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| The Worlds Revolve by Dark Eyed Seer |
| Chapter: About A Girl |
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| VWalk | 05/26/2006 01:36 pm |
| I'm so excited to find the sequel is being posted. I love the characterization of Dawn (and everyone else). Smooth the way your brought her in. Can't wait to see what happens |
| sirc | 04/30/2006 05:13 am |
great start  |
| linpen | 04/26/2006 11:25 am |
| I really enjoyed the way you combined the canon version of dawns introduction with your story.looking forward to more. |
| jl1980 | 04/25/2006 11:16 pm |
| excellent start to this sequel...i am liking it already and can't wait to read more, great portrayal of dawn |
| MarzBar | 04/25/2006 08:54 pm |
| What a good start! Will we have lots of the Queen Whiner's POV throughout the story? More please. |
| vladt | 04/25/2006 03:14 pm |
| great start, looking forward to following this tale. thanks for the read. |
| Lou | 04/25/2006 07:40 am |
| I hope a snooze doesn't make him forget. |
| letitia | 04/25/2006 07:19 am |
| WOW.... we have Dawn in the picture now and Spike can tell right off the memories are fake. Love the family interaction... Just like a little sister, I KNOW. So glad to see the sequel. |
| fallen_angel | 04/25/2006 06:31 am |
| cool start. just know t'm gonna love it as much as This is the Way the World Ends. |
| SpaceLord | 04/25/2006 04:47 am |
| Love the start....I've always been a fan of the Dawn/Spike friendship....when done well it's really nice to read. |
| Spikes Slayer2 | 04/25/2006 04:42 am |
| omg!! i totally forgot dawn wasnt in the other story.. great beginning would love to see more!!!!! |
| neo_trinityknot | 04/25/2006 04:13 am |
| Squeequal! Yay! |
