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| This World That Bleeds by LadyYashka |
| Chapter: Prologue: War Pigs |
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| vladt | 06/17/2006 12:42 am |
| "How could she have been so blind?" that is rhetorical? very good beginning, thanks for the read. |
| wall_flower | 06/16/2006 12:35 pm |
| Wonderful start- Great narrative hook. I'm so gripped! |
| jl1980 | 06/13/2006 12:06 am |
interesting intro...wonder where you're going with this...can't wait to see  |
| Thanks! I did post the first chapter at the same time as the prologue but it's not up yet. The second was just posted now. So hopefully they will show up. =) |