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| Beloved in Blood by Ameeya |
| Chapter: Chapter 3 |
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| Athenewolfe | 06/15/2006 07:35 am |
| I do wonder what will happen when they wake up. Very interesting story! |
| Verda | 06/12/2006 07:24 pm |
| WOW!!! Loved it! Loved how he only wanted to comfort and calm her. Gotta read more. |
| Spikez_tart | 06/09/2006 02:06 pm |
| That was intensley weird, creepy, evil and funny all at once. I loved it. I like evil Spike. He's so much better than sappy, puppy dog Spike. |
| Bridget | 06/07/2006 02:43 pm |
| Well written chapter. I don't like noncon either. Fortunately, it wasn't very violent. I feel bad for Buffy because of her body's reaction and her head's reaction during this encounter. It will be interesting to read how you will handle both Spike's and Buffy's reaction when Spike sobers up. Also, it will be interesting to read how Buffy will react to the claim that she so flippantly acknowledged. I hope this is the last of Spike's drunkeness because that is not really an excuse. Please update soon. |
| Emilee | 06/07/2006 01:07 pm |
| Wow. I'm not entirely sure thats a good wow either, but it's not a bad one. Very well written, the story is definately interesting and I can't wait to read more. Damn, Spike F$@&ED UP this time. I cannot imagine how we're going to get fluffy from this. |
| vladt | 06/07/2006 11:54 am |
| fantastic read. spike is going to have a hell of a wake up. very good read, thanks |
| CutieSaiyajin | 06/07/2006 06:46 am |
I love this story so far, and I can't wait to see where you go with it. Update soon!  |
| dipole_dipole_attraction | 06/06/2006 09:50 pm |
You've struck me as a very promising author.
I also dislike noncon, and my biggest turn-off from a story is when Buffy lets her will be completely compromised when put up against Spike's sexual prowess. I think that you're doing a good job of keeping Buffy true to her character, though, and I can't wait until your next installment! |
| Cewcew | 06/06/2006 07:26 pm |
Boy howdy, its going to be an intresting morning.
Shall be awating another update. |
| Robyn | 06/06/2006 07:13 pm |
| You did this whole situation very well and when Spike realizes what he has done will make for some very interesting times. I found the ending when the demon fully took over trying to comfort his mate very interesting and I really like how you wrote it. Thanks for the update, I enjoyed it. |
| spikeslovebite | 06/06/2006 09:30 am |
quite simply amazing!
*hugz* Tam |
| gotkona | 06/06/2006 08:41 am |
| Ok that was WOW! I can't wait to see what happens when he sobers up. |
| Richard | 06/06/2006 07:51 am |
| Do you have a website with your other stories? I'd enjoy reading them. |
| Richard | 06/06/2006 07:45 am |
Also, one way to play it would have been for Spike to declare he wants revenge on Buffy by ... making her want him.  That might have required less booze. But Spike wanting to show up Drusilla is probably better. It makes for better drunken logic and worse sober logic. So you've left the aftermath wide open.
And did I mention that it's a very tightly written story? That deserves a kudos. |
| Richard | 06/06/2006 07:34 am |
| I'm fanatically against coercion but I didn't squick at this chapter so you've done a couple things right. First, you showed that Spike isn't badly intentioned. Second, that Buffy doesn't know her own mind enough to make any kind of decisions for herself. That would be Buffy's fixation on her trainwreck of a relationship with Angelus. I only just had this insight; that Buffy couldn't kill Angelus because on some level she was trying to continue her relationship with him. Buffy is one messed up monkey. |
| Shanna | 06/06/2006 07:02 am |
| I am enjoying this story. What is going to happen when Spike finally sobers up and realizes that he claimed the Slayer? It will be an interesting ride to see how these two connect after all this. |
| Shanna | 06/06/2006 07:01 am |
| I am enjoying this story. What is going to happen when Spike finally sobers up and realizes that he claimed the Slayer? It will be an interesting ride to see how these two connect after all this. |
| jl1980 | 06/06/2006 06:39 am |
| oh you drunken idiot, spike! this chapter made me a bit mad at him...i could so see how it could have happened with him being drunk and all, but this is gonna make for trouble for them later i think...poor buffy...very well written chapter |
| redwulf50 | 06/06/2006 05:27 am |
| LMAO poor Spike |
| Tamara | 06/06/2006 04:36 am |
I predict morning after freaking out. Especially when they both realize that they are mated.
Great chapter. Definitely the fluffiest non con. |
| hotlipedjen | 06/06/2006 04:32 am |
| Oh wow! Can't wait to see what's next. |
| katakata | 06/06/2006 03:59 am |
Wow, what an update. Horrendous. Stupifying. Stupifyingly horrendous and horrendously stupifying. This bit in particular got me -
Instead, she was terrified of herself. She’d just experienced something that women dreaded, and she’d enjoyed it. God, she was disgusting.
My heart aches for Buffy. Please don't let her be broken, and more soon please. Oh btw - what the HELL is Spike gonna do when he wakes up IN Buffy let alone WITH Buffy?!?! The mind boggles. |
