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| Paradox by Jackofspikes |
| Chapter: Chapter 16. |
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| Verda | 07/15/2006 03:28 am |
| You little minx, we already hate him, but plastic surgery? That's funny. Wonder what the monks are going to come up with? Boy did they pick the wrong one! No eeewwws about Giles, he's quite handsome in his own way, even if he's way old. Grand slam Jacks. |
He's not to old for some of us |
| DarkBloodyMistress | 07/15/2006 12:39 am |
| yes, mention it so she can go ballistic on your flabby ass.... hypocrit much |
| she wouldn't be happy, would she? |
| Fred | 05/11/2006 03:51 am |
| ROFL, plastic surgery? |
He is an idiot!  |
| Delicia | 05/08/2006 03:59 pm |
| Wow, Angel was to chicken to face the Master! I knew it! Angel thinking she needs plastic surgery was so funny. What a dork! He should think about getting a forehead reductiion first! |
| Rofl...can I use that? |
| Isabel | 04/30/2006 06:23 pm |
ROTFL Oh my God. Seriously, what a moron! Plastic surgery? Idiot  And it is so true that he could have killed the Master himself. Thanks for pointing that out. I just want younger Buffy to find out this out and really see what a poofter Angel really is. |
| I think she's coming slowly to that conclusion |
| Joyce | 04/27/2006 06:15 pm |
| Loving the teen gang's dialogue. Ooh, snarky nose comment! |
| Angél is not a bright man/vampire |
| Cassie | 04/14/2006 02:49 am |
| Angel is a bit nuts |
| You're just noticing this now??? |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 04/11/2006 04:37 am |
| OMFG! Yeah, tell her she needs plastic surgery so she can beat you to a pulp and stake you.... |
| He's an unusual individual! |
| fallen_angel | 04/10/2006 04:57 am |
| Angel you big useless jerk! stop drawing and try to do something other than brood and making mystic excuses to escape anything remotely worthwhile.Is he gonna be dust soon? would love to see Joyce dust him. |
| I get that from alot of people! |
| Robyn | 04/10/2006 01:34 am |
| Spike has it right, Angel is a wanker, I am looking forward to what Brother Luther’s phone conversation brings up. I like Buffy's traitorous voices, they often tell her truths she is unwilling to face. I love that Spike listened to himself and didn't speak up, he is so correct, if you tell Buffy she goes all stubborn, she has to see or learn it for herself. A big eww to Angel’s thoughts while still waiting in the library. This is getting even more fascinating and I am still looking forward to Buffy’s and Spike’s first meeting. Thanks for the great update. |
| Thank you..It will happen soon...er or later? |
| slinkypsychokit | 04/09/2006 12:41 pm |
Yeah! Looks like Buffy the Younger is beginning to put things together. I'd think it a bit difficult for to sneak up on her older self when the Elder has her memories. (did that sentence make sense?)
Speaking of Elder Buffy, she seems a mite miffed at her former just now. I'd tend to agree with her, seeing as how Angel was sent to prevent the Master from killing her and he, well, didn't.
Then there's the vampire in question. He seems to have made himself quite at home in Giles' office as he continues his study of Drawing for Stalkers 101. **rolls eyes**
Stupid vampire. Wanna see both Buffys kick his ass. |
| Rofl...I've said it before and I'll say it again...If I stake him I can't bash him! lol |
| Bridget | 04/09/2006 12:32 pm |
| Good chapter. Angel is really, really unlikeable. He has an idealized vision of Buffy. No wonder he was never useful. |
| In my world this is the true angel! LOL |
| Harry 4Eyes | 04/09/2006 07:48 am |
ARRGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just lost my lousy reviews...stupid bleedin internet. Me and my computers not getting on this weekend, i'm having to use my old laptop as my regular PC won't let Windows install on the new Hard drive.
