Fixing the Factors by ImmortallySpuffy
Chapter: Prologue
 
Verda08/03/2006 06:36 am
Very interesting beginning. As long as Dru's not trying to get Spike back I have no problem with her. What kind of spell did Willow think she had, a cleansing and rebirth, sounds a little hinky to me. Very good start, thanks for the read.
Thanks so much! *g* At this point spells are playtime to Willow.
Soul of the Rose07/26/2006 02:18 pm
Good start - very intriguing. Looking forward to seeing where you take this. I like the idea of Drusilla as a (sort of) good guy -helping Spike meet his destiny. Nice job
Hee! Yup, Dru's playing matchmaker...and loving it! Thanks!
~*~Tasha~*~07/26/2006 01:36 pm
Dru and Willow both doing magic spells. Now that is an accident waiting to happen. {chuckles} I loved the opening banner for this one. Karyn, you do awesome banner work.

I have read this while I was putting it up on Jack's site, but I hadn't reviewed here. Naughty me.
Thanks so much Tasha! *hugs*
VWalk07/20/2006 01:22 pm
This is a great beginning. I love fics with Willow's wonky magic, especially if she gets her comeuppance in the end for trying to be controlling. (That wasn't a hint

Can't wait to see how this goes.
Thanks! Glad you liked it! and yes, willow just doesn't learn *grin*
Cassie07/13/2006 07:09 am
great chapter
Thanks!!
tg198206/26/2006 02:26 am
I have finally got around to reading this. It's really good.
Thanks!! hope you enjoy the rest as well.
Timeofchange05/22/2006 06:29 pm
What a delightful beginning!

>>Magic always took so much out of a ghoul, after all.>>

Hee.
*grin* yup, magic is tiring stuff...glad you liked it! Dru's one of my favorites!
wall_flower05/22/2006 12:41 pm
Fantastic premise; can't wait to read more of this *trundles of to chapter two*
Thanks, lots of fun to be had with a scheming Dru...lol
Delicia05/08/2006 01:01 pm
Oh, I'm so excited by this story! Can't wait to read the next chapters, which I will do right now!
Yay!! glad you liked it! should have lots fun stuff coming up!
Athenewolfe05/08/2006 11:51 am
Wonderful beginning girls... I am looking forward to this story! It looks so intriguing!
Thanks, should be lots of fun, we have a bunch of ideas going..lol
Kat04/30/2006 02:46 pm
I will defentially be wating on mondays for updates. I can see that this has great promise in a story. And I loved dru here
Forgot i have an appointment in the morning and i dont want to make anyone wait...so i'm updating tonight!
hope you like it...and yes Dru is lots of fun!!!
Joyce04/30/2006 07:37 am
Willow's first statement nailed the character perfectly. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. I love time loop ala Ground Hog Day type stories.
Well hang on cause its getting ready to start...lol...hope you enjoy!
zanthinegirl04/30/2006 04:00 am
I think this has to be the only fic I've ever read where the drippy antler's demon was a main character! Interesting idea. You're probably right about Drusilla's chars though. They'd have to be pretty momorable to make up for her nuttiness!

Wonderful start! What a clever idea; and I'm impressed with your sensory details. Very evocative. Also well done capturing both Willow and Drusilla's character-- they 're some of the tougher character's to write well; but you've got them both spot on.

Looking forward to more!
Thanks, have been told i have a talent for Dru and Willow....not sure what that says about me..rofl..new one up soon!!
Robyn04/30/2006 02:34 am
I loved Dru's analysis of Willow, she was right on with her description. I really like the idea of Buffy and Spike repeating the same day until they get it right. This fic looks very interesting and I am looking forward to following it.
So glad you liked, hope you continue to enjoy!!
MarzBar04/29/2006 11:40 pm
Intriguing start. What will Drusilla's spell do to Willow's spell and WTF does Willow think her spell will actually do to her friends? I hope the first Monday update is May 1st.
Willow, like always, just thinks she's 'helping' but don't worry, her spell isn't going to be anything like she thought it was...*evil laugh* and yes next update is on the 1st and then every monday! hope you enjoy!!
letitia04/29/2006 08:27 pm
love the start of the story. I wonder what did Dru put in place as well?? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Dru put in place a nasty little spell that lets us have lots and lots of fun...lol...glad you liked, next chapter up monday!
Esther04/29/2006 07:48 pm
Wow, what a great intro!! You've got Willow and Dru down so well, I would swear you were one of the Buffy-verse writers. Very well done! Can't wait to find out more!
Well, you wouldn't be the first to tell me that...i don't know what that says about me though...*grin*
vladt04/29/2006 07:09 pm
very intriguing start. always loved dru. she and tara were the two most under writen characters in canon. really enjoy this. hope for a lot more. thanks for the fun read.
Yes, i love Dru and Tara as well, we're gonna have some fun with this one, hang on for the ride! lol
Lou04/29/2006 05:43 pm
Nice start - this could be fun.
Yes, we're planning on having some fun with this one! Glad you enjoyed the start! Lots of stuff to come!
CutieSaiyajin04/29/2006 04:57 pm
This was a great start. I can't wait to read more!
Next chapter will be up Monday! Hope you like it!
redwulf5004/29/2006 04:43 pm
bloody excellent it is
thanks wulfie! lots of riley/angel bashing to come! get ready!!!
maryperk04/29/2006 04:09 pm
Great start. Can't wait to see where you are going.
Thanks mary, think you'll like what were going to do with it! lol
bloodshedbaby04/29/2006 04:03 pm
so like.... an update in two days? *looks hopeful* Sorry it took so long to get put through! I'll put this name on the validation list though so the cahpters wonn't get held up. *nods*
Yes, Day one is all beta'd and ready to go, thanks for the validation! Don't worry about it taking a while, i had seen last night you were having virus issues! hope you get it sorted out...and hope you like the fic!