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| Breaking Down the Walls by araedhel |
| Chapter: Chapter 6 |
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| Verda | 07/26/2006 03:13 am |
| Love that you've put the "ex's" in the same chapter, because it was a great line you gave to Spike. The story still feels a bit rushed, but I'm still enjoying it. |
| Thanks for the review! |
| sirc | 06/14/2006 02:22 pm |
It seems that you are trying to reach some place very quickly, (maybe the ending?) thus making the writing suffer a little. Could you slow down a bit, please? Also, I noticed that you have switched Riley for Reilly in quite a few places in this chapter. Not all but many.
I really like your story, don't make this review make you think otherwise. It is just that while the story, the meaning behind the writing, is very good, your writing itself need some work. |
| Thanks for the review. I really appreciate hearing how I'm doing. I always love to read your reviews. They help me to correct the mistakes in my story and improve it. Please keep writing them. |
| Lou | 06/08/2006 07:44 am |
| Nice comeback, Buffy! |
| Thanks for the review. I really appreciate hearing how I'm doing. |
| Cewcew | 06/07/2006 09:56 pm |
| More! PLease, I'm so enjoying this read. |
| Thanks for the review. I really appreciate hearing how I'm doing. |
| vladt | 06/07/2006 07:24 pm |
| great chapter. that was a fun read. thanks |
| Thanks for the review. I really appreciate hearing how I'm doing. |
| Robyn | 06/07/2006 06:07 pm |
| I love that she realized how she really felt about Spike and that she believed in Spike with the demon eggs. I always hated that she never questioned Riley or his information. Thanks for the update. |
| Thanks for the review. |
| Bridget | 06/07/2006 02:24 pm |
| I like this chapter much better than the actual episode. Good job. |
| Thanks for the review. I really appreciate hearing how I'm doing. |
