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| Longer, Then Forever by Demonica Mills |
| Chapter: Chapter 18 |
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| vicki | 07/25/2006 07:42 pm |
| this story has a really great premise which i liked. I also liked the referral to the white vampire. however, i felt that the story just rushed way too fast near the ending - everything wrapped up so quickly. i think it could have gone on longer so that it didn't seem so rushed. and yet, there could have been a bit more detail about what actually happened to buffy and spike vis-a-vis the scoobies. it implied that the scoobs didn't see buffy and spike or that they were not even going to be remembered. i could have used a bit more info about that. on the whole, i would have liked you to go more in depth with buffy's return and dawns seeming negative feelings towards buffy plus i wished that spike would have gone off on the scoobs, especially xander for being so totally and completely clueless as to how to treat buffy. i too would like to see a sequel that told about what happened next for buffy and spike. thanks for writing this one - i usually don't leave a review that tells what i would like to have seen because this is your vision, after all. but i thought you might want to hear what i had to say. not that you know me or anything! haha! thanks again. |
| Pulchra | 07/24/2006 11:13 am |
| wow I really liked the ending of this story... I started reading it when you posted it at twojanes but I kinda forgot all about it... *ducks head* don't know how that happened... Love it though! |
| Milly | 06/08/2006 08:03 pm |
Wow. Impressive story. I liked it.
Would love to see some kind of epilogue, checking in several years later or something. |
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| Athenewolfe | 05/15/2006 03:26 pm |
| cool story! I really liked it - sister tara was nice. *smile* |
| Joyful Dayz | 04/27/2006 06:33 am |
| I just finished the story. Wonderful! What a great story line. White vampire, love that also. |
| Kat | 04/23/2006 08:09 pm |
| That is an ending that I totally was NOT expecting. however i did enjoy it. |
| Lou | 04/21/2006 02:34 pm |
| Cool superpowers. |
| UncagedMuse | 04/21/2006 12:11 pm |
| Fantastic fic with a wonderful ending! I love how you made Dawn, Tara's sister and erased Spike and Buffy from the others lives so that they could start their new life and mission together! |
| sirc | 04/19/2006 11:10 pm |
Loved this  |
| Spikes Slayer2 | 04/19/2006 07:24 pm |
| awww... great ending!!!! one word - SEQUEL!!!! |
| betraktor | 04/19/2006 02:36 pm |
| loved this story, liked cavebuffy a lot, very belivable, good ending but a bit sad, you leave me wanting more, sequel? please... |
| Ellie | 04/19/2006 11:01 am |
| this fic was amazing! i dont care wot uva ppl say it was gr8!! the ending i love but i think it could be improved if you make another follow on story about the guardian role!!! if u do i will sooo read it! |
| 04/19/2006 06:39 am |
| you spoilt it! it was a gr8 fic but u spoilt it with the horrid ending*sob* ...um...maybe a sequel will fix things up? |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 04/18/2006 11:10 pm |
| Nice completion to this story, De. {huggles} It was worth the wait for each chapter each week. It gave me something to look forward to. Nice work all around, and I look forward to more of your stories. |
| vladt | 04/18/2006 06:57 pm |
| very enjoyable read. tara as dawn's sister, nice touch. very sad to see this tale end. thanks for the wonderful read. |
| Robyn | 04/18/2006 05:32 pm |
| I really liked the way you ended this. As Buffy said her time here was like a dream, and with Dawn all taken care of Buffy and Spike are free to start on the rest of their journey together. |
| Nikkole | 04/18/2006 04:37 pm |
| I really liked the ending! So, it all went back to before Willow called Buffy back? VERY nice! |
| Esther | 04/18/2006 02:56 pm |
| Oooh, that was fantastic!!! I love the ending and I'm glad that Dawn decided to be Tara's sister in the end. Great story and I'm gonna really miss it. |
| Jackofspikes | 04/18/2006 02:34 pm |
I love this...You took me to a happy place  |
| Irina | 04/18/2006 01:13 pm |
| I love how Buffy used the title of the fic as a line in this final chapter. Fantastic story, I really enjoyed reading it! |
| letitia | 04/18/2006 12:31 pm |
| hate to see it end, but I am glad that Dawn is okay and she really did pick the right person. Tara will take care of her for Buffy and Spike. |
| CutieSaiyajin | 04/18/2006 12:14 pm |
| This was a great story. I'm sad to see it finally end, it was a really good read. |
| SpaceLord | 04/18/2006 11:35 am |
So were Dawn put in an alternate reality or did Spike and Buffy just erease themselfes from the current one? Brain gymnastics I say
But I loved the story over all but the end? Well I would have loved to see an epi with them in the future and giving a bit more info on what it was that they did besides watch the key (gotta get boring after a while ). |
| me | 04/18/2006 11:31 am |
| great choice with tara...loved this story...hoping for one more chapter (BIG HINT) |
| Tamara | 04/18/2006 11:11 am |
Definitely like it. And Tara is the best possible choice among the Scoobies.
The bit about tapping the orb is funny as hell. Good job. |
| whitesaphyr | 04/18/2006 10:55 am |
| i have discover this website a couple of days before and it's the first story i read... and wow ! i read it in an afternoon... and it's totally amazing !!!! |
| MarzBar | 04/18/2006 10:38 am |
| I'm glad they get to travel and be away from the Scoobies but won't the Scoobies (Xander and Willow) try locating spells, etc. to run them down? |
| Dar | 04/18/2006 10:08 am |
| That was sweet all there mundane burdens gone. Together they can be young and enjoy themselves between missions. |
| Pin | 04/18/2006 09:35 am |
| I've really enjoyed this story, with it's many turns. I like the way you sorted out everything and gave them futures that would work well. Thank you! |
| Karyn | 04/18/2006 09:23 am |
| rofl...okay that was totally unexpected! very neat ending! didn't see it coming at all! |
| kim | 04/18/2006 09:15 am |
| So, is this the end? And are they gone from the rest of the groups lives now? |
