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| Paradox by Jackofspikes |
| Chapter: Chapter 34 |
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| Verda | 07/15/2006 07:14 am |
| You never cease to amaze me. That description of Williams wings gave me goose bumps. He's gonna need that money to pay for the shirts he's gonna ruin. Go Dawn, love what she said to Angel. Amazing chapter. |
Thank you, I like writing Dawn  |
| DarkBloodyMistress | 07/15/2006 02:48 am |
| i'm glad that the younger couple is getting closer faster |
They don't have the baggage of the older couple, that makes it easier.  |
| sirc | 06/14/2006 01:07 pm |
| great chapter |
| Thank you |
| vladt | 06/04/2006 12:21 pm |
| angel is so wrapped up in himself that he has no clue. great scene, with first, buffy, then dawn and joyce, telling him,enough. fine tale, thanks for the read. |
| He will be told again |
| Robyn | 06/03/2006 07:50 pm |
| I loved the Angel scene both with Buffy and then with Dawn and Joyce. I love that Buffy informed him that he wasn’t invited to the meeting and then when Joyce talked to him how she informed him that he wasn’t trusted to take care of Buffy. And the ending was so sweet with Buffy calming Spike. Thanks for the update, it was really great. |
| Thank you for your very kind words |
| kim | 06/03/2006 06:48 am |
Just caught up. I was out all day for my birthday.
Cool - Buffy has already accepted Spike...he's so cute when he's growly and protective.
Silly Angel. They handled him pretty well. Go Joyce.
Love the wings...I was leaning towards angel wings. |
| Happy birthday Kim...I hope you had a blast |
| Delicia | 06/03/2006 04:15 am |
| Yay! This chapter was wonderful! I want to cast my vote again for the dust-Angel front! He's being such a dope (nothing new there)! I love how you had Buffy calm Spike, that was so sweet! |
| Angel is still needed for a little while at least ...sorry |
| Ella | 06/03/2006 02:27 am |
| Can you end our torment and kill Angel already? Please? :pout Joyce? Dawn? Anyone? |
| Sorry...still need him |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 06/03/2006 01:57 am |
| Heehee, go away poofter, lol |
| Until we want you to come back |
| Kimberly Adams | 06/02/2006 09:22 pm |
I love this story!!!!! I want more more more and can't wait for the updates. Please email me with notification at linnea2sweet@yahoo.com. I will then review and tell you how much I love each new chapter!!!
This story is awesome and I have laughed and cried so many times. When younger spike asked senior spike if "will it get better? will this one love us?" Tears filled my eyes and I had to cover my face. So touching and sweet.
Of course I also love the Angel Bashing =) He really is a poncy wanker, mate...uh oh, channeling spike...
Kim Adams |
| Kimberly, I wish I could promise to let you know about my updates, but I have a terrible memory...I'm sorry. I will tell you that I update as often as I can and that at the moment that is about once or twice a week. I thank you for mentioning one of my favorite lines. |
| letitia | 06/02/2006 08:42 pm |
| Go Buffy and Dawn for putting Angel in his place. He should really know better than to go up against Joyce... And great to see Buffy (young one) comforting Spike. |
| Angel has some hard lessons to learn |
| Bite_Me | 06/02/2006 07:51 pm |
| Fabulous! A bit of Angel bashing and mucho Spuffy action! Loving it! |
| LOL...I'll try to keep it up |
| Irina | 06/02/2006 07:02 pm |
| I really enjoyed the Angel bashing portion of the chapter. What a great description of William's wings. Buffy's thoughts about keeping her crusty older self away from the yummy stud muffin was so funny... lol. Loved the sweet Spuffy ending of the chappie. Fantastic update! |
| Thank you...I kinda like the sweet spuffy stuff myself |
| Jace Nox | 06/02/2006 05:36 pm |
| Awe, so sweet. I like young Buffy cause she isn't blinded and Joan is feeling the changes as well. YAY! |
| Young Buffy is smarter than people give her credit for |
| Shelly | 06/02/2006 03:54 pm |
| This just keeps getting better with each chapter!! There are too few fics out there that Angel bash as well as you are able to do with each of your fics. I have always thought Angel was a bit too enamoured with himself and his position in life, or unlife. Keep them coming!!! |
| I don't actually set out to bash him, just write him as I see him and wish the other's had seen him. I'm glad that you are enjoying it |
| Athenewolfe | 06/02/2006 03:53 pm |
| lovely! more more! |
| It is coming...soon |
| Pin | 06/02/2006 03:40 pm |
| Great Chapter! I love how you present all of the versions of the characters. Angel in denial land is a hoot! Thanks! |
| Thank you...You have no idea how much that mean to me |
| Emilee | 06/02/2006 02:15 pm |
| God Angel can just be so THICK sometimes. But, ooh bonus points for the sexy growling from S2 Spike + angel wings on S6 Spike. Verrry nice. |
| Only sometimes? |
| Karyn | 06/02/2006 02:09 pm |
| omg!! that was awesome! sigh, loved younger buffy and spikes reactions...beautiful! |
| Thank you sweetie, you are always helping me |
| SpaceLord | 06/02/2006 02:07 pm |
This story sure is Angel bashing friendly
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| Yup...but then...I like it like that |
| golddrake | 06/02/2006 01:07 pm |
| another great chapter. |
| you are too kind |
| hotlipedjen | 06/02/2006 12:25 pm |
| Just started reading the story and wow is it good! Look forward to reading more. |
| Thank you so much |
| Kat | 06/02/2006 12:23 pm |
| They should just kill angel he is totally not getting the point. goodness lol. great chapter |
| Give him time to learn the point and then not get it |
| Harry 4Eyes | 06/02/2006 12:22 pm |
OMG He's not a fairy, he's an Angel!!!! Someone should call him that, see if he turns all growly (growly? OK definitely need to cut back on the Buffy fics). Better yet he should play a prank on Angel, disguise himself slightly and tell him he has been found guilt of plagerising the Angel name and discrediting their race and has to be punished...wonder if Vampires can pee themselves? So did you get the whole wings idea from X-men?
OK so we now have a seriously pissed of Vampire, a seriously delusional and pissed off brooding vampire and then we have the Angel Vampire who's going to have to start buying them cheap quality T-shirts and go for anew look because that duster will sooo clash with the wings.
Seem like the votes are in and Angel has been voted off the show.
Well loving it
Update Soon
Harry.
P.S. Thank you for the offer, but i'll stick to reading, I much prefer the coming up with idea's and speculating part. I'm way too lazy to write fanfic. |
| I haven't seen X-men three so...No! lol Then you send me the bunnies and I'll write em! |
| maryperk | 06/02/2006 12:06 pm |
| Great chapter, Jack. |
| thank you sweetness |
