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| Brave New World by JamesMFan |
| Chapter: Brave New World |
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| Isabel | 06/18/2006 11:03 pm |
| I love it when I first chapter makes me eager to read the rest of the story. Great start. I don't know why I haven't started reading this story before. The summary sounded interesting. I'm glad I gave it a try tonight. |
| Athenewolfe | 05/20/2006 07:49 pm |
| I am enjoying the premise of this first chapter - I can't wait to see what happens and why the police are arresting Buffy, |
| Spikez_tart | 05/17/2006 08:42 pm |
| No, listen, see – he was a vampire - That explanation always works. Poor Buffy, just when you thought it couldn't get any worse an Evil Writer comes along. Interesting start. |
| Nikkole | 05/17/2006 04:06 pm |
| Hmmmmmm, interesting. I wonder what the heck happened in transit. |
| Nikkole | 05/17/2006 04:06 pm |
| Hmmmmmm, interesting. I wonder what the heck happened in transit. |
| Athenewolfe | 05/11/2006 06:08 pm |
| Very intriguing - I like this first chapter and can't wait to see where you take this! |
| Athenewolfe | 05/11/2006 06:08 pm |
| Very intriguing - I like this first chapter and can't wait to see where you take this! |
| SinisterChic | 05/11/2006 02:44 pm |
| Whoa, you have me completely confused and engrossed. |
| fallen_angel | 05/09/2006 03:39 pm |
| whoa what happened? Totally fantastic first chapter. i'm hooked already. |
| Lilachigh | 05/09/2006 11:14 am |
| So pleased the writer’s block has been dissolved. Love the beginning of this one. I am hooked already. |
| Spikes Slayer2 | 05/09/2006 05:39 am |
| OMG?!?! please update!!!! |
| N | 05/09/2006 04:35 am |
| very interesting start, hope to see more of it soon. |
| MarzBar | 05/09/2006 12:53 am |
| Weird! She's not in Sunnydale any more. More story please. |
| vladt | 05/08/2006 11:43 pm |
| great opening chapter. your past tales tell me this will be a wonderful read. thanks |
| jl1980 | 05/08/2006 11:34 pm |
awesome start...cant wait to see where you take it from here  |
| Richard | 05/08/2006 09:22 pm |
OMG, this is AWESOME.
And a hearty thank you for pointing out that large numbers of people really do win over individuals. |
| kim | 05/08/2006 08:43 pm |
Whoa...she ended up somewhere that vampires have become good guys...
Typical Buffy, though, act first and ask questions when everyone's dead. |
| Jess Marie | 05/08/2006 08:20 pm |
| This is one of the most original ideas I've read in forever. Really excited to see where it goes. |
| angelic_amy | 05/08/2006 07:26 pm |
| OMG what the hell is going on! I love the beginning and cant wait to see where you go from here. |
