Creep by Megan_Tam
Chapter: Two
 
Verda07/30/2006 11:22 pm
Nice rewrite, liked your version better. Thanks for the read.
redwulf5007/19/2006 06:59 pm
hmmmmmm, damn good chappie, but is their more anywhere??? *Looks under computer*
Araedhel07/17/2006 07:38 am
I love your story so far. Please write more.
sirc06/11/2006 01:01 pm
great chapter
deedo06/10/2006 07:51 am
nice turn of events, can't wait for more
Lou06/07/2006 11:43 am
"Please, no..." Shurely shome mishtake> "Please, yes..."
LMAO
Athenewolfe06/02/2006 06:29 pm
oh yeah me likey this story! Nice writing girls!
thanks! *hugglez*
vladt06/01/2006 03:31 pm
wonderful chapter. thanks for the fun read.
thanks glad you enjoyed it
Elizabeth Anne Summers05/31/2006 12:51 am
Heehee, cute... and can we kill harmony soon?
not really sure that's where we're headed with this one, but we'll think about it lol
Jackofspikes05/30/2006 06:17 pm
absolutely brilliant. The same but with just the rigt amount of variation to make the chapter work. Love it...more please.
glad you think so LOL *hugz* thanks sweetpea!
Robyn05/30/2006 05:06 pm
I love how you made use of this episode. Thanks for the lovely update.
You're very welcome and I'm happy you enjoyed it
~*~Tasha~*~05/30/2006 02:26 pm
Nice way to rewrite those scenes to fit this fic. I love this one.
i was kinda antsy about this one LOL
slinkypsychokit05/30/2006 01:22 pm
Fun, fast-paced and scorchingly hot! Yeah, I'm totally loving this fic!
oh good! i was wondering when you were going to find us LOL
pfeifferpack05/30/2006 12:51 pm
"Visions of him crawling all over her body while giving her a tongue-bath a cat would envy sent her heart rate through the roof. "

Me too sister!

Lovely hot continuance......keep it up (not originally intended as a pun but, hey, it works for me that way too *G*).

THIS is what the world needs more of.....well written PWP! Well, my world at least.

Kathleen
glad to know we live in the same happy world lol thank you kathleen, you always leave the most wonderful reviews!
UncagedMuse05/30/2006 12:51 pm
Love the way Buffy can't help but be distracted by Spike. Who could resist? LOL More!
your wish is my command sweetie LOL
Opal05/30/2006 09:15 am
I love this fic so far. First chappie was funny, I forgot all about chinese sunburns!
so did I LOL
gotkona05/30/2006 08:30 am
Very nice. Definitely like your version better then the real one. HEHE
thanks! i was afraid it read too much like the script LOL
Niamh05/30/2006 08:25 am
*snickers* Love this little look. . . . . is there more? Please tell me there's more. . . .
oh yep there's more
jl198005/30/2006 07:48 am
love the twist on the actual episode...very nicely done...very sexy...can't wait to see what happens next
neither can we! LOL neither one of us work from an outline, we just start sending stuff back and forth thru IM's and hope for the best!

so glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!
Karyn05/30/2006 07:02 am
hee! I love it, just the right amount of snark and lusties! And wow, you'd almost think Harm had the gift of sight or insight...or hell just plain eyeballs. *grin*
if she only had a brain...

LMAO

Thanks Kar!
maryperk05/30/2006 06:43 am
Good chapter!
Thanks!!
redwulf5005/30/2006 05:21 am
lol, pooor Spike, should have just killed the bint
don't make me get my newspaper after you pup