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| Of Light And Shadow by FetchingMadScientist |
| Chapter: Cradle of Civilization |
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| Verda | 07/13/2006 11:40 pm |
| What the hell's wrong with her? all she had to do was open her mouth. Could smack her myself. Hate it when I get so emotionally involved with a story. Another great chapter. |
| Do teenagers ever make sense? |
| fallen_angel | 06/22/2006 03:54 am |
| i've a lot to catch up on! I hatetravers and feeling a little sorry for Dawn. |
| Yeah, crushes can be hard. Spike knows that too well. |
| sirc | 05/17/2006 01:15 pm |
| great chapter |
| thanks |
| pretty_in_fangs | 05/14/2006 11:17 pm |
| Uh oh. What will Giles and Mouse do when they get back? |
| read on and find out. |
| Robyn | 05/14/2006 02:59 am |
I enjoyed the memory of Dawn and Spike and you showing some of the reason she is being such a pain, of course she is a teenager and it doesn't take much.  Poor Spike I feel so bad for him and now more badness with the man at the end. Thanks for the update. |
| When It rains it pours. Everyone has to learn that just because a love changes, that doesn't mean it stops being love. This is Dawn's journey as well as Buffy and Spike's. |
| Lou | 05/13/2006 07:18 pm |
| Yikes - mega-ghastly Dawn! |
| First crushes can be brutal. Look at how Buffy turned out! LOL |
| pfeifferpack | 05/13/2006 02:15 pm |
Gaaaah....I despise Quentin Travers, always have, but never as much as this story! Run Spike Run.
Excellent update. Poor elephants and in an area they SHOULD be safe too....so terrible that it isn't just fiction either.
Kathleen |
| I know- it's a sad thing. In terms of the story though, it needed to be done. Buffy's gone after Spike, do you think the rest of the animals will be as fair-minded as Spike is, should they happen upon the Slayer? |
| DeanSamWinchesterfan | 05/13/2006 08:40 am |
| Good chapter.Poor Spike.Update soon. |
| working on the next chapter now! |
| pramen | 05/13/2006 04:29 am |
| Great chapter! |
| Thanks! |
| Miss Rose | 05/12/2006 11:52 pm |
| I liked Dawn's flashback. Even though she's being a major brat, I can understand where she's coming from. I'm glad Panya and Giles slipped away to get supplies, maybe they can help thwart camouflage guy's evil plans. Great chapter! |
| You know somthing Rose? I think you're right. ;-) |
| Tamara | 05/12/2006 11:37 pm |
| I'm thinking that guy is from the council or the Initative. Either one of them would want Spike and neither one is good news. |
| Your thinking would be on the money. |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 05/12/2006 11:17 pm |
| Crap!!! She didn't realize who Mouse was, and now they are targets for the Council. Crap Crap Crap!!! more soon please. |
| I'm with you on that. I'll see your "Oh crap!" and raise you an "Oh, &%@$!!!" |
| kim | 05/12/2006 08:22 pm |
Buffy, how hard is it to say it was the elephants? Ugh....is there a brain in there?
And dude with the night-vision goggles - go away! Well, if he's a mere human, then he won't be able to keep up with them.
And damnit! Lydia's telegram was spotted. Blast...
You captured the teen angst well...still such a little girl. |
| Elephants or humans, considering Spike is having a hard time with the idea of hurting a *Bat*, do you think it would help him to know that? And there could be more than one nasty guy waiting out there in the dark...HMMM. |
