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| Paradox by Jackofspikes |
| Chapter: Chapter 22 |
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| Verda | 07/15/2006 04:46 am |
| Growling Buffy, at Dawn no less, yay she isn't completely possesive of Spike. Man, that must have been some ugly darkness. Great chapter. |
Thank you, i went with what Ive alway believed  |
| DarkBloodyMistress | 07/15/2006 01:39 am |
| what's the new power and why is she all wiggy? |
| More information coming |
| Fred | 05/11/2006 04:30 am |
| that was beautifully written. |
| Thank you so much...you just made my day |
| Delicia | 05/08/2006 04:58 pm |
| Another wonderful chapter! I guess Angel is so not with the glowy. He must have really freaked her out! |
hell yeah! ewww  |
| Cassie | 05/08/2006 03:44 pm |
| Love the last line |
| LOL Thank you |
| vladt | 04/21/2006 04:31 pm |
| very good chapter, very evil ending. thanks for the enjoyable read. looking forward to partial enlightenment in the next few updates. thanks again |
| Thank you sooo much...evil is my middle name |
| Robyn | 04/21/2006 03:47 pm |
| Thanks for the update. I love that she was called on her growling. I am looking forward to what scared Buffy so much, and I am also looking forward to finding out more about her slayer abilities. |
| I might have to split those two things up...sorry |
| UncagedMuse | 04/21/2006 12:21 pm |
| Oh please, new chap soon! This is so awesome and I can't wait to hear what younger Buffy saw when she was looking at Angel! |
| It's grim! |
| kim | 04/21/2006 11:31 am |
| Oh, I forgot about the humanity spell still being in effect! Young Buffy got quite a vision of Angel, if he was effected by it. |
| hmmm, you could say that |
| slinkypsychokit | 04/21/2006 10:43 am |
oh god, now you're just trying to torture me, aren't you? What'd younger Buffy see? Tell me! Tell me!
**bites nails and glares at uber evil non-shareyness**
**pout** |
| Next chapter...I promise |
| Karyn | 04/21/2006 08:48 am |
| wonderful update!! can't wait for Buffy to describe Angel's humanity ...or lack thereof..lol |
| IT will be in the next chapter...promise |
| Athenewolfe | 04/21/2006 08:27 am |
| I enjoyed the parts about Angel and the inconsiderate nature - very funny |
| I'm starting to think of him as the comic relief |
| fallen_angel | 04/21/2006 08:18 am |
| whoa... what was that about? more please. |
| The answers are in the next chapter |
| maryperk | 04/21/2006 07:26 am |
| Awesome chapter. |
| Thank you,sweetie. It wouldn't be half so funny if not for you |
| Shadow | 04/21/2006 07:09 am |
*gasp*
5 bucks says she just got a glimpse of Angel's "reasons" for "falling in love with her"
SPUFFY SMUT REQUIRED!
Great chapter Jack. Keep em coming! |
| It's a little more complicated than that Shadow |
| sirc | 04/21/2006 06:04 am |
| great chapter |
| THank you |
| Irina | 04/21/2006 05:36 am |
| Yep, Wolfie is totally right older growly Buffy definitely won't share her Spike with anyone. I liked the sweet moment when the Summer's clan enfolded Buffy in group hug. Can't wait to find out what terrified Buffy so badly. Great chapter! |
| thank you-and it will be in the next chapter |
| Harry 4Eyes | 04/21/2006 04:52 am |
Oh Yeah completely forgot, this supposed time travel guru wouldn't happen to be Xander would he? All them reading comic books might actually come in use for once or did I miss something and Giles or someone else is the Time Travel Guru? Should be good for the bloke's confidence and ego, will be helpful instead of a hindrence for once...which is always good.
Well lovin it
Update Soon
Harry |
| you know I'm not gonna answer that question Harry! But nice try |
| redwulf50 | 04/21/2006 04:28 am |
| very good chappie can we dust Angel yet?? |
Not today, sorry  |
| kim | 04/21/2006 03:59 am |
She's reacting that badly just over little Buffy delivering a message to Angel? Hello, you're a Slayer. Chill.
Nice having a vision fur ball around. Helps a lot. |
| IN the next chapter you'll find out why she reacted the way she did |
| Harry 4Eyes | 04/21/2006 02:37 am |
Finally, I was almost forgot about Buffy's plan to visit Angel for a second, I am surprised Buffy Jnr didn't run straight to Giles to tell him about the twistedness of Angel or maybe she will run to Willow, definitely not Xander he'd just make it worst, which might be better as then it would mean faster dumping. But must have been pretty scary for even Older Buffy.
Loved how Buffy got jealous of even Dawn will be fun to see how she behaves when buffy jnr gets there poor Jnr she won't even be able to hide what she is thinking because Snr gets an instant playback of thought of memory...Actually come to think of it the beeting of the " Buffy's will be very confusing for Snr as she will be getting flashbacks of meeting herself same time she is meeting herself should be a laugh can't make a good impression on yourself when you know what the other person is thinking of you...lol
yup definitely need to split the 2 Spikes up, but not until after having some fun with the two Buffy's, that would be a cruel thing to do
Well loving it
Update Soon
Harry |
| If you read the next 2 chapters alot of this will be addressed...bless you Harry you keep making my day! |
| MarzBar | 04/21/2006 01:53 am |
| WTF happened to Buffy? Was it a vision or her new powers being activated or something else? Good to see that Angelus is not any more perceptive in this universe. More story please. |
| You questions will be answered in the next chapter |
| Cewcew | 04/21/2006 01:26 am |
O boy! new Slayer powers! cant wait to hear what they are.
Poor young Buffy, if old Buffy got that upset about a memory of what she saw, can only imagen how it makes young her feel. |
| you might be surprised, old Buffy is more emotionally attached to Angel at this point. |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 04/21/2006 01:26 am |
| GAHH!! Damn you!! I have to wait ANOTHER chapter to see what made her collapse and what the extra is??!! |
| um...yes (I'm evil) |
| Richard | 04/21/2006 01:22 am |
You know, in medieval theology, Hell was the only party that cared about free will. Heaven demanded absolute unquestioning obedience.
You can see it at work in Babylon 5 where the Shadows always kept trying to strike deals and the Vorlons were bossing everyone around. Think also about Faust.
Additionally, in physics there's a variant of M-theory called F-theory which has two temporal dimensions. I never understood the point. 1+1 time dimensions sure, but 2 is a lot more. Non-linear could refer to either. Hell, it could even refer to non-superpositional interaction between timelines.
Finally, please keep piling on the deliciously ironic absurdities. Like Angel calling anyone else a slacker. Or inconsiderate! Or describing his perving over Buffy as "watching over" her. |
Thank you but oddly, my own education is not lacking, and while your little ideas are amusing they don't mesh with the story I am writing.
I will try to continue with all the ironic absurdities that I am trying to subtly highlight |
| pretty_in_fangs | 04/21/2006 12:57 am |
| Well now. I wonder what all exactly she saw. |
| You'll find out next chappie |
| Kat | 04/21/2006 12:54 am |
| oh goddess what happened. That was beautifuly written and quite emotional. And hmmmmm early spike and late spike seperating. you know what funny I never would have thought of that in a million years. lol. I love twists that I cannot forsee it makes the reading so much more intresting |
| The answers will be in the next chapter |
