This World That Bleeds by LadyYashka
Chapter: Prologue: War Pigs
 
vladt06/17/2006 12:42 am
"How could she have been so blind?" that is rhetorical? very good beginning, thanks for the read.
wall_flower06/16/2006 12:35 pm
Wonderful start- Great narrative hook. I'm so gripped!
jl198006/13/2006 12:06 am
interesting intro...wonder where you're going with this...can't wait to see
Thanks! I did post the first chapter at the same time as the prologue but it's not up yet. The second was just posted now. So hopefully they will show up. =)