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| Guilty Soul by UncagedMuse |
| Chapter: He Who Knows Best |
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| Athenewolfe | 06/01/2006 12:04 pm |
| growls growls and more growling - I can't wait for the blond to put him in his place - of all the stupid... growls growls and mor growling - fab entry sweetie! |
| LOL Thanks for reviewing me Stephie and making me laugh. |
| wall_flower | 05/23/2006 04:03 am |
| Angel is such a jerk- looking forward to Buffy taking him down a peg or two. Or fifty. |
| LOL Well, I posted Buffy's journal entry on Angel just yesterday. I hope when you read it you like it, but there is another 3 chps to go before she actually makes it to LA to kick his butt. |
| Bridget | 04/29/2006 06:44 pm |
| Thanks for the update. It is amazing how clueless Angel is. I can't wait to read the chapter on Angel. Please update when you can. |
| Sorry it took so long for me to answer but I didn't know I had this review. Thanks so much for continuing to read the fic and I'm really happy you like it. |
| redwulf50 | 04/28/2006 03:51 pm |
| can we beat the shit out of Angel yet.....please?? *Big Wulfie Manga eyes* |
| Those big eyes aren't gonna work on me. LOL The beating isn't yet but the next chap is Buffy's journal entry on Angel. *evil grin* Such fun to come. |
| Lou | 04/28/2006 03:36 am |
She's writing all the things I wanted her to be thinking on the show!!
Wait till Bossy Boots reads about himself! |
| LOL Happy you like it. Thanks for reviewing. |
| jl1980 | 04/28/2006 12:44 am |
| hate angel for reading her personal stuff like this....just seems so terribly invasive..i guess cause it is...lol...but i want the next chapter!!! and hope angel gets a big nasty surprise when he reads it!!! |
| Thanks for reviewing. I hope I can do the Angel journal enty justice. LOL |
| fallen_angel | 04/27/2006 11:42 pm |
| Angel thinks he knows best huh? stupid poofter! hope Buffy has written all sorts of horrible things about him. |
| LOL so glad you're liking it! Thanks! |
| Esther | 04/27/2006 11:40 pm |
| Oh mama, that was fantastic!! I love how well you explore Buffy's mind in this story. I'm reading it and thinking: 'This is exactly what Buffy would be thinking.' And then having Angel's self-righteous thoughts at the end. Gah!! Can't wait for more!! |
| Thanks sweetie! Glad you likes. |
| letitia | 04/27/2006 09:45 pm |
| happy to see the chapter. And Angel doesn't know what is coming his way. He is only getting a small part of the story and I hope he makes it to the end before she shows. |
| The main characters will all have a journal entry he gets to read before she gets there to kick his ass! LOL thanks for reviewing. |
| vladt | 04/27/2006 09:21 pm |
| excellent read. buffy still loves giles, but forgiveness, he does not deserve. and sir ego, well, i am sure, what you are going to be doing to him will be partial payment on what he desrves. love the fic. thanks for the wonderful read. |
| Working on things to knock Angel down a peg or two with the next journal entry. Thanks for reviewing! |
| Robyn | 04/27/2006 07:17 pm |
Right now I just want to hit Angel with a wrecking ball right to the face.
Reading her journal entry about Giles was heartbreaking. It reminded me of how many times she had been betrayed by him, the one person who should have understood what she was going through, and helped her with it. I am looking forward to Angel's entry, in particular after what she said to Wes about it, and for Buffy's visit to LA. Thanks for the great update. |
| I'm so glad you are still enjoying the fic. I'm working right now on every instance I can use for Angel's journal entry. LOL Yep want it to be all canon along with my feelings on him. *evil grin* Thanks! |
| Nikkole | 04/27/2006 04:42 pm |
Good Lord I hate him sometimes. I really think you have a very good grasp on what they SHOULD have put in the show. They made it seem like Buffy was immature, irrisponsible, and whiney. Yes, she rally could be, but I feel like they made us overlook all of what had happened to her in the few years she was a slayer. You were right in adding that she had thought about suicide, any normal person would have!
All in all, an excellent chapter! I can't wait for more! |
| I'm glad you like it so much. I hope you will continue to enjoy the things to come. Thanks for reviewing. |
| pfeifferpack | 04/27/2006 04:41 pm |
Oh please...yes...DO go Angel and actually put voice to that attitude! Buffy's older now and wiser and instead of seeing this older hot guy looking out for her she'll see the arrogant ass you've always been! LOL
Can you tell I love the chapter?
Her take on Giles was far too kind IMHO. At least from what Buffy had as evidence she is being too nice. I've always wondered if Giles felt he'd been too unconventional a watcher and it had led to Buffy dying and that was why he went to London and had Quentin Travers personality transplanted into him.......Oooo ooooo....the council did that bodyswitch thing with Giles and Travers!!!! Yes, that's it!!!! (another plot bunny is born!).
Kathleen |
| Yes, I went a little easy on Giles but I couldn't add all the crap he did in s7 since in this fic she was writing it in s7. LOL Glad you enjoyed it. Now I just have to rip Angel to bits. LOL Thanks for the review. |
| akarinacj | 04/27/2006 04:25 pm |
| Very interresting story. Hope you update soon. |
| Thank you very much for reviewing. |
| gaillee | 04/27/2006 04:19 pm |
| This is an awesome story. Thanks so much. I hope you can begin to update more often. I'll be watching... |
| With my kids school year coming to an end soon and all the things that go along with it, I don't think I will be able to except for every 2 weeks. Sorry but thanks for reviewing. |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 04/27/2006 03:54 pm |
| Over confident and arrogant ass! What an idiot Angel is. I can't wait to see what you write for his journal entry. I hope it puts Angel right in his place, Rae. Nice chapter. Loved it! |
| We all need a little Angel bashing from time to time. LOL Thanks for the review. |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 04/27/2006 03:54 pm |
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| kim | 04/27/2006 02:59 pm |
Geez, he's completely oblivious to her pain.
