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| Broken by Athenewolfe |
| Chapter: Broken |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 07/16/2006 04:03 pm |
| Wow, Steph. Catching up, and I know I read this before but there isn't a review here. This is just wow. |
| Thank you Tasha - I am glad you liked Broken - I have to admit I liked writing it - course I realy love the dark fic... just makes me think what if... |
| GoldenBuffy | 06/09/2006 10:26 pm |
| Whoa! Can I say, wow. Really sucked me in! |
| Verda | 06/09/2006 07:57 pm |
| WOW! that was dark, powerful and so sad and what else could he do? Evn in his darkest hour, he still thinks of only her. Loved it! |
| Tonia | 06/09/2006 08:38 am |
That was raw. Stark, bleak, and raw. Damn good too.
Now I need to go read some smut to feel better. ;)
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| Smokescreen | 06/08/2006 10:03 pm |
Omg...that's so sad. piercing... you've captured the "what-if" perfectly. if that had really happened...omg...
good work  nice rhythm and flow of words. |
| Ariel Dawn | 06/08/2006 09:39 pm |
| wow, that was powerful...good job! |
| Always_jbj | 06/08/2006 07:57 pm |
| Wow! Very dark... and VERY good. Thanks |
| Spikez_tart | 06/08/2006 07:44 pm |
| Very angsty AW. Hope there's more. Not sure Spike wouldn't have dusted himself if he'd actually raped her. |
| jl1980 | 06/08/2006 05:14 pm |
| oh my gosh...that is so very powerful...dark but very well written and moving...i have no other words...this is incredible |
| nat | 06/08/2006 04:01 pm |
| Loved this! It would make a great beginning to a much longer fic. I just want to know more. |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 06/08/2006 02:26 pm |
| Ohhhh that is so saaaad |
| Morrigan | 06/08/2006 12:44 pm |
| Uh! That was utterly gut wrenching. Just... wow. |
| Kat | 06/08/2006 11:25 am |
| yikes yes that was dark. yet somehow moving. it was written really well. it kinda made my heart jump into my chest |
| spikeslovebite | 06/08/2006 10:40 am |
| GAH! *runs and hides* powerful ficcie hun! *hugz* |
| ms clawdia | 06/08/2006 10:21 am |
| Jesus! |
| UncagedMuse | 06/08/2006 10:20 am |
| *sobs* Excellent piece. Perfect in its darkness. |
| thank you sweetie! I am glad that you liked broken! *hugs you* |
| Robyn | 06/08/2006 09:11 am |
| Heartbreaking and oh so well done. You managed so much with so little. |
| Thank you Robyn, I am glad that you enjoyed Broken. *hugs* |
| Maddy | 06/08/2006 08:22 am |
Awesome... the best dark fic i read in a long long time.
At first I felt like there should be a continuation. But after a thought... no. It's better this way.
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| thank you - I am glad that you liked it :-) *blushes* |
| wall_flower | 06/08/2006 08:20 am |
| Scary, but so sad. Poor Spike, his lack of restraint finally caused him to lose his mind. Achingly wistful. |
| Thank you - I am glad that you liked it. I am having a lot of fun with my prompt table for dark fics. Just must be my twisted mind. |
