Home | New/Updated | Completed | Authors | Titles | Search | Sweet Temptation | TopTen | Betas | Challenges | Tools | Chat | Help | Login Truth and Lies by Celest Chapter: Chapter One   sirc 05/04/2006 10:27 am great chapter jl1980 05/03/2006 07:31 am im starting to be quite intrigued by this...off to the next chapter Thank you! i was really worried about that chapter, things didn't move quite as fluidly as I would have liked-I'm glad it still kept your interest, though! Robyn 05/02/2006 05:52 pm I really like this fic. I like how you give us the thoughts of the characters as a way of us getting to know them. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you! I was worried that you guys would want more dialogue, I'm trying to keep the setting of the story-namely 1700s-1800s-without compromising its believability, it just wouldn't be "realistic" to hear "like" every five seconds, and it's really hard to write in a way we don't normally speak, without reducing the reader to giggles. There'll be more of a balance later; but there will probably still be more thought than you normally see in most stories. That's just part of my writing style. vladt 05/02/2006 02:05 pm very good read, thanks Thanks! I was worried it didn't flow very well. Disclaimer If you are under the age of 17, please use your head and do not read fics that are labeled "NC-17". Parents, I cannot control what your children are reading, so please be advised that the majority of the fics archived here are NOT suitable for those under the age of 17. I do not own Buffy the Vampire Slayer and I am in no way making any profit from this site. This is for pure entertainment purposes only. 2004 copyright-bringonthebloodshed.com