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| Out of this World by kittiekat |
| Chapter: December |
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| Athenewolfe | 05/10/2006 12:20 pm |
| That was a very nice first chapter -I really enjoyed the part about kissing after they said hello. Very nice! |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 05/06/2006 07:48 pm |
| Nice start to this one. I saw that you said it was completed. So, I kind of wanted to wait until it was all done to read. Since it's all posted now, I get to read. YEAH!! {grins} |
| Robyn | 05/03/2006 10:37 am |
| I really like this beginning and how nice her and Spike’s reunion was. I like how you gave us pieces of the conversation, letting us enjoy it but not dragging us through it. And even though she had to rush to catch her plane, I like how things still felt good between them. |
| vladt | 05/02/2006 05:24 pm |
| very fine start. love the easy in conversation, love the chapter. thanks for the read. |
| delusional_harm | 05/02/2006 03:19 pm |
| Very interesting and well-written. I enjoyed it so far =) |