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| Beyond Truth and Lies by Megan |
| Chapter: Two |
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| wall_flower | 05/23/2006 04:19 am |
| Wow. GreatGreat chapter!! |
| Athenewolfe | 04/28/2006 12:51 pm |
| NO!!!!!!! How horrible for Buffy - how could the powers let hium come back and then have him come back wrong. That is just awful. I can't wait to see what you write next - this is a great story! |
| 04/27/2006 11:33 am |
A flawless crystal created by none other than Leonardo da Vinci—and sarcastic cracks about her momentary confusion as to why Leo off the Titanic would waste his time on something that didn’t make him look pretty were really unacceptable.
So very Buffy. . . .
“What the hell is that? Are we conjuring Spike from the beer drinking dimension?” Buffy stared at the bottle with a mixed look of confusion and appalled curiosity.
Oh my god, that was soo funny
It was Spike.
He’d just come back wrong.
Uhoh.
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| jl1980 | 04/22/2006 11:12 pm |
wow...well when she came back and irrationally attacked *him* (for a whole season)...he was there for *her*...if she's planning on staking, i'm gonna kill her...honest...gotta read more now  |
| Delicia | 04/22/2006 11:27 am |
| Wow, great chapter! I guess it didn't work out too well. I gotta see what happens!! |
| BuffyRat | 04/21/2006 11:53 pm |
| Damn, that sucks. Poor girl, her boy but not quite... The spell and Buffy's anxiousness was beautifully written. Loved the experience. Hope they can fix him... |
| kittiekat | 04/21/2006 04:31 pm |
"That hurt a whole lot more than Buffy would have ever expected, but like the parts of herself she’d lost when she was torn out of Heaven, like little sacks of baggage checked in and lost between boarding and disembarking, the loss of Spike’s soul was devastating. He’d won it because of her—for her, and she considered it her gift. The greatest gift anyone had given her besides life, and she wanted it back. It was beyond wrong that it could have been blinked out of existence along with her town and along with a hero."
LOVED this part. So pretty!
"Andrew looked way too confident for a geek with sci-fi separation issues. “Guess whose contact was gay? I have a date for Friday night.” His smirk rivalled those of the best, and the best, as they all knew, was Spike."
lmao! So funny!
The whole imagery with the spell was fantabulously well-written! Kudos! I was so curious to see what was gonna happen, though, I was like faster Annie read faster! And so he's back. From outer space. Kidding. I'm totally looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Oh, and those last two lines - haunting. (and of course I recognize them!)
Lovely! More soon, I hope!
A.M.L - Annie.
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| Death_Dealer | 04/21/2006 04:30 pm |
| Gah, need another update. This story is so good. Kudos. PLEASE update soon. |
| Spikes Slayer2 | 04/20/2006 06:33 am |
| aww.. not wrong.. thats not fair.. *pouts* |
| Robyn | 04/20/2006 02:57 am |
| Shouldn't Buffy know by now to listen to her inner self? I love the detail you used in describing her unease, and I am looking forward to where you go from here. Thanks for the great update. |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 04/20/2006 02:45 am |
| Uh oh ... she said she checked every dimension but this one. I wonder where Spike came from. Loved this chapter, and I sooooo look forward to more. |
| vladt | 04/20/2006 12:45 am |
| beautiul set up leading to a surprising last line. great read, thanks |
| kim | 04/20/2006 12:34 am |
Previous version Spike. They asked for William the Bloody, and that's who they got.
This one isn't having anything to do with AtS season 5, is it? Wasn't sure how AU you are going. |
| Karyn | 04/19/2006 11:13 pm |
| this was such an awesome fic, i couldn't help but re-read it! can just feel Buffy's desperation! wonderful job! |
