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| Blood and Fire by Addie Logan |
| Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Three |
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| Athenewolfe | 04/26/2006 07:29 pm |
I loved the bit about the blood. Yummy! And the smut is very yummy as usual *evil wicked grin* My favorite line however was this one - "Buffy decided the taste wasn't all that bad. A little salty, but not the worst thing she'd ever had in her mouth." Okay I just laughed my ass off trying to picture Buffy going analyzing the taste - and i have to wonder - what is the worst thing n her mouth ever? LOL
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| astrodex | 04/19/2006 08:08 am |
Loved this chapter. Still loving the story. Baby steps are great.
I don't like it when everything gets resolved in five paragraphs. Your character development is spot on. |
| Deb | 04/18/2006 03:30 am |
| Wonderfully angsty. One step at a time for them. |
| rayan | 04/14/2006 03:11 pm |
| i love this story...yeah i know im tellin you now after 23 chapters....*squirms in seat*.....but better late than never right...right...right???..............*shifty eyes*...hehe anyway good job...keep it up. |
| Cordykitten | 04/12/2006 05:13 pm |
*sigh* Both are hurt and sad.. And Spike brought Buffy new jeans like she said. And Buffy is bold, telling Spike what she wants. *hopes for a better turn of events* I really hope the tables turned for good now. Or getting even better? ~ I don't mind the babysteps, it's fun to read the story. And the ping pong with the chapters? Makes the angsty ones better to bear  |
| galatea | 04/12/2006 05:09 pm |
| Ooh, that was hot *and* romantic! What a beautiful chapter - made me feel all warn and fuzzy inside. Great update! |
| Bigbird | 04/12/2006 04:42 pm |
| baby steps are fine....i like this story and look forward to seeing where it going |
| Amarysso | 04/12/2006 04:03 pm |
| Enjoyed reading this chapter, nice for them to have a moment almost without depressed feelings. |
| Amarysso | 04/12/2006 04:02 pm |
| Enjoyed reading this chapter, nice for them to have a moment almost without depressed feelings. |
| sirc | 04/12/2006 09:22 am |
| great chapter |
| Peyton | 04/12/2006 08:42 am |
| Personally, I love the ping pong match between Buffy & Spike! Thanks for the new chapter!!! |
| Pam S | 04/12/2006 04:49 am |
| Enjoying the story |
| vladt | 04/12/2006 02:03 am |
| "ping pong match" can be very enjoyable when described by a talented writer. thanks for the fine read. |
| SpaceLord | 04/12/2006 01:48 am |
| I love the pingpong thing....really fits the characters....especially Buffy is great at the yes/no game and sending mixed messages |
| MarzBar | 04/12/2006 01:09 am |
| I don't how but I missed a bunch of updates. More fun for me tonight. I hope Spike can slow down enough for Buffy to catch up before he dusts from frustration. WEG |
| Esther | 04/12/2006 12:18 am |
| I loved it!! And I don't mind baby steps....lets me see all sides of the characters. More, please!!! |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 04/12/2006 12:02 am |
Very wonderful chapter!!! I enjoyed this one immensely, and it kept me in a happy smile. {Grins} This is a very good story. Life has angst in it, and you write the life and fantasy in a great combination. I will always hope for less hard angst, but you have a dedicated follower of the story either way.
Now, I'm all caught up to the current chapter from where I was before today. 11 chapters read, and there were a lot of things in there to remember. Nice writing all around. |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 04/11/2006 11:40 pm |
| Eeeeee! yummy yummy smut! yay! |
| Irina | 04/11/2006 10:56 pm |
| Not frustrated at all here, I like the way the story is playing out. Great chapter, I really enjoyed it! |
| Cewcew | 04/11/2006 10:07 pm |
| Take all the baby steps ya need, as long as you can keep the Spuffy loven comen. |
| Karyn | 04/11/2006 09:48 pm |
| take all the baby steps you need..cause damn! that was hot!!! lol, great update!! |
