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| A Penny for your.... by Jackofspikes |
| Chapter: Chapter 22 |
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| Verda | 07/30/2006 03:12 am |
| Glad you used that dialogue, it felt so good to hear it again. The fight ended way to soon for me. And the nerve of him thinking he would be basking in Spike's pain being seperated from his family, arrogant ass. Another fantastic chapter. |
Thank you...I actually went for a short fight because I believe that Spike would far outclass Angel in that way  |
| deedo | 04/24/2006 03:13 pm |
yeah, I'm getting my Penny-fix again, so good to be back ^_^
Spike delivered Angel the beating he deserved, and not even his own gang wanting him back, thats just great
Xander humming the Star Trek tune, I just loved that *humming herself*
keep up those fantastic updates |
| Thank you so much...I really appreciate it |
| sirc | 04/24/2006 04:27 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank's sweetie |
| DeanSamWinchesterfan | 04/23/2006 05:44 pm |
| Good chapter.I like that Fred is Wes's soulmate.I just got Season 1 of Angel on DVD today,and it was the first time I saw the pilot.Power went out earlier,so I couldn't review. |
She didn't say they were soulmates Just that she was destined to be the love of his life!  |
| Athenewolfe | 04/23/2006 10:53 am |
| excellant everything is coming together! |
Slowly...but surely
Welcome home *HUGS* |
| Phishie | 04/22/2006 11:48 pm |
I'm looking forward to some post-challenge comforting. Methinks Spike earned some good old TLC, but I've got a feeling the *ahem* new Riley will be making an appearance. Hopefully he won't be catching Spike alone while he's recovering from the severing of familial ties.
Ohnoes! |
| So you think Riley's been turned...hmmmm???? |
| vladt | 04/22/2006 10:47 pm |
| great update to a great tale. the great rating is only slightly influenced by the fight scene. love the fic. |
| Thank you sooo much...you just made my day |
| Spikes Slayer2 | 04/22/2006 08:56 pm |
awww.. great fight.. loved it.. and aww fred hehe  |
| I love Fred, have to do something about her! |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 04/22/2006 08:40 pm |
| Damn! No dustage??! |
| Nope...and what does that tell you??? |
| Cewcew | 04/22/2006 08:39 pm |
| Grate Fight! If you can call it a fight, So totaly one sided, 1 fighter, 1 doofice, Sike so kicked that poofs sorry ass! |
| I tried but Angel gets stubborn when he underestimates someone |
| Kat | 04/22/2006 05:37 pm |
| awwwwwwwww yay for spike and all the scoobies. That was an amazingly written chapter. |
| Thank you...It was amazingly tough to write |
| mts.tyra | 04/22/2006 04:35 pm |
*is exhausted from jumping and cheering, waving her pom-poms*
Way to go Spike! You showed that arrogant SOB his place!
That was an intense battle Jack (btw what does the Jack of Spikes look like?), I really saw it happen before my eyes. Words really are your friends. Can't wait to read the next chappie.
-mts.tyra-
mts.tyra@gmail.com |
| A Jack of Swords with attitude |
| dragontiff | 04/22/2006 03:07 pm |
| woohoo!! im so proud of spike. i love the way you have written angel in this. (i have never liked him)... keep up the great work. |
| I think the fact that I don't particularly like him makes me write him this way |
| Irina | 04/22/2006 02:50 pm |
| Loved the fight. It was very sweet of Xander to add an inspiring soundtrack... lol. It's great Penny gave Cordy the heads up on Fred. Wonderful chapter! |
| Penny has to earn her place with the scoobies, she isn't there yet! |
| Bridget | 04/22/2006 02:30 pm |
| Good chapter. Hopefully that is the last of Angel. I suppose Riley will be up next. |
| LOL..at this point in time, I couldn't tell you...'cause that would be giving away the plot |
| Shadow | 04/22/2006 02:24 pm |
*CHEERS!* Spike kicked Angel's pedophiliac ass all over the place! *CHEERS!*
Great Update Jack! MORE!
(now that we had angel kickage, we need spuffy smut!) |
| I don't know what's harder to write the fight or the smut! |
| kim | 04/22/2006 02:20 pm |
Oh, how I love you...let me count the ways...*grin*
Just perfect, using some of the "Destiny" dialogue to best effect. And of course, Spike would study different techniques throughout the years. I'm so glad you included that, too.
And Yay! Fred and Wes, sittin' in a tree....
Speaking of Kirk and Spock, did you hear about the proposed movie of their early days? Who would they get to play them now? |
| They'll probably use someone totally inappropriate...like Will Smith or something! |
| me | 04/22/2006 02:14 pm |
| hmmm...i was hoping for more ass kicking :-) great chapter. |
| Sorry, that's all she wrote |
| UncagedMuse | 04/22/2006 01:37 pm |
| Love the fight scene! Excellent chap and will be waiting for more. |
| Thank you sweetie...you are too good to me |
| Firebird234 | 04/22/2006 01:25 pm |
| Ahh Spike kicking Angel's ass, I enjoyed it the first time in the Season 5 episode and I enjoyed it now. And I always belived Fred was Wesley's true love to begin with and that Gunn mucsled in when he shouldn't have. |
I really do need to do something about Gunn
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| Pulchra Nex | 04/22/2006 01:13 pm |
*Does a little victory dance* Oh yeah! that's what we call style! Never thought that Spike could controll his temper, did you Angel? You should have known, being a part of spike's 'family', that Spike never does what you expect him to do!
