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| Broken by Athenewolfe |
| Chapter: Ravished |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 07/16/2006 04:04 pm |
| Dark, but well written. It always frustrated me about Buffy because she would say no and mean yes. No should mean no. How is a person to know when you actually mean it if you play this yes/no game all the time before. I can see how it would have basically driven Spike insane to know that he'd actually hurt her. |
| Thanks Tasha - I am glad that you found Ravished to be good. I always thought in a similar vein... kept wanting to explain to Buffy the concept of a safe word to her. I do think Spike would have broken himself if he had hurt Buffy so glad you see things similarly *HUGS* |
| vladt | 06/13/2006 12:28 am |
| dark and sad, but beautiful. love it. thanks for the great read. |
| Maddy | 06/12/2006 05:59 am |
That's so heartbreaking. But beautiful in it's darkness.
Great writing. So many emotions in not so many words. |
| Tonia | 06/11/2006 07:35 am |
| I just got an image of an insane Spike gently brushing a catatonic Buffy. Very sad and bittersweet image. Well done. |
| deedo | 06/10/2006 03:25 pm |
it's kinda depressing  but nevertheless excellently written |
| GoldenBuffy | 06/09/2006 10:29 pm |
The man vs. the demon, which one truly won? Or did they both lose in the end, have they lost Buffy for good?
Can't wait for more. |
| Robyn | 06/09/2006 08:12 pm |
| This is darkly beautiful, the last two lines in particular. You’ve done another excellent job. |
| Verda | 06/09/2006 08:08 pm |
| That was great! As much as he struggles, sometimes you just can't win but he will always love her. That's the tragedy that is Spike! |
| delusional_harm | 06/09/2006 07:44 pm |
| Whoa! Best angst I've read in years.. Great job with just two drabble. |
| jl1980 | 06/09/2006 07:37 pm |
whoa...again very powerful though very dark...this would make an interesting little series of drabbles, please keep it up  love it |
| UncagedMuse | 06/09/2006 03:42 pm |
| Beautiful in its pain! |
| Spikez_tart | 06/09/2006 02:29 pm |
| This is too heartbreaking. |
| wall_flower | 06/09/2006 02:29 pm |
| Tragic. But incredible. Your originality astounds me. |
| spufette | 06/09/2006 02:23 pm |
this is so sad, but you know i think it is something Joss would have explored had he gone ahead and allowed the inevitable to happen.
I have always felt that Spike would have claimed
Buffy if he had gone ahead and raped her. Turn her? Maybe, but claimed her yes.
Sad but very touching.
spuf |
