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| Paradox by Jackofspikes |
| Chapter: Paradox 23 |
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| Verda | 07/15/2006 04:56 am |
| Puts a whole new meaning on " The devil made me do it"? Angelus corrupting Angel. Get on to the ritual! Marvelous chapter. |
Thank you so much, you really are having a day of reading, arn't you?  |
| DarkBloodyMistress | 07/15/2006 02:01 am |
| i know what my vote is for... yup |
| lol...me too |
| Fred | 05/11/2006 04:36 am |
| Buffy is gonna be pissed. |
Oh Yeah!  |
| Delicia | 05/08/2006 05:04 pm |
| Ooops. Spike didn't tell Buffy about the ritual. *sing-song* Someone's in trouble! |
| OH YEAH..and Buffy is sneaky |
| Cassie | 05/08/2006 03:45 pm |
| Great read |
| thank you |
| Isabel | 04/30/2006 10:17 pm |
| I share Spike's amusement at the idea that Xander is an expert in something. But it's true, he read so many comic books in his life that he probably knows more about time travel than anybody else lol |
| Ah...comic expertize takes on a whole new meaning |
| Athenewolfe | 04/26/2006 02:10 pm |
| excellant update sweetie - I enjoyed it very much! |
Thank you so much, you always make my day  |
| Athenewolfe | 04/26/2006 02:03 pm |
| excellant update sweetie - I enjoyed it very much! |
| THank you soo much, I do love hearing from you |
| fallen_angel | 04/25/2006 05:51 am |
| eureka! that's what u were suppose to distract me from! the ritual! common spill the beans tell us what the ritual is about. |
| Next chapter...I promise |
| Cewcew | 04/25/2006 12:45 am |
Buffy and rituals are so unmixy. Lol, Poor Buff. I am so lookinf forword to the meeting. Hop it will be as soon for me as for them tomorrow?  |
| UM....maybe??? |
| vladt | 04/24/2006 04:41 pm |
| very good read. thanks. "what ritual?" and they actually need xander for something, you are stretching the boundaries of fiction here. thanks again |
| No one will be more surprised that Xander himself! |
| pretty_in_fangs | 04/24/2006 03:58 pm |
Hey now! You can't stop there! We were about to hear about the ritual!
:;laugh:: evil. |
| Ritual next chapter...I did warn everyone I was evil...you had to expect I'd do that! |
| Richard | 04/24/2006 01:59 pm |
| Does Willow have a crush on Jenny Calendar? Cause that's what it sounds like. And surprisingly enough, it makes perfect sense. |
| Willow is being seduced by the idea of magic. |
| kim | 04/24/2006 12:05 pm |
Yes, writing a literal representation of the guilt clause was a very good idea. Haven't seen that before. I do think the soul should be anchored in Angel just so the pure Angelus can never be released. And once that's done, then Angel needs to be sent off to L.A. for Doyle's help, and hopefully, he never hears about a Shanshu reward, just to keep him a slight bit more humble.
Of course, Angelus never really had any humanity in the first place, but at least he didn't want to end the world. He liked his creature comforts, same as anybody. |
| You really want to save Angel don't you? |
| deedo | 04/24/2006 11:28 am |
it's great to be finally able to read your stories again, I really missed them
I liked how things worked out so far
The metaphor you used to describe Angels curse is quite creativ and appropriate
are they really gonna 'rescue' Tara?? that would be cool
Can't wait to find out what that ritual is all about and how the young Scoobies are going to react to all the news |
| next chapter will hold the ritual |
| Irina | 04/24/2006 10:56 am |
| Very insightful chapter, Wolfie's explanation of Angel's curse was really interesting. Can't wait to learn more about the mysterious ritual. Great update! |
| Next chappie...I promise |
| Kat | 04/24/2006 08:29 am |
| hmmmm i wonder oh i wonder |
| What do you wonder? |
| Shadow | 04/24/2006 08:14 am |
OOOO Corrupted Angel... DUST THE BUGGER!
*GRIN*
And I second Spike... Xander good for something? naahh unbelieveable... *Snicker*
Great chapter Jack... MORE! |
| Maybe he'll surprise you...but don't hold your breath! |
| Tamara | 04/24/2006 08:09 am |
Very good visualization of Angel's curse not to mention one hell of a good description of Xander.
It's because of the comic books that Xander's the expert, right?
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| Yep...it's amazing what a comic can teach |
| Harry 4Eyes | 04/24/2006 07:55 am |
uh oh...The two Brits are in trouble, but being British no doubt we can blame the French somehow, something we do very well, blame someone or something else...lol
So this spell has allowed Buffy to tap into her unknown power...should be interesting to see how she likes being with Angel when she can see the whole soul poking the demon...lol not a very nice soul is it? poking is not a nice thing to do..no wonder Angelus went all end the world crazy, it was getting poked for a century, it would drive anyone barmy...lol.
Ofcourse won't be a problem for long as Buffy gets her Salty goodness soon as Cordelia would say. Well that is if the two Spikes can be split in two that is ;)
Xander time paradox expert, he's going to milk that one for all it's worth that's for sure, ofcourse won't get him anywhere with Buffy but will be good for his soul.
Well still loving it
Update soon
Harry |
| oh yeah...I see Xander definately milking the situation |
| sirc | 04/24/2006 05:50 am |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
| betraktor | 04/24/2006 04:36 am |
| evil cliffhanger....but I guess you are entitled. Love the story please continue.... |
| What can I say...evil is my nature |
| redwulf50 | 04/24/2006 04:20 am |
| bloody excellent chappie |
| You are so spoilt...I'm thinking rations |
| kim | 04/24/2006 03:40 am |
Dunh-dun-duh......Wolfie let the cat out of the bag...
Heh..there's no hiding from what's going on with Angel now. It really was a stupid curse not to just bind the soul to him. |
| Ahhh, but you see that's the nature of the curse...It's not meant to be a blessing |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 04/24/2006 02:02 am |
| WHAT RITUAL???!! |
| read the nest chapter and you'll see |
| Robyn | 04/24/2006 01:03 am |
Thanks for filling us in on what Buffy saw when she looked at Angel. Your visual of what is going on with him is the perfect explanation of him. Also thanks for the clarification of Xander's humanity. Now do we finally get to find out about the ritual?  |
| Next chapter...the ritual |
| Yzba | 04/24/2006 12:38 am |
| grrrrrrrrrr...more please? |
| LOL...it's coming...promise |