Loved the fight! more please?
(wow, you're great at keeping all the characters like themselves and still so different! it's great! :-D) |
| Thank you soo much...you just made my day |
| letitia | 04/22/2006 01:12 pm |
| WOW... I am glad that Angel was able to see the group comfort Spike once he was released... Angel still has so much to learn. Love the chapter. |
| Personally I think he's a lost cause! |
| Tamara | 04/22/2006 01:06 pm |
Fantastic fight scene. I love how Angel was foiled at everything.
Cordelia's line is as funny as hell. |
| Thank you, it was harder to write than it looked |
| Pin | 04/22/2006 01:06 pm |
| Great fight sequence. I hope this means that we are done with Angel....please! |
| For the moment! |
| fallen_angel | 04/22/2006 12:57 pm |
| Spike won! oh yah! ofcourse we had ne doubts. Go Jack! See I knew u weren't evil. |
| Of 'course he won...I'm evil not insane! |
| FetchingMad Scientist | 04/22/2006 12:51 pm |
| Yay Spike!! |
| I agree |
| Randi Giles | 04/22/2006 12:45 pm |
| WOW!!!! I so wish there was actual screen footage of this fight...that was exellent but i just wanna hit rewind and play repeatedly |
| Think Jackie Chan meets Howdie Doody...that'll give you a visual! LD |
| Isabel | 04/22/2006 12:41 pm |
| What a satisfying fight! That put me in a good mood for the rest of the day lol |
| I amd so pleased, just don't ask me to do it again in a while! lol |
| Eva | 04/22/2006 12:27 pm |
I really love this story and the latest chapter made me do a happy dance.GO SPIKE, show that Neanderthal who the real warrior/champion is!
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| I have to tell you I was pulling for Spike...he's kinda a favorite of mine |
| Shelly | 04/22/2006 12:24 pm |
| I loved the total geekiness of Xander. Great fight scene. Laughed my ass off. I can still see that Angel doesn't get it. He is still so self absorbed in his "greatness". His ego is unparalled. Can't wait for more!!! |
| Thank you, I wish I could write faster! lol |
| redwulf50 | 04/22/2006 12:17 pm |
| Bloody excellent can we beat up Angel again?? |
Sure...It's why I didn't dust him! lol
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| Harry 4Eyes | 04/22/2006 12:16 pm |
Fred....oh yeah she's stuck in that other dimension or is going to be, wonder where Gunn disapeared to. Maybe he doesn't turn up until later.
Well that was a pathetic fight...really you'd expect the lunp of lard to put up a better fight than that, we all knew he was going to lose but you'd have expected a better fight...but then again I guess this is what happens when you underestimate your opponent, as far as fight scenes go, this was half bad not an easy thing to right these fight scenes, as you have to describe the movement of each fighter as well damage done, etc not an east task so well done.
So I take it Angel could very well find himself back to his early days of pathetic and alone?
Well loved the update
Update soon
Harry |
| Thank you Harry, I'm gonna take that as a compliment! and Nah, Cordy will still want to talk his ear off! |
| Delicia | 04/22/2006 11:58 am |
| OOps...I meant BEAT Angel. Sorry. |
| I was with ya! lol |
| Delicia | 04/22/2006 11:57 am |
| Great fight! I knew Spike could be Angel. In my opinion he is the better fighter. I wonder what Wesley reaction is going to be! |
| What would yours be being told that? lol |
| MarzBar | 04/22/2006 11:45 am |
| Cool fight scene! Spike is so much more of a Master Vamp than Angelus ever was or could be. More story please. |
| Can I get over the fight first? lol |
| Robyn | 04/22/2006 11:45 am |
| That was a really great fight scene and a really great chapter. Loved how Spike constantly goaded Angel, and Xander's Star Trek music. Thanks for the great update. |
| Thank you, it was a scene I was dreading |
| slinkypsychokit | 04/22/2006 11:44 am |
**leads a standing ovation**
Well done! Excellent fight scene! Excellent use of the AtS dialogue! |
| Thank you soooo much...it was my first real fight scene too |
| Lou | 04/22/2006 11:39 am |
| A wonderful vanquishing! |
Thank you, I didn't think I'd ever get it done! LOL
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| maryperk | 04/22/2006 11:38 am |
| Great chapter. Can't wait to see where you go next. |
| Neither can I...any idea's? lol |
| Dolau | 04/22/2006 11:36 am |
| Oh yeah, that's the good stuff. And the Xanderhumming.... so funny :-) |
| Thank you...all thanks relating the humming must go to OHolly |
| Karyn | 04/22/2006 11:23 am |
| *giggles* yay, wes! lol, great update! love that he kicked Angels ass!!! and of course Xander being his geeky self and the Star Trek thing was too cute!! |
| Thanks Karyn, I have to thank OracleHolly for the Star Tek advice |
| Nova | 04/22/2006 11:04 am |
Very good. I like how you worded everything and now how the AI team don't want Angel back. I would laugh but I don't know whats going to happen next... see pause in laughing.
I'm wondering what is going to happen next in the Buffy/Spike situation next. Espically after all this talk of her taking him into her family. I'll keep looking for more updates.
Nova |
| I try to update every other day |
