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| Truth and Lies by Celest |
| Chapter: Chapter Two |
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| sirc | 05/04/2006 10:32 am |
| great chapter |
| vladt | 05/03/2006 06:48 pm |
| excellent read, and that was difficult to write because i so hate angel/angelus. love the tale, more please. thanks for the read. |
| So do I normally! He gets a bit. . . pompous, the way he treats everyone around him, and he's not exactly the sharpest crayon in the box. Yeah, bring hell unto Earth, really smart, exactly. . . what was he going to eat? And aren't really susceptible to fire (if they were going with fire and brimstone)? That always bugged me. |
| MarzBar | 05/03/2006 09:41 am |
| Interesting that Angelus managed to impregnate this girl (Dru?). How will Spike come into the family and how will they get even with the Wankers' Council? More story please. |
| I actually just updated. And yeah, it's Dru. Don't worry, you'll find out! |
| LiquidVamp | 05/03/2006 08:24 am |
| So far i am loving the direction of the story. At the moment i don't think lack of dialog is holding it back at all. Can't wait for more. |
| Thanks, I've tried to write more dialogue, but always scrap it. It just doesn't fit with what I'm trying to write, so, lots of thinking's going on. Eh. I'm glad it's not affecting the story, thank you so much for taking the time to review! And I should have the next chap up w/i the next two hours. |
| jl1980 | 05/03/2006 07:34 am |
very very good so far...can't wait for more...you portray angelus well, evil and scary but still with emotions...good job  |
| Wow. . . thank you so, so much. He's difficult to write, as he's pretty dark. I was worried that I needed to have Dru chained to the bed or something, was worried he was too fluffy. Beware: he hets a bit bunny-like in the next chap, Anya'd hate him! |
| Robyn | 05/03/2006 02:33 am |
| Thanks for the update I am still really enjoying this fic. And as for Angelus you are doing a good job with him. |
| Thanks for taking the time to review! I'm glad that he doesn't seem forced, he's the one tugging the most against where I'm going. =) |