Okay, I don't think the real Angel would be this bad, but this does provide an entertaining contrast to Spike and Wes in the story. And Buffy's on her way.... |
| No, I know the real Angel wasnt' this bad, but you have to agree he had an ego. LOL I couldnt help myself. I had to take all his flaws including the ego and make them larger than life. *evil grin* It's fun to let loose sometimes and this is my fic for all the things that drove me bonkers. LMAO Thanks for reviewing. I hope you can continue to read and enjoy. |
| Dolau | 04/27/2006 02:21 pm |
| Oh man, toes cringing all over the place thinking about Angels thoughts.. You sure know how to write his delusions :-)lol. But also kind of fun to read, knowing that Buffy is on the way... And seriously pissed to :-) Yay.., Can't wait to read what excuses he will come up whit, when he gets to read the entry about himself. Really looking forward to next chapter, please update soon. |
| I promise to update as soon as I can. Thanks for reviewing. |
| Kat | 04/27/2006 02:06 pm |
| OMG what a moron Angel is. I meen huh that is just the stupidist thing that I have ever heard (not as a writer but the characters thoughts lol) I meen does he realize that she would never had a relationship with him if that was the case. |
| LOL Thanks for reviewing and I hope you enjoy the rest to come. |
| Jackofspikes | 04/27/2006 01:58 pm |
I love this, every time you update it's like christmas and my birthday all in one day, Thank you.  |
| Thanks for making my day! *hugs* My brain hurts. |
| pretty_in_fangs | 04/27/2006 01:39 pm |
| Nooo! Sorry, I just found this story and I hated comign to the end of what's been written. It looks like it's going to be a fun ride and I can't wait to read more. |
| More as soon as life allows. Which probably means about 2 weeks. I'm really glad you're enjoying it and thanks for reviewing. |
| Isabel | 04/27/2006 01:39 pm |
Oh. My. God. You write such a frustrating Angel. Frighteningly dumb. lol I love it. I love how as we get into Buffy's writing and how insightful she is being, how clearly she sees all the events that happened to her over the past couple of years, then it cuts back to Angel and it makes him sound even dumber lol That's just great. I hope she kicks his ass really bad  |
| This is my Angel bashing fic. LOL I took all the things that annoyed me about his and the slayer's relationship on the show and just mutiplied them. Yes, there will be ass kicking coming when she gets there. Thanks for reviewing. |
| Spikes_lizard | 04/27/2006 01:09 pm |
Okay i getting pissed buffy needs to so stake angel and kick giles,willow and xander asses
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| LOL There is still 3 more journal entries to go as well as a little Buffy/Dawn interaction, some Wes/Fred goings on and more Spike/Wes talking too. Sorry if it's taking to long to get there. Thanks for reviewing. |
| MarzBar | 04/27/2006 01:09 pm |
| ACK! Good intelligent thoughts from the Slayer about her lot in life. Bad stupid thoughts from Angelus who does not understand the Slayer's needs, just his own desires. More story please. |
| Thanks and there will be more as soon as I can. |
| SpaceLord | 04/27/2006 01:03 pm |
| Well it's sure to be some nice Angel bashing in the next chappy |
| I hope you enjoy it too. Thanks for always reviewing. |
| Karyn | 04/27/2006 12:57 pm |
| awesome chapter...god he's such a jerk! *screams* please oh please let buffy kick his ass(ignore me, just rambling at the total ass-ness that is angel)lol...wonderful job!!!! |
| Angel will get his in the end plus this next chap with the journal entry on him is gonna smack him right in the face. LMAO thanks for the review. |
| Oracleholly | 04/27/2006 12:29 pm |
First thought: Angel is a complete and utter ass! How could anyone read that and think the things that he did. *throws hands up in frustration* Of course he's not supposed to be reading it, but that's a whole other rant, which I'll save you from.
I love this introspective Buffy and considering the time when she wrote this entry...I can see how this affected her decisions regarding Spike and Giles there at the end.
And Rae, speaking as someone who doesn't post every week...and sometimes it takes more than a month...believe me, I'm here whenever you decide to post. Let RL happen and we'll all still be here for you. |
| Angel will get what's coming to him soon. LOL I always found it frustrating that she never really saw the things that others and herself did on the show. That's the whole reason behind this fic. Thanks for the review. |
| maryperk | 04/27/2006 12:12 pm |
| Great chapter. Poor Buffy. I always thought her friends didn't treat her very well. And Angel. Boy talk about ego. |
| Yes, he's the man with the ego, always assuming he knows what's best. That's why I'm bashing him with this fic. LOL Thanks for reviewing. |
| TammyDevil666 | 04/27/2006 12:11 pm |
| Excuse me? The error of her ways? Can I seriously hit him now? The bastard isn't even paying attention to what he's reading. He has no right to read anything of hers. I hope the next entry is full of negative stuff about him. He needs to be taken down a notch, or twenty. Sure, he can go to Rome. Just as long as Buffy is going to LA at the same time...lol! That would be funny if they happened to miss each other, but I do want her to give him a piece of her mind. Good chapter, can't wait for more=) |
| Buffy's soon to be in the air, so nope he won't be making it to Rome. LMAO I know I've made Angel sound a little dumber than normal with this fic, but when it came to Buffy he always thought he knew what was best and I've always wanted to bash the heck out of him for that. Thanks for always reviewing. |