right, Angels, good idea you have there mate, really should go for it, I see the merit in your thinking, definitely someone will require the plastic surgery after that suggestion is made...though I doubt it will be the girl in question...lol
Ahhh gotta love the paradox, ofcourse I completely disagree with the theory, I don't think changing the fact that Dawn is not the key would change the fact that dweebs would hit Spike and Buffy with the time ray, ofcourse it's possible that Warren will actually leave town after the robot incident as Spike would not need a robot and he would be able to escape like he originally planned...so Warren might not be the villian in season 6 because of that and the other two dweebs would be the other 2 dweebs...lol So the two owuldn't be hit with the ray and would not go back in time and the past would not change and everything would be the same so in essence everything would be the same so the dweebs would actually hit the two with the ray gun and everything would in the end change but then again the cycle begins...lol ofcourse thankfully the monk explaineed how the time can be altered and no adverse effect would take place so it is alright, otherwise i'd probably still be here tommorow going round in a loop about this.
So we looking at the possability of Buffy Jnr catching Buffy Snr and Spike? should be interesting, ofcourse if Buffy Snr is getting the new memory flashes surely she'll know before hand that she is going to catch herself so she would have enough time to hide and stop something from happening before it happened or ever was going to happen...or something like that..I think.
Ofcourse if they catch them, that would mean the inevitable jealous Buffy's X2 being jealous of the other, one for the memories of feelings she'll be getting from the jounger self and the other for being with the man of her dreams, should be interesting twist, how do you console someone who knows that they are going to end up with the person they want to be with but ca't be with because she is already with him and that person will not look at you the same way he looks at you only older version of you? And ofcourse you can't insult the other person because you would be in essence be insulting yourself...damn this is confusing, fun but confusing lol
Still loving it
Update soon
Harry |
Harry, sweetie, the part about Dawn being the Key has nothing to do with the paradox...they just got all side tracked! lol...I will get back to it though!
I try to do more fun and less confusion for you! |
| Mali | 04/09/2006 07:42 am |
| That.. that last line. I'm dying of laughter. This Angel is most definitely a shallow Angel XD |
| Yup |
| sirc | 04/09/2006 06:11 am |
| Go right ahead, Angel Great chapter |
| Rofl...I think you want Angel to get into trouble!!!! LOL |
| kim | 04/09/2006 04:45 am |
Ooooh, you're mean, having Angel mention the nose...LOL.
Of course Angel screwed up, Buffy! He lost sight of the objective. Talk to Whistler about what he was supposed to do. |
| Trust me when I say you really don't want to involve Whistler in this too! |
| pretty_in_fangs | 04/09/2006 01:26 am |
Oh, won't that be fun, whe Buffy shows up at Giles'?
And I'm really enjoying watching Buffy's image of Angel tarnishing with each revelation. Of course, I'm mean like that. |
| I'll tell you a secret....so am I! LOL |
| Cewcew | 04/09/2006 01:14 am |
I cant.. No way.. Angel just.. He... Plastic surgery!?
AAAAAAAAAAARRR! Just.... DUST!
More please. |
| ROFL...but mooooooommmm? He's fun to bash! |
| vladt | 04/08/2006 11:15 pm |
| spike keeping silent! this has to fan fic. oh, that right, it is. extremely well written fic. thanks for the fun read. |
| Thank you Vladt, that just makes my day! |
| UncagedMuse | 04/08/2006 10:29 pm |
| LOL young Buffy thinks Giles and her mom are having it off. Angel and the plastic surgery remark! I hope he gets his soon. Love it. |
| Thank you..it's coming...I think! |
| Athenewolfe | 04/08/2006 10:06 pm |
| great update sweetie - Angel is the world's biggest idiot I swear. I love how he was suppose to protect Buffy and fail. What a jerk - thunks head on desk! Loveed it as always! |
| You are toooo sweet, I love it! |
| Irina | 04/08/2006 09:56 pm |
