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| Truth and Lies by Celest |
| Chapter: Prologue |
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| jl1980 | 07/26/2006 11:15 pm |
very interesting beginning to this tale...looking forward to reading more of it...its an interesting twist on the backstory  good job |
| jl1980 | 05/03/2006 07:28 am |
| intriguing start...i very much like this, can't wait to see where you take it |
| Thank you for continuing on-it meant a great deal to me. I just hope it doesn't get too weird...for me, or you guys. I'm trying to get everything down right... |
| redwulf50 | 05/01/2006 05:32 pm |
| ok, good plot, very good start |
| Thank you! Things are going to be a little crazy at first, this is all just background information, I'm just trying to set things up. That's why the chaps are so short! |
| vladt | 05/01/2006 01:51 pm |
| good hook, good beginning. now, we patiently(not) await more. thanks for the fine read. |
| I'm trying to get the chaps out quickly, I submitted chapter one, and am working on chapter two now. |
| MarzBar | 05/01/2006 09:04 am |
| Good start with a big mystery so we must continue to read if we want to find out about the wife and child of the vampire(s). More story soon please. |
| I'm glad you thought so! I was worried I was making it way too obvious where I was going with this. And I'm already half-way through the second part, so I should have it up sometime this afternoon if I like how it turns out. Wish me luck! |
| sirc | 05/01/2006 05:36 am |
| I liked it |
| Thank you! I really appreciate it, I've been nervous ever since I submitted it last night. |
| Robyn | 05/01/2006 02:27 am |
| What a fantastic start, I am glad that you decided to post. I am really looking forward to where you go with this. |
| Thanks! Like I said, this story's been on "repeat" in my head for the past three years, so chapters should come fairly quickly. It's going to get a little rough, but you guys are going to have to trust me on this one. |
