's got a chance now to be just a kid! |
| maryperk | 04/06/2006 02:50 pm |
| Great chapter, Jack. Can't wait to see what you do for the next one. |
| Thanks sweetie, but as usual I have to thank you for the help! |
| Oracleholly | 04/06/2006 02:47 pm |
Oh good, Joyce doesn't die this time. Stupid monks. But yay with Joyce not dying.
LMAO at Angel -- like anyone knows he's at the library in the first place. Wanker. |
| aparently not any more he's not! LOL...I only threatened to bobbitt him...you are a god! |
| UncagedMuse | 04/06/2006 02:42 pm |
| LMAO I love the Angel bit at the end it was just too funny. The talk with the monk was great and I really like how you have Spike and Joyce hugging Dawn. |
| Thank you...I'm really enjoying the Angel bits myself! |
