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| Menehune and Night Marchers by gotkona |
| Chapter: Chapter 2 |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 05/23/2006 01:10 am |
| Awesome chapter. You really have Spike down pat with this. His playful snarky attitude that we loved so much. Nice way for Buffy too. I like this Buffy much better than the bitchy Buffy that we've been getting in so many stories lately. It's nice to get a respite from that. |
| I like nice Buffy too though most of the time she was bitchy Buffy. |
| Athenewolfe | 05/09/2006 05:29 pm |
| very interesting way to bring him back - i wonder what Buffy will do with him.... |
| Do you really wonder?;) |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 04/27/2006 10:36 pm |
| ooooo yummy! spike... gah |
| Robyn | 04/27/2006 07:38 pm |
| This chapter was very nice, I loved that you had Buffy confused and off balance but as soon as it really hit her that Spike was back she jumped into his arms and kissed him. It was a move that I could really see her making. |
| Thank you for the nice review. |
| tina | 04/27/2006 05:30 pm |
| This is nicely written but the plot seems a bit too rushed. The idea behind it is amazing, the wishing thing, but maybe... giving spike and buffy a little time to get to know each other again before they throw themselves at each other? You don't need to cheapen this intricate plot by obligatory smut, right off the bat. I usually do not review but I felt like I should say something here. I mean no disrespect, btw and I hope it's not taken that way. |
| No disrespect taken and btw this is my first attempt at writing so timing isn't a strong point with me yet. It's a rather short fic too so things do move a bit fast here. |
