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| Disillusioned by Megan |
| Chapter: Eighteen |
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| Lou | 06/25/2006 04:39 pm |
| He's going to be trouble! |
| Cordykitten | 04/12/2006 12:51 pm |
See? I find you with your new chapter *gg* On to the read now!... ~ Awe, Spike found his love again in his darkest hour.. but he is still in danger. So Spike noticed Jessie to wake up; wonder how he'll be. .. Oh my, I think maybe Spike will be able to get free but it seems he's loosing his connection with reality. ~ After I read that Spike has a connection with Jessie I thought that he could maybe lead Buffy to him... and when Jessie senses that Spike is in trouble I'm sure he can find him. Well but it doesn't seem as if he'll do it willingly.  Thanks for the update! I'm biting my nails here |
| angelic_amy | 04/12/2006 07:42 am |
Wow...
Jesse's awakening was beautifully written. I had been holding on to the hope that he wouldn't be EVIL-evil, even though I knew it was very unlikely. His hunger to rips out his friends throats though was disturbing.
Poor Spike, being left alone with his mind. His arousal and warring visions of Buffy was very well written and totally believable. I just hope he isn't left there to hang for too much longer!
Looking forward to the next chapter, well done Megan. |
| Delilah Draken | 04/11/2006 09:08 am |
A very nice story you have written so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. I have the feeling that Jesse will want to go and help his sire.
Anyway, great writing.
I bow before your art.
- Delilah |
| Delilah Draken | 04/11/2006 09:06 am |
A very nice story you have written so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. I have the feeling that Jesse will want to go and help his sire.
Anyway, great writing.
I bow before your art.
- Delilah |
| Esther | 04/10/2006 07:55 pm |
| Whoa, that was great! I knew Jesse would turn out to be truly evil....regardless of having Spike as his sire. And Spike? Ahh....need to find out more!!! Please, begging you for another chapter!! |
| Bridget | 04/10/2006 09:16 am |
| Good chapter. I hope Jessie only stays around long enough to help Spike. After that I hope he is dusted. His thoughts are disturbing and I don't believe that he can be a vampire like Spike because he did not start out as a compassionate person. |
| Robyn | 04/10/2006 04:32 am |
This chapter is done so well that you can feel the pain of Spike and the confusion of Buffy. And Jesse, his sense of power and destruction is frightening. I am really looking forward to your next update, and I am really hoping that Spike is saved soon.
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| SpaceLord | 04/10/2006 01:58 am |
| Hmm think Jesse needs Spike to set him straight and get his shit together. |
| neo_trinityknot | 04/10/2006 12:19 am |
| Yay! Fledge Jessie awakes! |
| jl1980 | 04/09/2006 10:44 pm |
| this is so well-written its amazing...you can feel every emotion, every sensation...it's perfect...i really love this story! but please let buffy rescue spike soon!! |
| MarzBar | 04/09/2006 10:39 pm |
| Argh! I hope he brings Buffy to Spike soon, before Spike goes completely bonkers. Nice cliffie ending. More story please. |
| Karyn | 04/09/2006 10:36 pm |
| oh no! my stomachs turning thinking about what could happen next!and poor spike, whimpers! great chapter! |
| kim | 04/09/2006 09:59 pm |
Poor Spike...
Yep, didn't think Jesse'd be a nice demon. |
| Oracleholly | 04/09/2006 09:53 pm |
| OH Wow! What an amazing telling of Jesse's 'rebirth'. I bow before the mistress storyteller. |
| redwulf50 | 04/09/2006 09:52 pm |
LOL, Jesse you ain't real bright  |
