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| Something Borrowed by Thursday Next |
| Chapter: 1-3 |
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| Verda | 07/06/2006 08:15 pm |
| Really cute story, love how they can't keep their hands off each other. With Spike' toe curling kisses Riley doesn't have a chance. Thanks for the entertaining read. |
| Richard | 07/03/2006 09:08 pm |
| You do write brilliant dialogue. |
| Richard | 07/03/2006 08:59 pm |
The story is fairly interesting except for the annoying bit where Buffy & Co fail to punch Riley's lights out, tie him to a chair and torture him until he talks.
It's a failing when a writer knows what happened in canon without understanding why it happened. In canon, Buffy told Riley about being the Slayer since it endangered only herself, Riley was her boyfriend, and Buffy has a hole in her head where boyfriends are concerned.
Long story short, none of the reasons why Buffy felt safe to spill the beans in canon apply in this story, which makes her doing so in this story extremely unrealistic. All the time I was reading them, I kept waiting for Buffy to punch Riley's lights out, tie him to a chair and have him tortured until he talks. |
| wall_flower | 05/25/2006 01:42 pm |
| Superb. The right mix of hillarious one-liners and romantic smile-y-ness. Veryvery cute and succeeding in making me chuckle regularly. I like that Xander called the pair of them 'cute' :]] *goes off to read the next chapter* |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 05/25/2006 08:55 am |
| I love the banter! |
| sirc | 05/19/2006 01:47 pm |
This fic is a bit familiar. You wouldn't have happened to post it on the old BS Central, now would you? 
I like it, by the way |
| MarzBar | 05/18/2006 11:31 pm |
| This is an interesting take on the marriage spell. Will Spike actually get out of town? That would seriously distress Buffy and she wouldn't even be able to tell anybody why. More story please. |
| Spikez_tart | 05/18/2006 08:49 pm |
| ROFLMAO. This is outrageously funny. I love having Willy the Snitch as one of their witnesses. Heh heh. And, why is that idiot Spike still sleeping in the bathtub? |
| vladt | 05/18/2006 07:19 pm |
| entertaining read, thanks |
| Robyn | 05/18/2006 03:09 am |
| You got the back and forth of Spike's and Buffy's relationship beautifully. You also got her gift of denial down. I like that even though there are feelings on both sides Spike is still the one to admit to things first, or tried to. I am really enjoying this fic and am looking forward to the next update. |
| Thank you! It is a little rough around the edges soince it was my first fic from way back but I'm quite fond of it |
