The Bloodshedverse :: Spuffy with Bite


Truth and Lies by Celest
Chapter: Chapter Five

jl1980	07/27/2006 06:02 pm
wow...how awful...poor little baby...he was defending her, this time...though that doesn't make up for all the other atrocities he'd committed...great chapter
sirc	05/17/2006 09:49 am
well done.
vladt	05/08/2006 01:42 pm
yes! yes, i read every lovely word. yes, i enjoy the way you are moving the story along. yes, i like the mini chapters. yes, i would enjoy longer chapter. yes, just yes! thanks for the fine read.
I'm glad you like it, thank you so much for responding to my little inquiry!
Robyn	05/08/2006 06:16 am
Even mini chapters are good. I like the progression you make in each chapter with their little girl as she ages and learns more about her parents. I am really enjoying the story, and yes I read the introductory part, I read everything you put on the page.
Thank you! I know they seem a little random, but they help start the chapter off, I needed something to introduce the next little snapshot of their lives together, so it works.