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| The Worlds Revolve by Dark Eyed Seer |
| Chapter: Two Sides of the Coin |
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| VWalk | 06/15/2006 09:46 pm |
You've painted such a clear picture of William's life. Really incredible.
I can't wait to see how this ties in with how (and why?) he killed the two slayers. (That was the original question right?)
Love the story. Looking forward to more. |
| sirc | 06/14/2006 01:41 pm |
Great chapter 
I noticed an error concerning William's age. In the last chapter, William is nine in 1862. In this chapter, he is twelve on the year 1869. Taking the dates as facts he should be either 16 in this chapter or 5 in the previous one. I'm not trying to tell you how to write your own story, that is not my intention, I just thought IŽd bring this to your notice. ... Reading on, I notice that it seems to be the dates that have gone wrong, instead of Williams age.. Sorry about rambling. |
| jl1980 | 06/10/2006 07:38 pm |
| man, he's been through so much, so much emotional damage...explains a lot of what's happened in the story so far, and the last one excellent chapter |
| D.K. | 06/08/2006 08:45 pm |
| Don't you dare stop writing. This story has more merit than the show did. I am enjoying the rewrite, you delve where the writers didn't. Fleshes out Spike and Buffy to more believable characters. Keep on submitting chapters. Thanks! |
| vladt | 06/03/2006 11:16 pm |
| thanks for a very good read. not the usual backstory for william. you tell yours wonderfully. hope rl becomes, if not comfortable, at least manageable. i escape the rl by reading well crafted tales such as yours. |
| Spikes Slayer2 | 06/02/2006 09:09 pm |
| oh my.. please continue with this story i like hearing about williams past.. |
| Pierrie | 06/02/2006 11:55 am |
Usually when a fanfiction seems interesting, I copy it on my computer until it's completed and then I read it.
I make exceptions when it seems to be specially good to my taste.
I did it with Sympathy for the Devil by ComedyofErrors. And I am doing it with In Fire and Blood by Kallysten and I'm doing it with The Worlds Revolve.
So don't evsluate your work with the reviews even if it's tempting.
Please keep ut the good work.
I also wish that your life is a little easier now.
In ending, I want to say that the chapter 7 has bothered me. I fear what is coming.
savard.p@videotron.ca |
| Pin | 06/02/2006 08:04 am |
| Very interesting background story. Its a version that I wouldn't have imagined. Thanks. |
| SpaceLord | 06/02/2006 03:17 am |
Oh I just love this rich background story of William, it's one of the most thought out ones I've ever read and I really love it.
As for the song....I don't know but I'm guessing Hellacopters....if it isn't then there is somethign wrong |
| SpaceLord | 06/02/2006 03:16 am |
Oh I just love this rich background story of William, it's one of the most thought out ones I've ever read and I really love it.
As for the song....I don't know but I'm guessing Hellacopters....if it isn't then there is somethign wrong |
| Dreylin | 06/02/2006 02:14 am |
| Fascinating backstory. I want more. Original enough to be interesting, and familiar enough to be comfortable. |
| Tonia | 06/02/2006 02:10 am |
| Wonderful chapter! I hope things start getting better for you. As for your challenge, I know that ch.3 is from Guns N Roses. (Appetite For Destruction) I can hear the song for ch.4 but I can't remeber who sang it. |