| OMG! I can't believe Angel made that remark about plastic surgery... no wait considering what an idiot he is yes I can. I liked the bombshell Brother Luther dropped about Angel. I think Spike made a smart move when he listened to his inner voice and kept quiet. Fun scene between the teen Scoobies. Great update! |
| Thank you...Wulfie asked for angst, but my bunny demands fun...it's hard keeping the middle ground. |
| Kat | 04/08/2006 09:48 pm |
| oh dear more problems for the time travelers. at least someone has realized the implications of changing time. hmmm Angel is so bad. oh dear |
| ROFL...yes he is! |
| Max | 04/08/2006 09:10 pm |
| Please let that idiot mention that and then Buffy'll stake him and put him out of our misery- Angel would have to be the world's biggest dumbass for even CONSIDERING to mention something like that to a girl - that ranks right up there with when a girl asks you how something makes her butt look. |
| He's not too swift is he? |
| TammyDevil666 | 04/08/2006 09:10 pm |
| Are you serious? Now he thinks she needs plastic surgery? Oh yeah, he's a real winner. God, that dumbass is unbelieveable. What boyfriend would talk to their girlfriend about needing plastic surgery? That is sure to get a man castrated. I would do it if I were Buffy. She doesn't need any damn plastic surgery. Her nose is fine. I always thought that bump was cute and I feel like hitting him for thinking that it's unattractive. Okay, I know I was all against Angel getting staked in your other fiction, but I'm all for it in this one. He has never annoyed me so damn much before. I'm sure you won't disappoint. More please=) |
| LOL...I'll see what I can do! |
| MarzBar | 04/08/2006 06:50 pm |
WTF!!! Angelus is going to tell Buffy to have plastic surgery?? Unf---ingbelievable. What's up with Giles and Joyce? That's pretty funny with the children and the Ewwwwws. More story please.
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| won't be long I promise! |
| Oracleholly | 04/08/2006 05:47 pm |
| OMG! I love that Dawn thought of the time paradox. Also, love the reveal of Angel's true purpose. And the whole chapter was worth the last three lines. |
| Thank you sweetie |
| Richard | 04/08/2006 05:42 pm |
| Active timeline metaphysics. That's where the universe is a unique giant computer that can be rewound back to a previous state to explore a different branch. Before Dawn came through, it could have been a branching multiverse. And the paradox could have been a quantum superposition. Or it could have been unresolved and led to an oscillation somehow. You chose the easy way out. |
| A true scientist would never make an assuption without having all the facts and in reality boredom wasn't the emotion I was aiming for. |
| Karyn | 04/08/2006 05:24 pm |
| wonderful update!! ohhhh can't wait to hear what the monk says!!! giggles..hopefully something stakeworthy...rofl, and ewwww creepy picture guy! |
| rofl...I'd like to see a banner for that! |
| Firebird234 | 04/08/2006 05:19 pm |
| Oh yeah Angel, mention the plastic surgery, It will be a one way street to dustville *cough* I hope *cough*. I have I mentioned how much I hate Angel if I haven't then, I Hate Angel, if I have oh well. Can't wait to read more Spuffyness, you can never have enough spuffyness. |
| could not agree with you more! |
| jl1980 | 04/08/2006 05:17 pm |
| i'm with shadow...beat angel's face in with a hammer so buffy can tell *him* to get his nose fixed...lol... awesome update, great twist on "Prophecy Girl"... love this story lots |
| Thank you so much, I want a hammer too! LOL |
| redwulf50 | 04/08/2006 05:12 pm |
| Oh yeah the whole gang is about to be in the know |
| we'll see (Jack sings) |
| Shadow | 04/08/2006 05:10 pm |
*smacks Angel upside the head with a hammer* Dumbass
Methinks Giles is gonna open a can of whoopass on Angel for his whole "Its a prophecy, it cant be stopped" when he was sent there to stop it... *smacks Angel with the hammer again*
I see Spike has learned to keep is mouth firmly shut. Good for Spike. *GRIN*
Anyone wanna bet that "Young-Buffy" finds out about "Future-Buffy"?
Great Chapter Babe. *Smacks Angel again with the hammer for the sheer pleasure of it*
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| Can I borrow the hammer! lol |
| maryperk | 04/08/2006 05:04 pm |
| Great chapter. Stupid wanker not protecting her like he was suppose to. What an idiot. And plastic surgery? Can he get someon his enormous forehead? |
| rofl...bless you MP! |
