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| Yellow Brick Road - Book I: Cupidity by Holly |
| Chapter: Part Six |
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| Athenewolfe | 06/06/2006 02:02 pm |
| good chappie I am really enjoying this story! |
| btvsfreak@yahoo.com | 05/28/2006 11:55 pm |
Wow.....
....I think I'm gonna need a moment alone.
Wow..... |
| Morrigan | 05/21/2006 05:00 am |
| Whoo! That was hot! Great chapter. |
| sirc | 05/20/2006 03:21 am |
| great chapter |
| Robyn | 05/20/2006 01:19 am |
This chapter was so hot and Miss Bitch and Mr. Sensitive Big Bad were in top form. I really enjoyed this update, thanks.  |
| vladt | 05/19/2006 09:13 pm |
| excellent read, thank you |
| delusional_harm | 05/19/2006 01:06 pm |
| Excellent update. It was beautiful, enjoyed it so far. And I feel like this is gonna be my favorite fic ever after a few chapters =) |
| Onyx | 05/19/2006 12:36 pm |
P-P-P-POW! ^__^
wow...I'm loving this. |
| Thursday Next | 05/19/2006 11:43 am |
| This may be an unpopular view, but I think I liked it better before...cruder doesn't necessarily mean hotter...it's still a fantastic story, though. |
My intent wasn't to make it cruder, and that's hardly the only thing I've done to it. I've cleaned up the language considerably and attempted to strengthen the characterizations. In the process, it might have become a bit "cruder," but at the same time, their relationship is fairly crude at this point. This was/is the first time I've really written Buffy and Spike without palpable affection between them.
I understand what you're saying, though. Thanks for your input. I was prepared for some people to not like the rewrite.  |
| jl1980 | 05/19/2006 07:53 am |
| so did she just get her strength back there? wonderful, sexy update! loved it |
| Pin | 05/19/2006 07:27 am |
| Wow....you write the most amazing passion. Wow. |
| pfeifferpack | 05/19/2006 07:21 am |
Oh yeah......MUCH more in keeping with the rating now *G*. Off to shower now!
Kathleen |
| kim | 05/19/2006 06:41 am |
| Well, that was a unique experience...thanking her for the scream...that's just funny... |
| redwulf50 | 05/19/2006 05:20 am |
| Bloody Excellent fic it is |
